precious love-savni ff CH-13 PG 51 - Page 6

Great start, Deepika! The father-son bonding was beautifully portrayed, and I enjoyed SaVni's first talk over the phone! 😆 Now looking forward to their meeting!

thanks ishaan thanks lynne
i 'll update soon

Gr88 part...
Cant wait for their first meeting yaar...
Cont soon...
Love
Sana..... 😳

it was awesum deeps.....sam is auch a nautanki..😆

precious love
introduction of new characters
armaan malik[prithvi & sameer's friend]


ridhima malik[armaan's wife]


part 2   

everybody had reached shimla
avni:di don't worry jeej aa hi  rahe honge
damini:itni dair ho gayi hai avni shopping bhi karni
avni:di relax

prithvi enters



 aur yeh mr. prithvi garewal ,aap log toh jante hi hai
sincere and a well settled businessman

prithvi:lagta hai kisiki shamat aai hai
avni:ha aur uska naam 'P' se shuru hota hai
prithvi:'P' se hmmmmmm kaun hai yeh
damini:prihvi just shut up o.k ,kahan the itni dair laga di hume shopping bhi karni hai na
prithvi:accha sorry baba chalo
avni tum nahi aa rahi hai
damini:avni chal na
avni:nahi di ,aap aur jeej jao na
main thak gayi hu,aur engagement ki saari taiyaari bhi main hi kar rahi hu mujhe bahut kaam hai aap log jaiye
damini:prithvi chalo yeh nahi aane wali baut ziddi hai
prithvi :o.k than bye avni
avni:bye jeej bye di


sameer have reached shimla too
he calls prithvi to inform that he has reached

avni was leaving when she heard the phone ringing
avni:ohhhhhhh jeej apna phone yahi bhool gaye
hello
sameer:hello ,can i talk to prithvi
avni:jeej toh nahi hai woh apna mobile yahi bhool gye
sameer:yaar yeh prithvi bhi na............
o.k thanks
avni:ur welcum
sameer:waise aap kaun toppppppppp...............................
cutt kardiya sameer ka phone cut kardiya
kaun hai yeh
chalo ghar chalta hu prithvi ke koi toh hoga wahan


prithvi' house
avni:bhaiya saari tiyaar ho gayi hai na
accha phool lagwadiye hai kya good

ding dong......................
avni:ab kaun aa gaya ha decoration wala aya hoga
she opened the door
sameer:hiiiiiii yeh prithvi garewal ka ghar hai
avni:haa itni late kyun aaye
sameer:wohhhhhhhhhh aap mujhe janti hai
avni:ha  tumhare boss se bolke bulwaya hai tumhe
sameer:mera boss u mean my dad na
avni:just shut up o.kphaltu ki baatein chodo aur jaldi se pura hall decorate kar do  o.k aur ha mujhe red,pink and yellow roses chahiye did u got that
sameer:what...............
avni:haaaaaa decorator hoke itna attitude tumhare boss ko phone kar diya na toh tumhe abhi hi naukri se nikale denge
sameer:dehiye aap mujhe galat samajh rahi hai,
avni:tum jaise ko main bahut acche se samajhti hu ,kaam chor ho ek number ke

and then prithvi enters
prithvi:arey avni.............
he sees sameer
prithvi:tum aa gaye
avni:ha jeej ,aur yeh koi kaam nahi kar raha uppar se apna attitude dikha raha hai
yeh decoration nahi karega ,kissi aur ko bulao
prithvi:avni yeh decoration wala nahi hai mera dost hai sameer
avni:what.............
sameer:ji haa
avni:matlab
sameer:matlab yeh ki main decoration wala nahi hu
avni:ohhhhhhhh i am so sorry
prithvi:accha tum dono baat karo ,main apna mobile lene aaya tha
chalta hu
byeeeee
sameer & avni:byeeeeeee

avni:i am so sorry
sameer:its o.k waise bhi mujhe khubsoorat ladkiyo ki baato ka bura nahi lagta
avni:ji
sameer:ab main apna saman leke yehi batha rahu ya kamra bhi milega
avni:ohhhhhhhh sorry main abhi bulati hu
ramu kaka
ramu kaka:ji baby
avni inka saman guest room main rakh wa dijiye aur inhe kamra dikha bhi dijiye
ramu kaka:ji baby
ayi ye sahab
sameer:o.k main abse baad main milta hu misssssssssss
avni:avni
sameer:o.k miss avni
sameer leaves

avni:avni yeh toh ek number ka flirt lagta hai isse thoda bachke rehna

in the evening
every one was ready ,avni was  busy in the arrangements when someone came  and told her'arey jao damini ko leker aao'
avni:ji

