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Koi Tum Sa part 1 -By Saneela

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Posted: 18 years ago

Koi tum sa

 

Koi tum sa is a story of 3 friends.. Ravi, Pratham and Gauri..

Gauri and Ravi secretly love each other no one knows about them.. at the other hand… pratham do also love gauri .. but gauri does not like him.. at all… but destiny plays the game .. gauri get married to pratham…

 

 

Part 1..

Outside the college.. a young man is waiting for some one… a taxi came there.. gauri comes out of the taxi..

Gauri: sorry ravi I got late…

Ravi: tum ladkiyaan bhi na u always get late.. and then u gives explainations..

Gauri: sorry na.. I told u.. sorry it was a trafic jam.. so..

Ravi: ok ok.. alrigth let go.. getting late for the class…

After a while

Ravi: wait I have to call..

Gauri: to whom… him…

Ravi: why do u ask when u know the answer.

Gauri: ok sorry I did a mistake..

Ravi: no u did not..

He calls

The cell rings in a bar..

Another young man pick up the phone..

Ravi: hey buddy where r u.. I tought tum yahaan ho ge.. as our result is gonna be todl today… after all its my graduation.. coem on Pratham…

Pratham: graduation… urs.. congrats man..

Ravi: u have to come ok.. (he moves a litlle away from gauri).. gauri is also gonna be graduated.. wont to sat congrats to ur friends..

Pratham: hmmm ok I will try..

The same night..

Pratham arrives with flowers..

Ravi: thanx yaar.. that's very ncie of u..

Its not for u.. but for gauri … I have something else for u…

Ravi: whats that…

Pratham: have patience its  a surprise… waise where is gauri…

Ravi: Gauri.. hmmm she was just here .. haan she is upstairs..

Pratham: ok fine .. I will cya in a mint..

Pratham start going up.. the met at the mid way… he smiled and gives her the buquet of roses…

Gauri: yeh kya hai…

Pratham: roses .. tumhare liye… u r graduated that's why…

Gauri: I dont like roses..

Pratham: roses …why everyne like roses

While pratham was talking with gauri…  a girl name Jiya came..

Jiya: hi prtaham how s u …  long time haan.. tum humein bhool hi gaye… ist ok.. u were our senior but ..

Pratham: come on jiya .. how can I forget u..

He kissed her while wtaching on gauri…

Gauri looked angily on him..

Pratham: jiya lets go down…. We arent save here..

Jiya: fine .. lets go..

Pratham: byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Gauri….

While going down..pratham tells jiya that she has been more beautiful… in these 2 years

When they went down.. pratham start dancing with.. Jiya .. on the song from film Garam Masala "ADA..

When sees Gauri comign down.. he start comign closer to… jiya.. while looking at gauri…

Gauri came and stand with ravi..

Rani seems to enjoy very much.. he asked gasuri to dance with him..

 

Gauri didn't want to dance.. 1st but ravi pull her out.. prtaham really felt bad for what ravi did…

They start dancing after a while…

Pratham was just starring… at gauri .. she just ignored him.. ravi stopped dancing… he got a call.. he request pratham to give gauri company till then.. pratham smiled his wicked smile…

Pratham: sooo im back..

Gauri: don't be soo happy ravi will be back...

Pratham: jaab aye gha ravi dekha jaye gha.. tab tak.. tum mere saath dance karo..

Pratham.. puts his hand on her shoulder.. at the same time gauri slapped him..

Gauri: (anrily) don't u ever .. touch me..

She leaved…

Pratham smiled his wcked smile..

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
just read your story irs gr8. cant wait for the next part
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ruch