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Hatred-The shade of love? FF - Page 3

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Hatred-The shade of love part 6













Robbie rings up Kasturi:Hi Kasturi...Robbie speaking..
She is surprised:How did you get my number?
R:I saw Gauri's mobile lying down.I took it without her knowledge just to get your number.
She smiles.
R:Today evening there is a party.Will you join us?If you come i will be happy.Because it's my succees party.You also deserve this success.
K:What did i do?It's your success.
R:If you were not there i would'nt have been able to sing so well.
She smiles:I have a lot of work to do.If it gets over i will come.
She puts the phone down and smiles.Robbie is moody.

Robbie's music show's success party arrangements are going on...
Gauri is about to go to the office:Gauri...can you please bring Kasturi for the party?
She smiles:Ofcourse.But why don't you invite her directly?It's your party.
I have called her.But i don't know whether she will come.
G:If she does'nt come you mood will go?
He is shy.

Gauri comes back alone.
R:Kasturi did'nt come?
G:No.She has some more work to finish.
He becomes moody:Today's party will be so boring.

Party...Lots of hot girls are present.
Robbie thinks:First time i find these modern girls boring...i become happy only when i see Kasturi.Is Robbie becoming a one wman man?Yes..Kasturi changed me.The credit goes to Kasturi.

Shiv sees a beautiful lady in a decorated black saree.He sees only her back.
S:Wow!First time i'm excited seeing a girl.Why i'm looking at her like this?God is making me to do that.Because there is something in her.
She turns back.Shiv is shocked:Gauri!Oh!How did i think like that about Gauri.
He feels bad.
He thinks:Atleast for a few seconds i fell for Gauri.That is the truth.Oh!How did i?


He goes near Gauri:Gauri..i will give you a compliment for the first time.Your accessories are stunning.Who bought it for you?
G:Well...i'm a successful business woman Mr.Shiv Kapoor.I don't depend on anybody to buy costly ornaments.I buy by myself.
Shiv stares at her and thinks:So much attitude.
Gauri giggles:Are you jealous?
S:Me?No chance.

Robbie can't believe his eyes...Kasturi is coming...She has worn a sizzling red saree.Robbie is completely fallen for her.

Music is played.Song is 'Hey Ya..' from 'Karthik Calling Karthik'.All are dancing.
Somebody tells Shiv and Gauri:Come on guys...dance...
Gauri whispers to shiv:Dance with you?No way...
S:Even i'm not interested to dance with you.
Robbie goes near them:Hi buddies..dance..
S:No...
Robbie pushes them to the dance floor.
S:Robbie and others don't know anything about our relationship.So to please them we have to...yuck...
He extends his arm.Gauri holds his arm with hesitation and dances.



Robbie goes near Kasturi.
R:You are looking very pretty in this saree.
She blushes:Thank you.
R:Shall we dance together?
She silent with shyness.Robbie holds her arms without her permission and dances with her.
Shiv is shocked to see that.
S:Why is Robbie dancing with Kasturi?
G:You ask them.
S:I don't feel that it's ok.
G:Who needs your permission to dance?They love each other.
Shiv is shocked:What?Did they tell you like that?
G:No.But i understood that from their behaviour.
Shiv thinks:No...i should break their relation.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
 
Aww Robbie has fallen for Kasturi
 
Hope Shiv doesnt try and breal up RoKa
 
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago

finally i found time to read your left out parts.๐Ÿ˜Š

all the couples rocks๐Ÿ˜ƒ. interesting๐Ÿ˜‰.
 
good going.great job๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hatred-The shade of love Part 7




Shiv takes Robbie to a room and pulls his collar:I told you to leave Kasturi.

Kasturi is searching for Robbie.

S:But still you are after Kasturi.I told you...she is not a kind of girl whom you have met many times.
R:Yes.She is not that type of a girl.
S:Then why are you after her?i know that you don't love Kasturi.You are just flirting with her.You are trying to play with her dignity.Kasturi is just a tissue paper for you.Use and throw.Only i know your true colour.
They hear a cry and turn back.They are shocked to see Kasturi standing behind them near the door and crying.
R:Kasturi...
K:You cheat..
She runs out crying.
R:Kasturi!

Gauri sees Kasturi running out with tears.
G:What happened to Kastu?
She goes to That room.
Robbie slaps Shiv:You destroyed my life.
Shiv slaps him back:I saved an innocent girl's life.
G:What's happening here?
S:Gauri..Robbie is a big casanova.He loves flirting with girls.He was using Kasturi.I exposed him before Kasturi.That's why he is angry with me.
Gauri is shocked.
S:Tell me Gauri...Am i wrong?
She is stunned.
R:Believe me Shiv...i love Kasturi sincerely.
S:Bloody liar.
R:Yes,i was a flirt.But not now.Kasturi changed me.She taught me the value of real love.That's why i'm crazy about her.Now i'm crazy..because i lost her.
He cries loudly:Kasturi!!!
Shiv is confused.

