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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
wowowowow tht was awesomeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was lovely........... wat yaar suhaani aur adhiraj ko beech mein mat laao

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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Hi Rabi,

Awesome part.

Awwwwww so suhani-mayank chat with each other.

At first I thought it was Nupur.

Hmmmmm its really very interesting.

I liked Mayank-mamaji convo very much.

Specially the following lines-

MJ: aur kitna paro gay tum......sambalna to tmhe bussiness hi hai na.......jab main tmhare jitna tha to uss waqt to gunjan bi paida ho chuki thi lekin tm........na jaane kya chahte ho tum
mayank was listining all this silently n gujan was silently smiling looking mayank's expressions

MJ: kuch samaj aaya main kya keh raha hun?
M: ji mama ji
MJ: kya samaj aaya
M: yehi k agar aap aik saal pehle meri shadi karwa dete to main aaj aik baby ka papa hota.....(he said this innocently)

After reading it I  could not but laugh.

 

Now I m eagerly waiting for mayur meeting.

Lovely update.

Keep updating.

Thanx 4 pm.

 

 

 

Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Hey sweety
 
Nice part dear
 
I loved Mayank & his Mom's conversation
 
Nupur scared of boys Wow so Unlike her
 
So next update Mayur are going to meet ha????
 
Cant wait for it
 
Plz do continue soon
 
thanks for the PM
 
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

I wasn't trying to be mean by saying it was boring, don't take it that way. It wasn't that boring, it was funny and all too.
I like Nupur's character, it's different
But you know what? It's your story and you should keep it the way you would like it. And regarding Nupur's character, I would like to see a different type of Nupur. Because of this, it makes the story interesting. So it's your ff and you keep it just the way you like it

hey hey i didn't say abt anything like mean n all.....i was just saying that i know this part is boring n thanks 4 understanding that it was needed now.............i didn't mind ur comment at all
even i felt happy when someone criticise.......it helps to improve........
anyways dear i m happy that u like nupur n will love to see her in different character...
i will cont story as i have thought
bt still u know na thora sa confusion hota hai.......k pata nahi kaisa ho ga
well thank u so much nikki 4 replying
i hope u understand now wat i wanted to say

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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: nadz_J



Awwww u deserve a long and nice commentπŸ˜†πŸ˜† tho always expect me to be lastπŸ˜†πŸ˜† im the the late lateef of FF forumπŸ˜†πŸ˜† i do like it! actually we are seeing nupsi on MJHT like that bubbly chirpy but we wanna see her differently aswell thats what FFs are for na to make it diff😊

U will get awesum response im already seeing thatπŸ˜†πŸ˜† fortune tellerπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

my guesses will keep cumingπŸ˜†πŸ˜† till i get the answers then new onesπŸ˜‰ im jst happy u njoyed the commentπŸ˜†πŸ˜† and ya im so loyal naπŸ˜†πŸ˜† came to read the CS after eight pagesπŸ˜†πŸ˜† and saw the first partπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† how loyal is that nowπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Luv u keep rocking and will read ur other one as soon as i canπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† im still outstanding about 164 i guess coz those are my unread messages which i will open as i have timeπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Luv u
Nadz

thank u sooo much fortune teller ji.....πŸ˜†
n keep on guessing........bt only my parts will answer you.......
n ya i wanted to make nupur's character different this time.....
may be ur guesses are right to some extent.........bt pora raaz to baad main hi khule gaπŸ˜‰.... till than keep on guessing.........i love ur fortune telling ability n also guessing ability....so keep it upπŸ˜†
well thanks 4 ur comment yaar...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Very nice cont. soon but why havnt you added sam add him even if for short time

hey relax dear..........samrat will come but not now.........
he is in the story..........bt he will come after some chapters....till than wait
n by the way thanks 4 ur comment dear
n i will try to update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowowow tht was awesomeeeeee

hey thank u soooo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

it was lovely........... wat yaar suhaani aur adhiraj ko beech mein mat laao

hey dont worry yaar..........they were necessary 4 story........
icouldn't think of any other character.....but dont worry i too hate them n i wont let them do anything to mayur..........so chill
n by the way thanks 4 liking update......😊
keep reading.....πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Rabi,

Awesome part.

Awwwwww so suhani-mayank chat with each other.

At first I thought it was Nupur.

Hmmmmm its really very interesting.

I liked Mayank-mamaji convo very much.

Specially the following lines-

MJ: aur kitna paro gay tum......sambalna to tmhe bussiness hi hai na.......jab main tmhare jitna tha to uss waqt to gunjan bi paida ho chuki thi lekin tm........na jaane kya chahte ho tum
mayank was listining all this silently n gujan was silently smiling looking mayank's expressions

MJ: kuch samaj aaya main kya keh raha hun?
M: ji mama ji
MJ: kya samaj aaya
M: yehi k agar aap aik saal pehle meri shadi karwa dete to main aaj aik baby ka papa hota.....(he said this innocently)

After reading it I could not but laugh.

Now I m eagerly waiting for mayur meeting.

Lovely update.

Keep updating.

Thanx 4 pm.

hey thanks fari.....look i have updated .....u were saying na comment se kaam nahi chale ga
so i have updated 4 you....
anyways thanks 4 liking this part dear
i too like mayank n mama ji convo.......πŸ˜†
i will update soon.......dont worry
btw thanks 4 comment yaar......😊