avni:di chaliye
damini:maa papa
avni:woh aaj nahi aa payege di
damini:aaj ke din bhi nahi

avni and damini's parents never paid attention to them ,and therefore the head of the family was condidered their buaji


buaji is quiet rude,mean and don't like avni and damini at all


prithvi:aur bata sameer koi problem toh nahi hui yahan aane main
sameer:nahi bilkul nahi,waise woh mis nakchari kaun thi jisne maujhe decoration wala samajha
prithvi:woh meri saali hai,damini ki behen hai
sameer:ammmmmmm choti behen
prithvi:haaaa
lo damini aa gayi
sameer turned to look damini ,he saw avni bringing damini she was wearing a lehenga and was looking very beautiful
sameer was so lost in her beauty that he didn't saw the table and was about to fall
avni looked at him and both damini and avni started laughing
 
prithvi:samalke kya kar raha hai meri ba ijatti karaye ga kya
damini and avni both came
prithvi:damini yeh hai sameer mera dost
sameer yeh damini meri fiancee
damini:hello nice meeting u
sameer[giving her engagement gift]:same here
congratulations
damini:ha yeh meri behen hai ......
sameer:avni rite
damini:haa
tum jaante ho isse
sameer:nahi par sabse pehli mulakat meri inse hi hui thi
damini:matlab
avni:matlab kuch nahi di
ba aise dekho jeej wahan gaye jao na
damini:haa
damini leaves
sameer[naughty way]:aap bahut changi laga rahi hai
avni looks at him angrily and gives him a fake smile

armaan and ridhima enters
armaan:kya baat hai prithvi ,yahan bhaabhi ke sath kya baat ho rahi hai
congratulations
prithvi and damini:thanks
ridhima:hii damini congrats
damini:thanks ridhzi par tum dono ne hume apni shaadi main kyun nahi bulaya
armaan:arey bahut jaldi main hua sab
sameer nahi aaya kya
prithvi:aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya
armaan:toh phir itna sanata kyun hai
kuch naach gana nahi

when suddenly sangeet starts
Banno ki mehndi kya kehna
Banno ka joda kya kehna
Banno lage hai phoolon ka gehna
Banno ki aankhen kajraari
Banno lage sab se pyaari
Banno pe jaaoon main waari waari
sameer[looking at avni]:Ho ho, oh oh, ho oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh
Banno ki saheli resham ki dori
Chhup chhupke sharmaaye dekhe chori  chori

Yeh maane ya na maane main to ispe mar gaya
Yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah
Yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah

avni looking angrily at him
avni:Babul ki galiyaan na chhadke jaana
Paagal deewana isko samjhaana
Dekho ji dekho yeh to mere peechhe pad gaya
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah

Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah
sameer came from behind and he hold her waist
sameer:Lab kahe na kahe, bolti hai nazar
Pyaar nahin chhupta yaar chhupaane se
sangeet ladies:Pyaar nahin chhupta yaar chhupaane se

avni pushes sameer
avni:Haan, roop ghoonghat mein ho to suhaana lage
Baat nahin banti yaar bataane se

sameer:Yeh dil ki baatein dil hi jaane ya jaane khuda
Yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah
avni:Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah
Sajna

Maangne se kabhi haath milta nahin
Jodiyaan bante hai pehle se sab ki
sangeet ladies:Jodiyaan bante hai pehle se sab ki

sameer:Ho, leke baaraat ghar tere aaoonga main
Meri nahin yeh to marzi hai rab ki

avni:Arre jaa re jaa yeh jhoothi moothi baatein na bana
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah

sameer,armaan and prithvi:Banno ki saheli resham ki dori
Chhup chhupke sharmaaye dekhe chori chori
avni,ridhima and damini:Babul ki galiyaan na chhadke jaana
Paagal deewana isko samjhaana
sameer,armaan and prithvi:Yeh maane ya na maane main to ispe mar gaya
Yeh ladki
Yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah
avni,ridhima and damini:Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah

avni is dancing when her foot twists and she is about to fall when sameer catches her
everyone is dancing
sameer is looking into her eyes and she is just tryig to ignore him

to be continued..........................


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Edited by marie1994 - 14 years ago

Hey gr8 new enters me loving it.

awsum part deepi....jst fab..

den...prida entry finally...how i was waiting 4 it...u knw..

and man...pri's pic...how smart man...

acha isse pehle ki main pic ko dekhte dekhte faint ho jaayu. 😆....i want 2 say ki its fabulous...

update soon......

thanks apsy thanks nidiz
i am glad that u liked my update
don't worry i 'll update soon
there is much more to come

deepika di awesome update,i was eagerly waiting for prida's entry,now i m waiting for next cont soon

Awesome part deepika👏