Shiv is standing alone.Gauri goes near him:Shiv,i'm not blaming you.What you have done is not wrong.But i don't think Robbie is a flirt now.I see honesty in his eyes.
Shiv is confused.He puts his arms on her shoulders:Tell me...what can i do?I can't understand anything Gauri.
Gauri can't speak.
He goes away.

Robbie sings the song 'Kaisi Hai Yeh Udaasi..'{Karthik Calling Karthik}.
He is shedding tears.He drinks in between.
Shiv sees it and feels sad.He goes to his room ans weeps.
Gauri goes near him:I can't believe that Mr.Shiv Kapoor can go weak.
S:I think i did a big mistake..I think Robbie loves Kasturi sincerely.But because of me they got separated.They both are crying because of me.I can't forgive myself.
Gauri feels sad.She thinks:First time Shiv's pain has become my pain.
G:Shiv!
She keeps her arms on his shoulder to comfort him.Shiv holds her arms and cries.
Suddenly he puts her arms down:Sorry...
He goes out of the room.She feels sad.

Robbie sees Kasturi in his room.
R:Kasturi!You came back?
K:Yes Robbie...i'm back for you.
R:Promise that you will not go away.
She smiles:Promise.
He goes near and looks at her her face deeply.She smiles.Suddenly she disappears.
He becomes upset:Kasturi..where are you?
She appears again.He holds her arms and dances.They sing 'Yeh Vaada Raha...'
Shiv sees Robbie dancing alone imagining Kasturi near him.He feels upset.
Posted: 14 years ago
Great part
Hope Shiv tries to unite RoKa
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one ๐Ÿ‘ great story line ๐Ÿ˜ณ but i think you are going pretty fast. i think you should spend some more time on making things happen and explain the scenes a lil bit more ๐Ÿ˜› i mean its already fantastic and those suggestions that i have given would make it look fabulous ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Ž thanks for the msg ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know that jattionfire.But i don't hav d patience 2 stretch it too long.I envy shumi who writes long ffs.earlier i used 2 write long ffs.for 3 yrs i did'nt write ffs.Recently i started writing again.But now i lack patience.I finished this ff long ago,but i'm slow in posting it as it lacks readers.
Thx a lot 4 ur support & suggestion
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear 
 
Aww finally Robbie has fallen for Kasturi๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
Hope every thing goes well๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
great going .keep it up.๐Ÿ‘
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hatred-The shade of love? Part 8








Shiv meets Kasturi outside.
K:Thanks for saving me from a cheater.I hate Robbie.
S:No Kasturi.I did a big blunder by doing that.I misunderstood Robbie.He is a changed person now.Only you have place in his mind.He loves you like crazy.
She is shocked.
S:I'm sorry...please go back to Robbie.
K:What are you saying Robbie?
S:I mean it Kasturi.If you don't go back...i won't be able to forgive myself.
Kasturi is confused.

Robbie is in his room.
S:Robbie...
R:What do you want Shiv?Are you not happy after separating Kasturi from me?Now Kasturi is not with me.
He weeps.
S:Who told you that Kasturi is not with you?
Kasturi comes from behind.
Robbie is surprised.He goes near her:Is it a dream?
He touches her face emotionally.
R:Why did you leave me Kasturi?
Both are crying.
K:Because...you never told me that you love me.You have only told me that because of me you sing well.
He smiles:I love you Kasturi.Will you marry me?
K:Yes....i love you too.....
Shiv smiles.Gauri comes there and is surprised to see their re-union.
G:Kastu...?
K:Shiv only made me realise how much Robbie loves me.
Gauri can't believe it.

Shiv in his room.Gauri goes near him:You did a great thing Shiv by uniting Robbie and Kasturi.You are not bad like i thought.I regret for fighting with you all these years.
Shiv smiles:I also regret for fighting with you.
She smiles.

Robbie and Kasturi's engagement...
Robbie and Kasturi's exchange rings.
Robbie and Kasturi dance together to the song 'Kabhi naa sukoon aya..'{Koi aap sa} Shiv and Gauri are watching them.
G:Such a nice pair!
S:Yes,very sweet pair.
Gauri's leg slips while walking and she is about to fall.Shiv holds her..he prevents her from falling.Gauri looks at him.Shiv's eyes touch Gauri's.Their eye contact is very strong.
Shiv smiles.Gauri smiles slowly.Robbie:Hey...both of you can't take off their eyes from each other?Deeply in love?
They are embarassed.

Suddenly a guy comes inside an raises his voice:Gauri!
Everyone looks at him.
Posted: 13 years ago
Great part
RoKa got engaged nice
Thanx for the PM