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Ek din tera hojaon ga{SaLekh FF}Part 50 page 91 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: pankhi

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Very sweet intro dear πŸ‘Nice charatcter sketch. AALEKH is cool..handsome..man ☺️. SADI si also very preety but.....?????she ius AALEKH's cousin 😲. Amd RAHUL....???This KMH...??kaha se aur kyun?? SADI loves him.....but nice intro. I likeit. 😳

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Wow FF start with SADI's B'day πŸ₯³. And AALEKH's nervousness...he was so nervous to call SADI...he calls TINA 2 ask whether he should call to SADI or not πŸ˜†. But finally he wished her. And SADI's reply when he said I was busy that GF ke saath baat kar rahe the kya was so good and funnyπŸ˜†.Poor AALEKH ke dil par kya bit rahi hogi us waqt .

very nice FF dear. Well edited. I like it. keep it onπŸ‘πŸΌ.



Sorry for late comment. I was not in FORUM. Very soon I will raed ur rest of FF and give comment. Sorrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 4 late reply😊



thankuu so0o much dear 4 liking it 😊 i'll wait 4 ur comment when u'll read rest.. yaeh sadhna is alekh's cousin..actually i wanted it to make a bit diffrent from d actual chatarcters as they r from bidaai.. so i thought to make them cousinz n alekh likes her 4m chilhood..so it'll have sumthing in future πŸ˜†   πŸ˜ƒ
hope u'll like my FF as it progresses πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Alekh mom called sadhna mom that they want sadhna to choose her engagemnt ring so they will pick her. Sadhna mom's agrees
sadhna is getting ready quickly as she already late n car is abt to come
car arrives n keep horns *peep peep*
S: ohh God car bhi agai..uff ye bangle upper kyun nahi char raha
*beep beep*
S: arahi hon arahi hon
sadhna is walking to d door n while walking shez iz trying to wear her sandlaz
S:uff yeh sandalzz

Alekh who waz standing outside d car,heard sadhna voice n turrned around....
she saw a angel in white.. wearing beautiful white dress cuming his way..keep keep on staring her n smiling as she is keep on saying "kia musibat hai" " yeh sadnalz na"

sadhna is trying to wearing her sandalz n sayz
S: yeh khala ka driver na..poochti hon usey.. 2 min wait nahi kar sakta (she luks up n suddenly stops as she sees alekh standing in front of her smilingly)

S: tum?
A: jee mei.. ap ka driver hazir hai.. ap kuch kehna chah rahi thi(he asks naughtingly)
S: nahi kuch nahi
A: nahi bolo bolo... mei bechara ap ka driver,kab se ap ka wait (at tiz sadhna cuts hm)
S: driverrrrrr jee.... kab se kia.. 2 min wait nahi kar saktey they ap
A: kyun 2 min kyun?
S: kyun k mei tayyar horahi thi
A: ohh sorry sorry sadhna jee... ainda se ap ka yeh driver ap ko itna distrubed nahi karega..wait karlega
S: hmm hmm theek hai.. jao driver jao..tumhey maaf kia... kya yad rakho ge (at tiz sadhna laughs out loud)

Alekh becomes happy to see sadhna like tiz

A:hastey huwy achii lagti ho

sadhna smiles vanishes

A: kia huwa?
S:kuch nahi..chaley

A: haan sure

alekh opens d door for sadhna n they both sitz in d car.
in car alekh keep on staring sadhna who is not uttering a word

signal turns red

A:sadhna
S:haan
A:tum theek ho na?
S: haan
A:ek dum se..kia huwa?
S: kuch nahi..
S:aj na janey kitney dino bad itna khul k hasi hon mei
A: to hasti raha karo na
at tiz sadhna lukz uotside d window

A:sadhna,,,mei tumhey hamesha khush rakhon ga
at tiz sadhna turns his face to alekh
A:i promise (he nodz his head)
both had a eye lock
signal turns red n cars behind them started beeping

they break their eyelock n mov on
they finally reached d jewellery shop

A: mom andar shop mei hai..
S: to kia tum nahi arahey
A: nahi mei tumhey bus pick karney hi aya tha
S: achaa..thori dair ajatey
A: nahi its ok.. u now go.mom must b waiting 4 u
S:ok..thanxx.. c u dan
A: yeah... bye
S: byee
sadhna moves out of d car n going through d shop.. alekh in car hoping that she mite luk him baq..but again she didnt

alekh thinkz...i think i should talk to sadhna..mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai k wo shayd yeh shadi karna hi nahi chahti

Sadhna inside jewel shop

AM: ao beta
S: hello aunty
AM give her blessingz

AM: beta wheres alekh
S: wo to chala gaya
AM: chala gaya?
S: jee
AM: per wo to kab se wait kar raha tha ring lene k liye..aisey kasiey chala gaya

sadhna wonders that alekh said that he came to pick her only

AM: chalo koi baat nahi...tum aoo ringz dekho

Precap: Alekh is going to canada for business meeting n want to talk to sadhna before going there but in vain
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Posted: 13 years ago
great chapter,
I feel sad for alekh whenever sadhna stops smiling, he feels her indecision regarding this wedding...
I hope in the next chapter, when he goes abroad, sadhna misses him and thus secures her feelings towards him...
 
anyways good job, waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice..keep up the good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: saathiya93

great chapter,

Ifeel sad for alekh whenever sadhna stops smiling, he feels her indecision regarding this wedding...

