HONEYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 RATIIII!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗
It was.....😍
Soooo good!!!!! I love the fact that you're taking us through the LS once agai this time following a new route...it's a fresh take and I really like it!!! Rati, I've read few of your scenes and I know you have a great sense of humour and Honey, i've read COL from head to toe so many times I now almost have it memorised!!! So I know that you two together....really are a pair to watch out for...
Waise to all the FF and short scene writers here are at least 10 times better than the CVs of DMG, but you two together are 10 crores of times better!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Now with my essay... (sorry couldn't help)
"He did help us though" Nikki says softly
Thank God!!! Kam se kam appreciate to kiya! Subconsiously hi sahi....😉 😆
"Well he is a pretty good dancer" Anjali says with a slight smile on her face, remembering how he had twirled her in the corridor.
Abhi twirled Anjali in the cooridor??? *scratches her head* Really? Strange...I can't imagine him doing that...but okies...agar tum logon ne likha hai to zaroor kiya hoga! 😉 😛
"I would have loved to be in Ridzi's place'..those strong arms"
😲 😲 😲 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 Is Angie saying this??? OMG....
.those arms....were pretty warm and cozy
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 I can just imagine Armaan's face!!! Ehhhhhh!!!! And me likes!!!!
"WARM and COZY'..that too 'that'.that'Sadu Modi's arms"
😳 😳 😳 Chalo...masti mein hi sahi...par at least she said and Abhi heard... woh banda bhi bahut chalu hai...sirf unhi ki baatein sunta hai jinke saath future mein usse....ahem...
"Excuse me" he stops in his tracks and turns slowly towards her, an eyebrow raised.
Ohhh he must look sooo hottttt with one eyebrow raised, all angry and going "Excuse me?" on poor Nikki....
"I see''nothing here'please go on Dr. Nikita" Abhimanyu nods his head and his face is a mask of serious contemplation and voice soft.
😲 😲 😲 Now that is soooo Modi! Me likes.....😳 😳 😳 😃
Waise I can see his "soft" voice made her feel safer...good good!!! I like where this is going! So he makes her feel secure, eh? I foresee a few fights... though the way I picturise them in my imagination, they're kinda fighting like Tom and Jerry...😕 😆 😆 😆...okay, so I need a psychiatrist....better go tell Dad...
Okay sorry got a bit side-tracked...I'm back on track again...
"what would you know about it'..run away like a loser'.I had not pegged you for one'..but I guess I made a mistake'.you are and always will be a loser"
Oh he knows how to push her buttons already!!! Now it's just a matter of time before she gets all distracted with the undone buttons on his shirt!!! 😆 😳 😳
"I am not'.but rather than running away like a loser''why don't you stay back and get what you want'..why even give up without a try'..who knows what you might get''you might be surprised by who life throws in your arms"
Ohhh he has no idea what a dangerous change of events that exclamation of his will lead to!!!! He'll find himself in her arms one day and perhaps he'll think back to this moment...I wonder what he'll say then!!!
"You Know-it-all''here I come" she counters Modi's words
Me likes!!! There we go with the revenge again!!! No, scratch that!!! Me loooooooooooooves!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃
Girls, keep it up and update soon!!! I know this will get better and better!!! I will try to read and comment whenever I can but it's gonna be hard as I've my exams, but i will try!!!!! Coz this is just too good! I have to read it once in a while...maybe once every week if I can...but thanks for taking up this FF... it's gonna be wonderful!!! Absolutely FANTABULOUS!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
And Honey don't forget you promised me the whole of Sanjeevani would swoon over Abhi just like we do!!! (Just one thing...make it only the girls swooning over him...boys would be too cheesy...we don't want AbhiMaan in here! 😆 😆 😆 )
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