SACRIFICE...! (my story) :D - Page 3

it was avery nice and origimal story i liked it veryyyy much

great story... lovely and sentimental when abhi gets hurt and daya tries not to cry... wow how do u get the ideas for stories .... keep it up and do write some more soon

very planned, organised story. I really love it. You got great composition talents...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    and really, in the CID cases, these types of words r used like "Haan sir", "haein", "meri wife"

very nice one.. thanks for the story Edited by rozeishere - 13 years ago

Somu d sitry was awsome n marvellous i loved it
thanku for succh a wonderful story

hey did u firstly wrote seperately in a pad n den printed out d whole story or wat
Bcaz u hve written all in one shot post how come pls reply
thank u

yess... Firstly it was written in a notepad.. then copied here...!! 

Somu this was ther first story I had read at IF...and I had finally decide to join IF...somu I like this forum...I wanted to read more and nore stories therefore I have joined this forim...somu tumhare vakjah se meine IF join kiya

OMG Jiya di.. I hope you know thats like the biggest compliment i can ever receive..!! 😃 meri wajah se Our members got such a Lovely Member.. and such lovely Poems...!!! i am so proud of myself..!! [:p] 😆 Edited by somu_05 - 13 years ago

nice story somu... 👏👏