PRIDA FF, tu janey na....part 16 pg37 last part - Page 30

aww loved ths last part =) very r0mantic nd sweet ..

This was the last part?  Chalo koi baat nahi... you made up for it with making it so very beautiful! 😃 Loved reading this FF of yours! Hope you'll land up with another soon! ⭐️

AWESOME UPDATE👏

Last Part!!!😲....

hey naqiya....i am sooo sorry sweety for commenting late...i had my exams...so i was really busy...sorry😒😒😒....and nooo wayyyy this is the last part...whyyyy😭😭😭???......this FF rocked completely...it was sooo romantic and good😳😳😳....wowww...the last part was superbbbb👏👏👏!!!....i am in pridaland after reading it😉😉😉....it was tooo good....but now i am sad that your both FF have ended😲😲😲...not fair.......will miss them loads😭😭😭...hey why don't you start writing more😉😉😉...would love to read them...soo plzzz....keep on writing...will be waiting for more good ones😊.

Meri saare wishes puri ho gayi!!!😆

You wrote a very romantic update and that's what i asked didn't i ???😉

Loved it. Won't comment much since i am only 16!!!😳

Prithvi chodo mujhey she says struggling from him , who had all his weight on her and tightly packed in his arms , leg entwined , both in the bed , prithvi nods his head in no , smiling and not opening his eyes , prithvi chodo na mujhey please , damini says struggling more , but hardly could move , she was trapped so badly , she found it irritating then , she got fed up and stopped moving and sighed heavily , letting him know the anger building , after smelling wofe's anger , he opened his eyes and saw her rolling her eyes and muttering something in anger , damini I told you I wont leave you prithvi said just like 5 year old kid who was giving his innocence , huh whatever that he got reply, he buried his head in her hairs , moving his head in her soft sliky hairs , he loved playing with them , she was still muttering in anger , turned suddenly she moved on other side , her head bumped with prithvi and for seconds it touched each others lips , as they touched they trapped in eye lock , prithvi taking one hand off from her took the trands of her hair back to her ear , as his hand moved she blushed that her cheeks turned in red , he moved his lips and kissed her forehead , eyes turn by turn , cheek whose color changed in more deeper shade of red , then he pointing nose , both nose clicking each other , she opens her eyes , finding spark in those eyes , which eyes always loved her most , seeing love of her just hers she kissed them both moving closer , taking profit of her moving closer he kissed her ,softly , slowly turning it in passionate one , hands on each other deepening the love which had glued them right now.

What is this????????????😆
dont u remember what u said the other day on chat?????????😈

very Romantic!!!!!!!!!!   

full of Love, passion n understanding

n little bit of "REALITY SHOW" 😉(U KNOW WHAT I MEAN)😈

very well written Pal
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last part kyunnnnn it was v nice u ended it so abrapty!!!!!
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⭐️anywayssss

this FF was the most fun filled one ...njoyed it thoroughlyyyyyy
thanx for givin us sucha cute FF

keep rocking
love ua
Edited by sia88 - 13 years ago