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Posted: 14 years ago

Broken hearts Part 3





Ipshita:You only broke our relationship Samar.I told you to wait fir our marriage as i wanted to establish as a model.Now yiu are back?That also..our after your marriage?
Samar:When i saw you again i realised how much i miss you?
I:I'm not the same Ipshita now.I'm not interested in my modelling career.I'm just completing the modelling assignment i committed before.Now i understand the importance of a family.You go with your wife Gauri.
S:No..i can't..
I:Ok..you come tomorrow to my house.
Samar smiles:Sure.

A guy is waiting in the railway station.He thinks:Where is Aamna?She is not seen here?

Samar goes to Ipshita's house.He is shocked to see Ipshita as a bride.The bridegroom Anupam is tying mangalsuthra around her neck.
Ipshita sees him.Ipshita takes Anupam to him:Hi Samar...this is my love Anupam who taught me the impotance of having a family life.This is Samar..my friend.
Anupam smiles:Nice to meet you..
They both shake hands.

Samar goes home.He falls on Gauri's feet.She is shocked.She moves away:Samar...what are you doing?
S:I'm sorry Gauri..you are a Goddess.But i betrayed you.
Gauri weeps:Don't apologize Samar.Be happy.I'm with you.
S:Thanks a lot Gauri.
They both smile.

Gauri is smiling and thinking of something.Samar goes near her:what are you thinking Gauri?
G:I'm thinking how the things have changed for good.You are back to my life with happiness.
He smiles:I will be always there with you.I will never make you cry.Promise.
She smiles.

Anjali is Aamna's roommate.
They both go to a restaurant.There comes a guy sipping a cup of tea:Anjali...
A:Oh..you came here also?I told you...i don't know who you are...
He:Anjali...i'm your Kavya....
A:I'm not your Anjali...
Am:Who is he Anjali?
A:This guy is always after me...he claims that i'm his girlfriend.

Aamna meets Kavya alone.
A:I felt that there is truth in your eyes.That's why i called you.What's the truth.Tell me?
His eyes are wet.
K:We were lovers.

Flashback:

Anjali and Kavya are alone in a room which is decorated with flowers and lit candles.
Anjali:This is the best birthday of my life.This is really a surprise for me.These flowers...cake...candles...But i give me a special birthday gift Kavya.
Kavya:What do you want?I will give you that.
A:Promise that you won't refuse it.It's very costly.
Kavya is not that rich.So he is worried.
A:But it can't be bought with money...but only with love.
K:What is that?
A:I want a baby from you.
Kavya smiles:but we are not married yet.
A:Kavya...don't you know that i have a tendency to forget things?I don't remember my school life or school friends now.Like that i may forget you.If i have your baby in my stomach i will never forget you.
They both are upset.Kavya wipes the tears falling from Anjali's eyes.
K:Anjali...my love is enough to make you remember me.Baby is not needed.Trust me...
Anjali smiles with little hope.

Kavya to Aamna:Anjali forgot me.I'm trying to make her remember me...I'm sure that my love is strong enough to win her back.
Aamna feels upset.
....

Aamna gets an e-mail from Raj.
"Where are you Aamna?I did'nt find yiu in the railway station?"
She is shocked:Then who is the guy i date now?
 
 
 
MONIKASETH...i'm not able 2 pm u.Bcz ur box is full.Delete some messages plz
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part................so aamna has come to know that hes not raj whom she met............cont soon..............
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey jasmine whtss up ....?

wow ur back with a part n tht so fast wow thts so coolll...i m reaLLY HAPPY THNKS LAOT ....
 
samar n gauri
 
wow....i like this ipshita girl......all thi time i was hating her i thot she would take samar wid her....
but tht god..tht anupam guy came in her life n taught hr the meaing of love n importnace of family......
i would thnk anupam fo rtht
n wow...gauri finally got her love back n i m reallly happy for her but i expexted to give her some punishment or sumthing.....but its gu tht both of they r tiogtehr n i just hope he never breaks her heart again....
 
