WAADA (sajan ff)romantic sajan pg19

Posted: 14 years ago

Hi on my readers n friendz demand, me again bck wid 1 more os/ss (it's really very short), aur jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai............yup it's on sajan again (kya karu mujhe unke ilawa aur kuch dekhai nhi deta hai) n as usual based on the current track (yeh cv's mere kuch to kaam aate hai...........inke bigarey hue story miens kabhi koi dialogue ya scene mujhe sajan os k ideas de dete hai)

     

The story goes forward--------------------6/7 yrs ahead from the present day. Now  (sorry since i don knw in which yr they r in, so me makin it accordin to my requirement)..........present time  mayur, the newly wedded couple is in their final yr, while sajan is in second yr (studin hard, hopefully, to get promoted to 3rd n the final yr-------specially samrat ji)

 

Ab yahan se chalo thoda agey chalet hai..............um..............zyaada nhi , yeh kuch 6/7 saal agey; n lets find out wats happenin in excel's super cool gang's lives!!!

 

Scene: morning time

"di............di, plz jaldi karo. Main late ho rhi hu"-----gunjan calling nupur from dinning hall

"ha, ha baba ayi...........bas yeh le" nupur came out of kitchen with a tray in hand. She kept it on the table. "yeh le tera sandwich aur chai"........................."nupur, nupur, meri shirt kahan hai", Mr. Mayank Sharma started shouting from his room.

N: (from downstairs) uffo, mayank maine bed pad hi rakhdi thi

M: kahan mujhe nhi mil rha

G: di tum khud jaake kyun nhi dhund deti.............nups throws a disgusted look to gunji n goes upstairs.

Yes, u hv guessed it right, gunjan stays with mayur in their house in Bangalore.  Mayank,  a very well known economist and nupur  a novelist. She is well known for both her romantic and suspense thrillers, have already received a no. Of prestigious awards.

Do you know sumthing, bauji ne bhi mayur ko apna liya hai...............he loves mayank much more than he loves his daughters. According to him, "mayank jaisa damad unke kisi peechle janam k punya ka fal hai.....................!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Actually, it so happened.....................mamla thodi si thandi hotehi adhiraj apne dad ko sabkuch sach bata deta hai, everything from the first day of his enrty in excel, to loving suhani, accepting to marry nupur for taking revenge on suhani..................each n everything. Ab aur kya, his dad at first bursts on him, later comes to bauji n asks for his forgiveness, narrating the whole story as told by raj.

 

Everything gets cleared, bauji also understands his faults n greets mayank in his family as a new member. On the other hand, raj's dad accepts suhani as his would be daughter-in-law after hearing everything from suhani.....................unlike bauji he takes the side of suhani......................it took about 6 months for all these to happen.

By then mayur have already given their finals n both are applying for jobs................so after five years they now at this position............................

 

Oh! I forgot to tel about our gunji:....................as usual she passed out the next year without excellent marks. She took a part time job at a MNC along with MBA. Now she has degree n work experience, both.

Aaj sach mein gunjan ka ek important din hai.................she is going for an interview, for the post of manager in SJ group of companies. Wel this is counted among the top industries of Athens, however it's been about 5yrs since establishment. Sunne mein aaya hai, is industry ka jo malik hai wo bahaut hi zyaada mahenti hai.........he is very old but still never says no to work. Pahele kisi private company ka mamuli sa employer tha. Might be tab hi paisa bacha bacha ke rakhta tha, tab aj jaake yeh company khada kiya hai.Na jaane kitne bade bade news channels se unke interview, photos lene aaye hai, fayda kya hai.................unki shakal bhi dekhne ko naseeb nhi hoti hai...............ab kaise hoga, aap hi bolo!!! Somebody in his late sixties workin so much----------interview dene layak uski halat kaha rehti hogi.

 

Now this very industry wants to get spread in india too, so opening a branch in Bangalore.

Gunjan to usually dia k saath hi Mumbai mein rehti hai, because of this interview she has come to Bangalore last week and along with her even mayur too wants  that she gets this job.............taki woh unke saath hi rehle naki mahine mein ek baar apni shakal deekhane aa jaye.

 

Waise bhi Mumbai mein bore hi hoti hai. Diya to now married to benji n have shifted to Canada two years back. It's because of benji. U people wont believe------------he has baged a job of handsome salary out there n dia, wel she is a fashion designer now running her own boutique in 1 of famous fashion street.

