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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

HEY...GUYZ...THIS MAH FIRST FF...

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P & H

||Paradise||

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1686279

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INTRODUCTION...
the story starts after 6 yrs leap...
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prem comes to noe bout he havin a girl named chahat...n ash confess to heer dat nothin happened between her n prem...dat nite...heer happy on hearin this...dat prem is innocent...she goes to tell prem but there she sees that prem gettin married...heer gets upset...n cums bck home...
HC MANSION... [ HEER CHAHAT MANSION...]
chahat:mom wht happened??? is everythin ok????
heer:yes my angel...y u r worried bout ur mom [ hiddin her grief n tryin to smile..]
chahat:no mom i can see n sense sumthin is wrong...tell me mom...aap ko meri kasam...
heer:not able to understd...heer says everythin bout prem that her bst frnd prem juneja is her dad...
[ chahat is vry happy on hearin this n wants to meet her dad as soon as possible...but wen heer tells that her dad is gettin married...she cudn't take anymore...she forced heer to cum wid her to juneja mansion...]
JUNEJA MANSION...
lalit:prem kya soch raha hai???
prem: yehi ki heer ne mujhe itni badi baat chupaii...ki meri ek beti hai...
lalit:prem tu iske peche ki wajah [reason] janta hai na...
prem: par bauji...
lalit:prem heer ke pass koi wajah nahi thi...
[ mean while chahat storms into juneja mansion wid heer n goes n hugs prem n cries n says dad for the first time...all shocked but happy...even gay3...]
chahat: papa mujhe sab pata chal gaya ki aap mera papa ho...today i m vry happy...
prem:chahat mujhe aaj bhout khushi ho rahi hai...ki aaj meri beti ne mujhe papa kaha...[ lookin at heer...]
chahat: pata hai papa mom ne mujhe kud bataya...
[ on listenin this everyone shocked...]
lalit:heer tumhne????
heer: bauji mujhe maaf kardiji eeyi...
lalit:kis baat ke liye??
heer:mein aap logon ko intna dukh diya...
lalit:nahi heer...
heer: bauji ma...che saal phele prem aur ash ke bech kuch nahi hua...
[ all shocked...prem cudn't belive his ears...]
heer:haan...kuch nahi hua...kal hi mujhe ash e aake sab bataya...mujhe maaf kardo...prem mein tumhne us galti ki saza di jo tumne nahi kiya...i m sry prem...
[prem goes n hugs heer...everyone happy for prem n heer...]
gay3: bhout hogaya heer...aab se tu humare saath rahe gi...]
kulraj:haan heer...meher also insits... ]
heer agress...
chahat also happy...
PREM N HEER WID CHAHAT IN THEIR ROOM...
prem:chahat beta tum kahan so gi?
chahat:mama papa ke saath...
prem:tik hai...
heer:chahat chalo change karlo...
[ mean while chahat n prem change their clothes...heer arrangin their room...]
chahat:mama mujhe need aarahi hai...
prem:chalo phir so jao...kal skool jana hai na??
[there was no reply frm chahat...prem n heer saw...they saw chahat sleepin on bed peacefully...]
heer:chahat to so gayi...hume bhi sona chahiye...
prem:haan...widout any further discussion prem...sleeps...
heer:i think he is angry on me [thinkin]
MORNIN...
heer:chahat chalo skool jana hai na...
chahat:bas mama thodi der...
heer:chahat...
chahat:mama plz...first u wake up sahil...
[hearin the name sahil heer got shocked...]
mean while prem was in washroom so he cudn't hear anythin...so he wasn't aware of anythin...
heer:chahat wht r u sayin...
chahat:sry mom...
precap:who is sahil...???????????

sry for the mistakes...bad at typin hindi...
wid luv--- divya n sonia[who has helped me a lot]...this FF is to u sonia...thx...]😊
let me noe if u r not there in my PM list...

