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Give It Up

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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:27am | IP Logged
My last story too was something along these lines, so pardon me!


GIVE IT UP

 

I know it will never transpire

The feeling so alien so bizarre

It inspires the wildest hopes

Led on

I keep on dreaming

My practicality asks me to give it up'.

 

What can you do?

For the vagaries of the heart

Immersed in my thoughts

And my dreams

I wake up with a start

My practicality asks me to give it up

 

Stopping myself before I get lost

In the wild marshes

Of my infatuation

My sanity at the cost

My practicality asks me to give it up




Edited by [email protected] - 21 March 2010 at 11:50pm

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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 4:11am | IP Logged
WOW! This is brilliant! I love the way your poem portrays the emotion vs reason clash. I can totally relate to this. Great job, Pooja!! Clap  
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Posted: 21 March 2010 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _.serendipity._

WOW! This is brilliant! I love the way your poem portrays the emotion vs reason clash. I can totally relate to this. Great job, Pooja!! Clap  


Thanks. i am glad that you liked it. these days, dunno why, i am writing such stories! Romance and related has never been my forte, taking baby steps here...:) Thanks for your encouragement!
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Posted: 22 March 2010 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Nice job at versing Pooja! Simple, straight forward, and obvious - not typical in that sense. But says a lot, great piece!

(S.L.)

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 5:53am | IP Logged

That was absolutely fantastic Pooja..........luvd it!!!!!!!ClapClapClap

I am toatally ur fan now............plz do write more of it.........Embarrassed.
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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by scarlett.lady

Nice job at versing Pooja! Simple, straight forward, and obvious - not typical in that sense. But says a lot, great piece!

(S.L.)



Thanks. If I may go out of line a bit and say that, well, it was inspiredEmbarrassed
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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sehar mehrotra

That was absolutely fantastic Pooja..........luvd it!!!!!!!ClapClapClap

I am toatally ur fan now............plz do write more of it.........Embarrassed.


Thank you Sehar.
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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Nice poem indeed :) Simple, yet says a lot.

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