~Dedicated to Someone Special-MayurSS Pg 4 - Page 5

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaSourav

IF-Addictz

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Dedicated to Someone Special

Part 2

Gunjan-Come on Nupur yeh kapre pehen lo na, itni beautiful laago gi.

Nupur-No Gunjan, mein yehi kapre pehenoon gi, warna mein nahi jaaon gi.

Gunjan-Ok ok, then hurry change.

Gunjan is my bestest friend, No one is like her, she is sweet, and very nice.

Well anyways, I go and get ready, my hair in one braide, and waering my glasses.

Gunjan comes wearing jeans and a green shirt. she looks nice.

She sees me and smiles.

Gunjan-You look beautiful, par sirf ek kami hai, inn kapre ko utar do, and glasses too.

Nupur-Gunjan please-

Gunjan-Accha baba, lets go then.

Nupur-*Smiles* Ok.

_________________

We went in the party. Gunjan was with me the whole time.

Gunjan-Nupur lets go with Sammy, and the rest.

Nupur-No tum jao.

Gunjan-No you are coming with me.

Nupur-Ok par mein ek drink le ke aati hoon.

Gunjan-Fine par hurry.

Nupur-Ok.

She goes with Samrat, Dia, Uday, and Benji, and also that same guy I always used to see jogging, in front of my balcony.

Theyw ere telling him to sing.

But he said no

and was struggling.

Dia-Come on its my b-day.

Mayank-Par-

Samrat-Plez

I turned around, thinking about what he said before to me.

I wanted to cry, but then I hear a voice.

I turn around, he was singing.

He was singing a song, but I don't know which, because I don't see movies, or hear songs.

His voice was so sweet.

It was fab

too good.

I got lost in his voice.

Pata bhi nahi chala ke kab party over hogayi,

_______________

Gunjan drive me to my house.

She was mad at me,

because I didn't come back to her.

Well we arrive and she goes in my room.

Nupur-Gunjan suno toh-

Gunjan-Nahi, you are so mean, didn't even come back.

Nupur-Ok sorry.

Gunajn-Sorry se kuch nahi chale ga.

Nupur-Ok baba kann pakar ti hoon.

She looks at me.

Gunjan-Ok fine, I forgive you.

Nupur-Thanks, par mujhe appne friend ka toh bata. The one who was singing.

Gunjan-Kaun Mayank?

Nupur-I think, the one wearing black shirt.

Gunjan-Yeah Mayank.

Nupru-Ok, par mein soch rahi thi, why doesn't he become a singer? His voice is too good.

Gunjan-Agree, but you see usske parents passed away 4 years ago, and from then he went to collage, and did a part time job. He lives alone. And well, he doesn't have money to become famous and all.

Nupur-Ohhh I see.

Gunjan looks at the time.

Gunjan-Oh shooo, I am late, mummy mujhe chorre gi nahi, mein kal milti hoon, collage mein. Acha bye,

Nupur-Bye.

She goes, and I think about what I could do to help Mayank.

lovely part dear.I liked nupur and she is so sweet.Awwshe wants to help mayu.Really nice .

Pls pm me after updating it.

Quote

404297

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

desi girl!!!!!!!!

Party time 🥳

I'm first on ALL three of them

of course,

I reserved them

so I would be first

no matter what...

so here it goes:

Lina,

this was a awesome part

loved it to bits and pieces

of course, you wrote it

so it has to be good

anyways continue soon!

Awwwww Nikzsss u are so sweet

thank you soooo much🤗

-Lina-

Quote

404297

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor
Nupur is so sweet. kash ye mayank jaldi samajh jaye. lina its fantustic. but it 222222 short na? pls make it long

hey Tapoor di thank you so much

am glad that u like dit

n I will deffi try🤗

-Lina

Quote

404297

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_fan
Hey
it was a great part
this ff is so sweet I don't have the words to describe
I don't know why but
whenever I read this I feel really sad
i really feel bad for nups

hey thanks you sooo mcuh

Jassi

Im glad that u like dit

🤗

luuvv ya

n yeah Nupur😭

-Lina-

Quote

topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

hey nice one
plz update soon

Quote

Mahima

@Mahima_13

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

concept:-

Quote

Mahima

@Mahima_13

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

part 1:-

Quote

Mahima

@Mahima_13

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

part 2:-

Quote

Mahima

@Mahima_13

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

plzzzzzzzz update soon and do pm me

Quote

Mahima

@Mahima_13

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

not fair.....i want an update!

update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it update it

jaldi karo.....

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 6