 

Baki bacha kaaun? Hamare uday miya. Jaise ki aap sab jante hai, unka to andaaz hi nirala hai. Aajkal wo amazon gaye hue hai..................dariye mat kuch khane k liye nhi, wo uhm...........uhm............... he is a wild life photographer n the head of Nat-Geo's  wildlife department. So................arey wo akele nhi uski wife bhi gayi hai uske saath..............bhul gaye kya are apni cj thin a.............ha ; she is his patni cum PA. Wo kya hai na, pura paisa ghar mein hi ayenga aur biwi k joote bhi nhi parenge kisi aur ko chedne k jurm mein, aur to aur kaam k saat saat romance bhi ho jayega.

 

Therefore, moral of the story at present gunjan was all alone in Mumbai...................ha adhani kabhi kabhi aa jaya karte hai usse milne k liye, actually un dono ne bhi shaadi k baad  bandra mein settle ho gaye. Adi looks after his father's business as well as coaches excels bb team on weekends while suhani works as a career councellor.

 

I know i know................aap logon ka mann nhi bhara hoga is info se............u people wnt to knw sumthin more about sumbody else---------------------lemme tel u he is no more

                     

Arey arey arey areyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......................plz plz plz don start cryin, don take it the other way round....................i mean he is no more a part of this gang! Shocked, main bhi hui thi, jab paheli baar p[ata chali..........................wen i was researchin mujhe pata chala, sab kuch settle hone k baad bauji ne nupur ki reception party rakhkhi thi moreana mein . kya party thi yaar........................woh bhi dusherey k din, bauji wanted to do all des since the marriage was not at all grand . whole moreana was invited along wid adi's parents shilpa aunty (offcourse) adhani, benia uday-cj(udj), n samrat too. All came but samrat. Sabko thoda ajjeb laga, kyunki won a aaye aisa to ho hi nhi sakta.................but it happened, later after coming back all came to know without telling nebody he has left Mumbai...............not even gunjan n suhani.

 

Sabne bahaut dhundne ki koshish ki, pad koi fayda nhi hua...................sab bekar. They understood k wo bhag gaya, gunjan ko akela chodkar...................................................

 

To be continued.............................

 

Hey jo bhi padega, plz do reply.................do tel me howz d concept, whether u like it or not? I should go on wid it or not? It's very very short max 5/6 prts......................now 1st prt to aap logon k reply k baad hi post karungi...................

 

N ya all my buddies i know aap log intezaar k update k liye besabri se intezaar kar rahe ho, me workin on it.................as u all know i'm out for my study project, so only sumime able to read the written ud of epi here...................jisse mujhe yeh idea aaya.....................so thnx for keeping ur patience. As iv e said i will be bck wid my ff asap, til den njoy this shrt ss.............me wil at least try to post ud of this very very soon.

 

Thnx 4 u all's pms, i do read dos.....................lovely, but really yaar abhi mujhe dekhne mein dikkat ho rhi hai aur abhi sajan track aa raha hai...................................mere saat hi aisa kyun hota hai!!!!!!!

Edited by cute_monaya_fan - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
yaar yeh kya tha ahhh im crying y u wrote such a heart broking one
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by sana866


yaar yeh kya tha ahhh im crying y u wrote such a heart broking one
 
sanaa, aaj paheli baar kya tu meri os pad rhi hai??????????????
 
hw can u thnk yaAR me writin a sajan ss n dat to heart brokin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
u cnt dream of the twist at the end.............................i hope u wil like my idea dis time too, jst hv patience, 4 d upcomin twists
Posted: 14 years ago
wats upp.........................my buddies😲
 
kya tum sab apni finnie ko bhul gaye???????????????????😭
 
pahele ud post karne ki der hoti thi, bt not in ur postin replies; n now only 1😲
 
i think shayad ss bahauthi zyaada bura hai, really yaar me confused............................do plz tel whether u like it or not
n ya if not plz do tel wy?????????????????? lemme tel u dis is ofcourse nt a sad story, it's totally a good 1 jst like all others bt hv some shockin surprises....................dats it.
plz do reply
Posted: 14 years ago
OMG this is such a great story, i cant wait for the next part.. BUTTTT wheree is sammyy??!?!??!
please tell me comes back/they find him soon .. don't want sajan separate :(

anyway do continue soon
will be waiting
and keep me updated through PM :D lol


Raviie.x ;D
Posted: 14 years ago
hey there!!nice to see u back.Reallyyyy veryyy niceeee os.plzzz update next part soon.i m waiting for it and thanx for pm.
 
 
 
fatima
Posted: 14 years ago
OMG... finnie... it ws awesomeeeeeeee....
reallyyy amazingggggg... haan sad one... bt srsly it ws awesomeee...
grr888888.....
i really ws crying... 😭
luved it to d core....
plllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon...
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
Posted: 14 years ago
really very nice.....interesting to read....nice twistttt
Posted: 14 years ago
Wow !!!What a story line?Its very unique.Please continue ASAP....
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..
loved it.
wer is sammy..
aww it was senti..
continue soon.

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