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Posted: 18 years ago

This is my first own fan fic, I hope you enjoy

 

Angad Khanna:  He is engaged to mishty bose. But still isn't happy with

mishty, he still treats her as a friend.

 

Kripa Sharma: Angad's dads friends daughter, who has never met angad as she was studying abroad in London.

 

Mishty: Angads fiance, loves angad to bits.

 

Prithvi: Mishty's brother.

 

In Sharma's house.

 

G= gayatri

 

G: Aaj to humari kripa arahi hai wapas London! Kab who ayegi , intezaar ki bhi koi hadh hoti hai

 

S: hain gayatri, lekin abhi mujhe jald se jald ek garamsi chai banakar lao.

    Aur ha, mujhe abhihi yaad aya ke aaj to hame mere dost ke bete ki Birthday party mein jaana hai. Aur kripa kobhi saath.

 

G: Kya angad???? Chalo acha mouka hai kripa aur angad ko milana.

 

S: Gayatri tum kyu har waqt yeh bhul jati ho ke angad ki engagement hochuki hai mishty se.

 

G: Kaash, kaash angad humara ghar ka beta banta…..koi baat nahi, humari kripa ke liye koi acha hi likha hoga naseeb mein!

 

The door opened and someone queietly crept in and put there hands on gayatri's eyes.

 

G: Kripaaaaaaaaa……..tummmmmmmm

 

K: oh mum, aapko humesha bata chal jata hai ke mein hi hoon!!

 

G: Tumari maa jo hu!.....lekin tum batao tumari flight kaisi thi??

 

K: Jaisi har flight hoti hai, theek thi. Lekin yeh Mumbai kitna badal gaya, yeh 5 saal mein.

 

G: Ohh hain aaj hume papa ke dost dilip uncle, hain uske bete ki birth day party mein jana hai aaj raat.

 

K: Kaun who angad, jiski baat aap phone pe karahi thi???

 

Kripa to her self: Aaj mein dekhu to sahi ke yeh angad kaun hai. Ma har bar jiski tariff        

                              itni sari karti hai, bata to chale yeh angad mein kitna hai dum

 

I Hope you like it.

 

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 2:

At the khanna house. All the decorations are going on for the party.
Kamli is the house servent.

Naina: Kamli, yaha nahi waha, Who dekho yeh right nahi lagraha hai front door pe rakho, ohh god yaha mein nahi hoti to kuch bhi nahi hota!

Kamli: jee mehsaab yeh chair kaha rakho??

Naina: Mere sar pe!!!!

Kamli was about to put pick it up and……..

N: Kamliiiiiii nahiiiiiii waha table ki peeche!!!!

K: memsaab phele bolti ho ke apke sar par aur abh table ke peeche, kya huva aaj kal ki zamane ko??

N: jo meine kaha wahi karo, mujhe tumari aur bak bak nahi suni!!

Angad enters through the main door.

A: WOW mom, tumne yeh sab kiya, kiske liye???

N: bhudu tumari party ke liye, ( hitting him lightly on his back)

A: mujhe bata hai, im only joking mom!

The party

The party had started and mishti entered the door wearing a knee length skirt black skirt with a white spageti strap top.

Angad saw mishti and frowned.

Angad to himself: Hai margaya!

M: hi birthday boy happy birth day!!!!

Mishti hugged angad and angad pulled a face.

A: thank you very much, tum to ka lane wali thi nah.

M: aree tumari birthday ho aur main nah hu???

A: yahi to problem hai nah???

M: Kya tumhne kuch kaha.

A: nahi to, and he walks away to greet other guests.

A rush of wind came in. A sudden thunder struck, It was like the sky had joined the ground, it was like something which has never happened. Meanwhile that was the time kripa stepped into the khanna house.

A: ajeeb abhi to mausam acha tha, itna jaldi badal kaise gaya,….

As he turned he saw kripa, wearing a beautiful halter neck dress with a red choker necklace, with massive matching red earings which just about touched her bare shoulders.
Angad looked at her once and turned around in a split of a second and carried on talking.

Kripa and her family came over to angad.

S+G: Happy birthday angad beta!

A: thank you uncle and aunty.

G: angad beta yeh kripa hai, meri beti, wih aaj hi ayi London se.

Kripa stepped aside to greet him. She shook hands with him

K: hello, and many returns of the day, and handed him a bouquet of red assorted flowers.

A: Thank you, kya baat hai tum to bahot hi matching person ho, dress, earing wahi tak mera gift bhi!

K: Kya yeh mein yeh complimant tara lu yah kuch aur.

A: Jo tum chaho (then he walked away)


The party will continue after………I hope you guys enjoyed it.



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Posted: 18 years ago
continu soooooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thank you for your comment aisha1, i will try to continue it soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
sounds cool 👏 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
it reallly gr888 start plz conttttttt 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thank you guys!!! 😊 😊
Good to see you liked it!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
gr8 story pls post the next part soon cant wait 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow nice story plz continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
great story!!!...i love it plzz cont soon!!