My Version Of Pavitra Rishta(FF) Preview Page 7 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mitts

seems very interesting cont soon...:D

Originally posted by: devashree_h

Sounds very interesting.Please continue.Will be waiting for the update 😉

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Hi Lekha

 

Wow, so you're up with your own FF! Can't wait to read it!

 

BTW, I must mention one thing. Most of the people simply read FF's but don't comment. So never get discouraged cos of less comments (as you were on the back page). It happens with me too, after every update there are about 500-600 views but only 8-10 comments. At such times I console myself saying they are all silent readers.

 

I'm sure you'll do a good job! Intro sounds interesting. All the best.

My version of Pavitra Rishta Part 1

Contd from Teaser

  Archana was lonlely.... She was heartbroken. Lost and betrayed in love... She was a simple girl with morals that were imbibed in her by her mother

She was thinking about something when her mother   Called for her

Sulochana- Archu come down for dinner dear we need to ask you something

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Archana's POV

That Voice that you heard was my mother's I sometimes wonder  why my  mother is  so hell bent on finding someone for me .. It's high time  she  understands that   I loved someone else and can't bear this   am  I a burden for her???

Sulochana-  Archuuu?? We are waiting  come on dear

Me- Yes ma I am coming

 We all were sitting and silently eating when ma gave me an exciting  news

Sulochana-  Archu  beta kal varsha aur vaishali aane wale  hai  from  New York mai soch rahi thi ki agar tu  jaa unnko pick up karle

Me ' Ma  yeh bhala  poochne waali baat thori hai aur toh aur kal  I will go meet  my friend  bohot  din ho gaye mil ker (smiles faintly)

Sulochana-  hmm  yeh bhi sahi baat hai  ''

Me- mum where has dad gone??? aaj subah se nai dikhe???

Sulochana-   aap ke  papa Delhi gaye hai   for some work

Me - ohk  mai sone jaa rahi hun kal  kitne baje jaana hai??

Sulochana-   subah 10 baje

Me -theek hai ma aap jaa ke  papa se baat kar ke   so jaiye good night mamma (hugging her)

The Next Day

It was A bright I was awake throughout the night thinking how I will Face Varshu Vaishu. They are after all unaware of what happened to me and I never have kept any secrets from my darling sisters

 I being the Punctual One arrived at the airport nearly 10 minutes earlier as it was nearly 4 years since I saw my sweethearts VarShali

(Author's note: -Oh If you're wondering what VarShali is  That was a  nickname that I gave for Varshu Vaishu)

The announcement was made I was scared and excited both at the same time Not knowing what will I say to VarShali.. For the First time in my Life I was Nervous I did not know  what I could  do

My thoughts were cut off and I was really surprised my sweethearts recognized me  

VarShali - Archana diii

 Me -  Typical Gemini's I tell you  I said laughing    You  two have  grown up !!! My My Varshu I think you have grown taller

(VarShali Are twins BTW)

VarShali- Diii let's go home can't wait to see ma

Me - ohk let's go

At home

Me - mum we are home

VarShali -Maaaaa

Sulochana- bas bas relax for a while and then we will talk

Me- Ma I have to go meet my friend jaldi aane ki koshish karungi

I leave home to go to a nearby Coffee Shop where all my friend were waiting

Shreya- What archu  where were you ???

Me - Shreyu  I told u Varshu Vaishu  were coming today na so I went to the airport

We had a cup of coffee each and I headed home ' had to go to office

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I am really sorry for the delay  I was stuck  wid  personal work  and  one of my Grand father had passed away so could not update  yesterday  Sorry  for  the Tardiness

HOPE you Liked it

PRESS THE LIKE TAB PLEASE if  you seriously enjoyed  reading it 

Lekha

Originally posted by: Asther

Grt work Lekha 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Akashspartan

Its a small forum member's and there are lots of silent readers!

 

So don't be disheartened, keep it coming with time u will have the response coming!👍🏼

I really enjoyed ur FF!!!!!

Cheer's mate......👏