CHARACTERS:-

PREM JUNEJA:- handsome cute n dashin guy...married to heer...
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HEER MANN / JUNEJA:- married to prem...but has lots of up n downs in her relationshp wid him...
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CHAHAT:- daughter of prem n heer...cute n bubbly...
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SAHIL JUNEJA:- ?????????? SON ON PREM N HEER
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GAYATRI JUNEJA:- prem's mom always cares of her sons n bahus...carin n lovin...
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LALIT JUNEJA:- prem's dad...carin n lovin...loves his grand children a lot...
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PREET JUNEJA: - younger brother of prem...married to heer's small sis..meher...
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MEHER MANN / JUNEJA:- married to preet n younger sis of heer...loves her family a lot...
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AARAV AND GUNGUN JUNEJA:- children of preet n meher...
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HARMAN JUNEJA:-smaller than preet...married to maya...
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MAYA BINDAL / JUNEJA:-wife of harman...loves her husband n kids...
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ARJUN N ARAINA JUNEJA:- children of maya n harman...
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NIHAL MANN:- elder brother of heer n meher...married veera
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VEERA JUNEJA / MANN:- wife of nihal n younger sis of prem preet n harman
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ABHISHEK MANN:- son of nihal n veera...
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KULRAJ GUPTA:- elder sis of juneja's...married to kiran gupta n children ketan n tannu...
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YASH MANN:- smallest n younger brother of heer meher n nihal...who will enter later...
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other character will enter later...
chapter-1 - pg3
chapter-2 - pg5
chapter-3 - pg8
Chapter-4 - pg10
chapter-5 - pg12
chapter-6 - pg14
chapter-7- pg16
chapter-8- pg19
chapter-10- pg24
chapter-11- pg26
chapter-12- pg28
chapter-13- pg32
chapter-14- pg36
chapter-15- pg40
chapter-16- pg45
chapter-17- pg49
chapter-18- pg54
chapter-19- pg60
chapter-20- pg63
chapter-21- pg67
chapter-22- pg71
chapter-23- pg76
chapter-24- pg81
chapter-25- pg86
chapter-26- pg88
chapter-27- pg92
chapter-28- pg96
chapter-29- pg101
chapter-30- pg106
chapter-31- pg110

chapter-32- pg113

here's my other FF...FANNA..
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1435872
Edited by divya4salmanyk - 12 years ago

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sonia7

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Posted: 14 years ago

me first

awesome

i loved it

please continue soon

and dont worry about the help

im so delighted that you dedicated this ff is to me

thank you so much👏

Edited by sonia7 - 14 years ago

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome concept
do continue
but who is sahil????
thnx for pm

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Anisha Jayakumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey just read ur FF.......really loved it.....wonder hw g3 accepted heer sooo fast........wonder who this sahil is.........hope premeer will not have ny problems........pls add me to ur pm list.......hope ul cont sooon.......

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Annwesha

@annwesha09

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice concept !!

liked it very much..

plz add me to ur pm list..

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

PM LIST..................
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sonia7
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anishajk99
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Edited by fireblaze_divya - 14 years ago

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia7
me first
awesome

i loved it

please continue soon

and dont worry about the help

im so delighted that you dedicated this ff is to me

thank you so much👏

u hv help a lot........so this FF is to u...
n thx for the comment once again......

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: annwesha kayal
nice concept !!

liked it very much..

plz add me to ur pm list..

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yeah sure n thx for the comments.....

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anishajk99
hey just read ur FF.......really loved it.....wonder hw g3 accepted heer sooo fast........wonder who this sahil is.........hope premeer will not have ny problems........pls add me to ur pm list.......hope ul cont sooon.......

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thx.....for commentin...yeah sure the nxt part will be upda8ed soon......n bout who is sahil u will come to noe later.............

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samrocking30
awesome concept
do continue
but who is sahil????
thnx for pm

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.sure i will continue.....the nxt upda8 wil be soon..........to noe bout sahil u will hv to keep readin......

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