Pavitra Rishta

Tumbleweeds ...24th Update.. Pg 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
Piya ... here is the story ...
 
Introduction                          ... Page 3               
 
The Deshmukh Household... Page 5
 
The Deshmukh Household... Page 6
 
A Dark Night                        ...Page 6
 
At the hospital                    ... Page 8
 
Conferring with the doctors ... Page 10
 
Recovery Road                    ... Page 11
 
The Musings of the Mind 1 ... Page 12
 
The Musings of the Mind 2  ... Page 14
 
The Effect                              ... Page 18
 
After 29 days ...                   ... Page 20
 
"Ayi ..."                                ...Page 23
 
Five months later                ...Page 25
 
Homecoming ...                  ...Page 28
 
Startling Encounter             ...Page 31
 
Inopportune Meeting          ...Page 34
 
Clash of Wills                        ...Page 37
 
Docs at work                        ... Page 38 
 
At the Wokout                      ... Page 39/40

I have a dream                    ...Page 41

Decision                                ... Page 42/43 

And onwards                        ...Pg 44
 
Next                                       ...  Pg 45.
 
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Posted: 14 years ago

Well I have decided to write a short story ……. A kind of an FF.  It is detached from the serial but for the characters.  I thought of writing something on the serial itself …….. but it's so humdrum, so I thought of borrowing the characters and concocting my own story.  Hope it's interesting enough for you guys to want to read it. 

 

 

 

Tumbleweeds

 

List of Characters: 

 

Archana Karanjkar is a young lady full of zest and eager to live life to its fullest.  Almost engaged to a handsome young man Suresh, she has everything to look forward to.  One day, on her way to her friend's Mehendi party, there is a freak car accident in which she is crippled.  Her dreams of becoming a professional dancer come to an end. 

 

Suresh is not an example of "Handsome is as handsome does".  He withdraws and leaves the moment Archana offers that they go their respective ways.

 

Sachin Deshmukh is driving the other car in the accident.  He somehow cannot get over his guilt at being inadvertently responsible for Archana's condition.  In reality he is not to be blamed, but good-hearted that he is, he tries to make amends.

 

Shravani is Sachin's fiance who is also in the car.   

 

Manav Deshmukh is Sachin's older brother and is a successful orthopaedic surgeon.  Living overseas, he is summoned by his mother Savita Deshmukh to return and shake his brother out of his depression. 

 

Manav Deshmukh returns to India at this juncture, to help his brother and to take a look at this girl whose case is something of a challenge for him.  He gets a shock to see a beautiful girl in a wheelchair.  She is cold and is in no mood to meet Manav leave alone allowing him to treat her.

 

What happens?  Is Manav able to break ice with Archana?  Does he remain clinical and treat her just as his patient or does he slowly lose his heart to her?  Will Archana ever allow another man to get close to her ever again?  She doesn't like Manav.  She dislikes his quick smile and twinkling eyes.  She has locked her heart and thrown the key away.  Will she finally allow herself to live? ……………

 

Read on ….. Part I will come up tonight.

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Posted: 14 years ago
what a lovely surprise Skep .....
Very interesting ....👏
Waiting for what happens next ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...luvlyyy introoo...simply can't wait 4 d frst part...sounds awesomee:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Skep nice introduction! sounds interesting......👏👏
just waiting for the next part....
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely skep...ws waiting fr this
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...a story by Skepi after such a long time and that too an FF
This sounds so good as always Skepi...waiting for other part.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oh this is amazing Skeptical is writing FF great!!!!!!!

I eagerly waiting for next part.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Both Niki and Skep will keep us  so entertained now . This is better  than the show ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely concept. Waiting for the first part