kavya anjali
 
haahhaa this was so funny seriouslly i know i shuld be sad tht ....tht ...u know anjie cant remmeber kavya his love....which i m sad for kavya tht anjali forget her n doesnt remember there love
butstill itts quits fnny tht she has this tendency to 4get her freinds n family....n lolz now she got kavya....n wht a gud way to remmeber by habing a baby....a pat on her back hehehhe
 
amna raj
 
poor sujaaal stil waiting for her on tht statuion i hop he meets her soon
 
n poor amna....she now bilives shes in love with tht fake raj n ..she just got the news tht ..his the fake raj ...i wonder whts gonna happen next
 
by the way no part ....of AR :( plzz i wnat AR in the next part thnks
 
plzz uddate as soon as poosibel thnks alot
love u
habs
Edited by princess52 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh wow that was sweet. Raj ka pol khul gaya lagta hai....and I loved KA in this part. And achha hua Samar bhi thik ho gaya....anyways...pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear nice one
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part !!
Btw....Which is the real rajeev? The real pen friend or the fake one that aamna met?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good one dear  but missed AR . Do cont soon and thanks for the pm .
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it was very sweet part.
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Broken hearts Part 4



Aamna meets Raj:Are you really my Raj?
Raj is sweating:Ya...why are you asking me like this?
A:You liar!You are not my Raj.
R:I'm sorry Aamna..i fell in love with you at first sight itself.I did'nt want to lose you.That's why i hid my identity.
She slaps him.She runs away crying.

Aamna is waiting in the railway station.She thinks:Today i'm leaving this place.Raj promised to come here.If he comes i will continue working in this place.
A guy comes near her:Aamna?
She looks at him.She looks at his eyes.Her lips shiver:Raj?
He:I'm sorry...it's just my net name.My real name is Sujal.
A:It hardly matters.You are the real Raj.Right?
S:That's how i recognised you.You said you will wear a white salwar kameez.
She smiles.
S:Aamna...i don't like delaying things.I want to tell you a secret which has to no longer a secret.I want to marry you.Will you marry me?
She smiles.He smiles.

Sujal and Aamna get engaged in a week.Aamna looks stunning in her decorated yellow saree.
Anjali:Congratulations!You both look great together.But Ammna...you did'nt tell me how you guys fell in love.I want to hear your love story.
Aa:It's an interesting story with a horrible twist.
Aamna narrates their love story.All the guests listen to her.

Anjali is shocked to see Kavya at the party.
A:Who invited him?
Aa:I invited him.
She is shocked:You?Why?
Aa:Because i feel he is sincere.He is crazy about you.

Kavya goes to her:Anjali..
She is angry:You prove that you love me sincerely.Simply telling 'i love you' is not enough.
He smiles.Anjali is irritated by Kavya's smile and she moves away.
The big light at the hall is about to fall down.Kavya realises that it's going to fall on Anjali's head.He screams:Anjaliiii!
He runs to her and pushes her to a side.The light falls on his head.
All are shocked.Anjali runs to him.He is covered with blood.
Anjali is crying:Why did you sacrifice your life for me?
K:I told you that i love you.
She cries.

Kavya is taken to the hospital by Anjali.
Anjali is crying.She hears the song 'Yaarabba...'{Salam-e-ishq] from a room.She remembers Kavya following her.

Kavya is recovered.Anjali is very happy.She goes to him.Kavya opens his eyes.He is happy to see Anjali.He smiles.
She stays there as bystander.Kavya is completely fit.
K:Till now i did'nt ask you one thing.Why do you care for me?You hate me.Right?
A:Yes..i care for you.Because i love you.
He is excited:Anjali..you got your memory back?I'm so happy.My love won.
A:Your love is successful.But i don't remember our past.
He is shocked:But you said you love me.
A:Yes,because i realised how much you love me.I love you even though i don't remember anything which you told me about our relationship.But i'm sure that what you said is true.You can't be wrong.You are a lovely person.
They both smile at each other.


Riddhima goes to Armaan:Armaan..there is an important thing.
A:What's the matter Riddhima?you look so upset.
R:I'm pregnant.
A:What?Oh!I never expected this.
R:What shall we do?
A:What a question you are asking me?Use your common sense...