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Drilabh_Suhaani
Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT) @Drilabh_Suhaani IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by visrom


Honestly we find it more realistic if the dialogues are in Hindi....you can improve your Hindi this way. Write the story  in MS word, ask someone who knows Hindi to make corrections. You can use www.shabdkosh.com to get Hindi words. Then post it here.


thanx but at tyms its still difficult for me... i even use google translator and other online tools but somehow d hindi letters are mindboggling. i mean i know d simple letters like ka, kha etc but not complex like sthr or something...

i am trying to keep my next story shorter, tighter and i am using english where i dont feel comfortable using hindi... i love hindi btw... d sound of hindi--aah!
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visrom
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by drilabh




thanx but at tyms its still difficult for me... i even use google translator and other online tools but somehow d hindi letters are mindboggling. i mean i know d simple letters like ka, kha etc but not complex like sthr or something...

i am trying to keep my next story shorter, tighter and i am using english where i dont feel comfortable using hindi... i love hindi btw... d sound of hindi--aah!
No offence to anyone, but quite surprising that even North Indians have trouble with Hindi.  I hope  you are comfortable with Bengali.
 
I know it requires some effort....but I personally feel everyone has to learn Hindi. It unites our country. I am not saying everyone should learn 'shuddh' Hindi, but at least enough to have a casual conversation.  But lets not get into a debate on it...😊
 
 
You can use English to narrate the story....but dialogues....koshish karo.
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Drilabh_Suhaani
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Posted: 14 years ago


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visrom
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Posted: 14 years ago

Short????

Will read it later ...busy today.
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sunnyp1414
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by visrom


Short????



If we go by CID is shown for 60 minutes and we write dialogues we will get this much lengthy story only. Minimum to Minimum for good CID story 12-13 Scenes have to be there. I think he took for this story 16 scenes were used if I am not wrong.
For CID story to watch 60 minutes then to read also it has to be same or around it if one starts imagining
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Drilabh_Suhaani
Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT) @Drilabh_Suhaani IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by sunnyp1414




If we go by CID is shown for 60 minutes and we write dialogues we will get this much lengthy story only. Minimum to Minimum for good CID story 12-13 Scenes have to be there. I think he took for this story 16 scenes were used if I am not wrong.
For CID story to watch 60 minutes then to read also it has to be same or around it if one starts imagining
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arre i meant shorter than d previous one re!! read naa!!! 😆😛
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prabha.
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Posted: 14 years ago
You have Daya-Abhi love interests here? 😕Edited by prabhanarayan - 14 years ago
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Drilabh_Suhaani
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by prabhanarayan


You have Daya-Abhi love interests here? 😕


only in 1 scene
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Bhavanab
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one !!!Edited by didobhav - 14 years ago
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sunnyp1414
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just finished reading nice one and yes improvement  is there from last story one suggestion just put spaces in between and dialogues spoken by person in bold so that it become easy reading and doesn't put strain on eyes as with long scenes where we are reading just looses up if spaces are not there.

For eg:-
Vivek- Jab tum wahaa khare khare Acp sir ko Colaba mein bulaane ke liye phone kiya tha, tab hum sab Madh island mein aaya tha!

Tasha- Aur toh aur! Godown ki aas paas jo sab masked waalon aadmi tha woh sab humaare aadmi tha.

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