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college canteen……
akshara,naitik,rahul,neha were sitting
Rahul: believe hi nahi hota ki itne kam samay mai hum itne ache dost ban gaye hai, thanks to both of u, hume bilkul homely treatment dene ke liye….
N: (in filmy style) ohh thanku thanku…. Waise homely nahi friendly hota hai.. (he laughed)
R: haan haan wohi….
Neha: ek baat puchu???
N: nahi (standing up from chair )neha apko iss table par rakhe flower pot ke nakli phoolon ki kassam ap ek nahi do baatein puchegi, nahi to ye phool apni jaan de denge…
Once again all the 4 start laughing…..
N: akshara tum to armaan ko kafi time se janti ho, kya ye life mai kabhi bhi serious hua hai????
N: haan na serious hua hun 2 baar, jindagi aur maut ke beech mai latak raha tha aise karke.. (he hold his neck)
N: tum akshara ho????
N: to kya hua uska dharam pati to hun na…. (himself wondering what's the meaning of dharam pati)
A: naitik, kitne time se nahi sirf 7 months se janti hun….
N: (coughed) bass…….. I mean itne kam time mai shaadi…
N: itna kam time???? Mujhse pucho kitna wait karwaya hai inho ne….. nahi to aaj hamari godd mai ek nanha munna pyara sa, sweet sa bacha khel raha hota….. (akshara blushed and hit him..)
N: aoooo (massaging his arm)….. par shaadi ke baad biwi ki maar bahut jhelni padti hai yaar….. (rahul, neha laughed and akshara looked him with fake anger)
N: mujhe abhi bhi doubt hai???
N: hamari shaadi par????
Neha: nahi na… (lil irritated)
N: phir bolo na.. (imitating her)
Neha: bas rehne do, (irritated, naitik laughed)
R: tum logo ne kitni jaldi hume apna liya hai, aise lagta hai jaise saalo se ek dusre ko jante ho….
N: hey bhagwan (took a long breathe) rahul aaj tu theek to haina.. (putting his hand on his cheeks) tu jab se canteen mai aaya hai tabse aise hi gali saadi baasi (foul) hui baatein kar raha hai, I mean hume already pata hai ki hum genius hai.. baar baar batane ki jarurat nahi hai…… (all laughed)
N :i think humain ab chalna chahiye
Neha: ohhh…..itni jaldi time beet gaya pata hi nahi challa…..let's move
A: haan tum challo hum abhi aate hai….
R,
n: okkk (they left)aur haan party pe tym pe ajana
they went home.......
NEW YEAR PARTY
N: akshara jaldi change karlein, party start ho gai hogi….
A: haan haan agai naitik
N: kya hua???
A: Naitik koi mirror nahi hai, mai saree without mirror nahi bandh sakti….
N: apka mirror apke samne khada to hai….
akshara smiled and again turned to changing room, naitik also followed her….
After sumtime when she was ready…
A: challein naitik….
N: ek minute…… (pulled her back from her arm)
A: kya hua???
N: (putting sindoor in her mang) kuch nahi… ab chalte hai….
Akshara looked him lovingly.. then hugged him: I luv u……
N: (kissing her on head) luv u too…….
Rahul called them, so they finally went towards the party hall…
Neha: thankgod tum log aa gaye… 10:30 ho gaye hai…. Aur naitik tum kyu itni late aaye, tum to taiyar ho chuke the na???
N: wo mai akshara ko saree pehnane… (akshara slightly pinched his hand) aooo….
R: kya hua???
N: nahi kuch bhi to nahi…
Neha: acha acha ab challo dance floor par…
N: okkkkkk…….. he almost pulled akshara's hand… they danced together… naitik both hands were on her side tummy, touching her skin, he was looking deep in her eyes, almost lost…. akshara blushed and start looking down,
N: …. (pulling her closer) ye sharam….
A: naitik koi dekh lega…
N: dekhta rahe, ab to ap officially meri ho…. (kissed on her hand)… isliye ab ye bahana nahi chalega, aur koi line dhundni padegi….
A: (putting hands around his neck) jaisa aapka hukum ho mere swami… (both laughed)
They danced about an hour, after that they came down,naitik gulped a glass of water, and picked up soft drink, rahul called him from floor, naitik took one sip, then handed his glass to akshara and again jumped on floor, akshara shaked her head and mumbles pagal…. Then drunk cold drink from the same glass…..
naitik asked her to come and join him but she refused as she found quiet difficult to dance in saree specially with naitik who used to play his naughty tricks on her, sumtimes doing tickly on her tummy and sumtimes pinching her, she used to manage her saree and he again does something that agitates her saree then makes an innocent face as if saying ki maine kya kiya….. and akshara won't able to say something to that cute face…
akshara eyes were continuously looking at naitik, whose eyes occasionally look at her and everytime giving his million dollar smile with a sweet kiss…….
Nehs: Akshara yahan akeli kyu khadi ho???
A: wo naitik…
N: (cutting her in between) kahin nahi ghum hota wo, yahin hai… chal mere saath… (she pulled her to the corner where sitting arrangement was done, then settled on chair)
A: kitna maja aa raha tha wahan par, yaha se to kuch dikh hi nahi rha….
N: kuch dikh nahi raha ya naitik nahi dikh raha???
A: (hiding her feelings) neha bahut marungi..
Neha: matlab naitik sahi kehta hai ki usse bahut maar padti hai….. very bad I feel for him.. bechara…
A: shutup neha….
naitik came down looking for akshara….
Neha: lo ek min ke liye nazaron se dur hui nahi, aur aapke husband peeche peeche aa gye… kitni bechaini hai…. (akshara smiled)
naitik pulled chair and settled next to akshara….
A: itna dance krne ki kya jarurat hai, kitna paseena aa raha hai dekhiye…. (she took her towel and start wiping up the drops of sweat on his face while he was sitting like a baby admiring her….) mai pani lekar aati hun……. (he nods)
akshara gave water to him, while he was drinking akshara was setting his hair that was cuming on his eyes… neha was looking them, their love…. Simply made for each other… their small gestures show how much they love each other….
N: sirf 10 min reh gye hai new year shuru hone mai….
N: ohh acha hua tumne bta dia, hume to time dekhna aata hi nahi tha… thanks
N: welcum (imitating him) acha ab wahan par challo cake katne wala hai…
She goes, when akshaara start walking, naitik pulled her back, she at once bumped into his chest…
A: kya hua NAITIK???
N: ap yahi rukiye na…
and naitik took him on terrace….
AKSHARA smiled and hugged her tightly….
N: abhi 5 min aur pade hai…. Let's dance…
He gave his hand to her, she slightly blushed then hold his hand, naitik put her hand near his heart, and place his hand on her tummy, she was looking in his eyes, at once she shivered deeply , her heart was beating loudly… she totally lost herself in his eyes……. … still she found herself lost totally in his eyes, still she shivers whenever he touch her, still her heart beat raises, still naitik look her with that much love that no one had seen before…. the only thing changed is that now she's his wife…….
akshara placed her hand on his face, naitik kisses it…. Then looked in her eyes and move more closer to her, hold her face with both of his hands making a cup shape… then moved more closer and soon both of them involved in the most sweetest, most lovliest kiss…… crackers covered the sky…. New year started…. And for naitik, akshara it's the best start of their year….. they were together with their love for each other, lost in each other totally…
Night was blessing their love and wishing them that may the cuming year wud turn out to be the best year for both of them and their love………
And
that ends with today's episode……
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vow.....amazing.....its soo romantic........awesome work..........pls continue soon...........
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