I hope in the next chapter, when he goes abroad, sadhna misses him and thus secures her feelings towards him...


anyways good job, waiting for the next part



thanxx alot dear πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Omshanti1111

very nice..keep up the good work


thanxx alot πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10
Alekh is in his room thinking that sadhna behoviour is bit starnge.. i knw that she loved rahul n but i thougt that she moved on n said yes to tiz wedding by her own will but now i think theres sumthing wrong i must talk to sadhna


alekh ph ringz...its from ofc. they want alekh to attend a conference at canada n went there for two dayz
it waz really imp that alekh have to go

A: do din... wapas atey to enagagemt mei ziyada time nahi bach paye ga... mujhe janey se pehely hi sadhna se mil kar baat karni pare gi

alekh phs her
A:hi sadhna
S:hi alekh
A:mujhe tum se kuch baat karni thi..kia hum mil saktey hai
S:baat to mujhe bhi karni hai.. per abhi to mei bahar ho mom k saath..phir wapasi mei mamo k ghar jana hai. late hojaye ga. hum kal baat kar lenege
A: nahi mei kal ja raha ho canada for 2 dayz
S: canada?
A: haan conference hai.. i need to talk to u aj... mei subha ki flite se chala jaon ga.i wont b able to talk
S: aj to mushkil hai.. achaa tum kaho
A: sadhna kia tum...
at tiz sadhna mom calls her
S: aii maa
S:alekh mom is calling..i have to rush... hum phir karlenge baat
A: haan per sadhna
S: tum apan khayal rakhna buhat
A: OK..tum bhi
sadhnaa mom calls her again 'sadhna'
S:haan arahi hon maa
A: tum jao
S: haan ok.. bye
A: bye

Next day before going to airport Alekh is trying to call sadhna but her ph iz bz..
in d car he again call her..after 2 3 tries finally sadhna receives d ph
A:sadhna
S: haan alekh sorry wo mamo k agra se aney ki waja se kafi bz hogai thi
A:ok meri flite hia thori dair mei.. mei airport ja raha hon. kia tum...kia tum airport aa sakti ho

sadhan keeps d silence

A:plzz.. mei jo tum se kehna chahta hon wo shyad wapas aa k buhta dair na hojaye..

S:alekh per
A: plzz sadhna
after sumtime
S:ok mei arahi hon
A: thnz.. mei wait kar rah hon

at airport sadhna cumz but there waz so crowd that sadhna didnt find alekh there.. so she called him
S:alekh am here.. tum kahan ho
alekh saw her n cumz rite behind her
A: murr k dekho tumhare pass hi hon

sadhna turnz n find alekh standing rite behind close to her
S: ohh
A: achaa huwa tum agai sadhna
S: sub theek haina
A: sadhna kia tum yeh shadi zabardasti kar rahi ho?
sadhna luks at himm surprisingly
A: mujhe aisa kyun feel horaha hai k tum shayad mujh se durr rehney ki koshish kar rahi ho ya phir
S: nahi alekh aisi koi baat nahi
A:phir tum khush kyun nahi ho
sadhna keeps d silence

A:sadhna..mei yeh kabhi nahi chahon ga k tum kisi bhi pressure mei aa k ya kisi majboori k agey aa k yeh shadi karo..mei ne tum se pehely bhi pocha tha n u said k tum ne khud is shadi se haan ki hai
S: haan
A:pr tum phir bhi khush nahi ho sadhna

sadhna is speechless

A:sadhna tum mujhe bata sakti ho ya tumharey maan mei kia chal raha hai..tum kia chahti ho.. tumharey khushi hi sub kuch hai sahdhna mere liye... ager tum..(pause)
A:ager tum nahi chahti ..to kaho..abhi bhi kuch nahi bigra..mei sub sambhal longa.. i promise.. per tum khush raho mujhe aur kuch nahi chaiye

sadhna just luk at him

A: mei do din k liye canada ja raha hon..tum ab bhi soch lo.. wapas aonga to tumhara decision sunna chahon ga..aur tum jo bhi decision lo gi..mei khushi khushi accept kar longa phir chaiye wo haan wo ya....(he stops)
sadhna lukz at him dan luks dwn

A:ya naa

sadhna luks up

A: i'll respct ur decision

baground voice call all d passenger

A: ab chalta hon...apna khyal rakhna

alekh turns to moves on

S: tum bhi

alekh turns back

S:tum bhi apna khyal rakhna
alekh smiles n leaves

sadhna turns back but dosent leave n think abt wat alekh just said

alekh turns to c sadhna still standing or not... he saw her standing but with her back

alekh turns again n tiz time both turns at same time n saw each other n smiles... alekh wave her n she waved him back with a smile

Precap: sadhna at her room thinking abt all d thing alekh said
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Posted: 13 years ago

πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³~*~reserved~*~😳 πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago
will wait 4 ur comment dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome  chapter!! i luv the canada bit its my fave country cuz michael buble was born ther he's ace! even tho thts gt nothing to do with bidaai but oh well i love the smile n wave bit at the end