Khushboooooo π€π
I LOVED IT.....the song is one of my favorite in this world.....dunno why but EVERY line has a meaning and i cud hear it as background for your writing!!
I loved how u described what all scenes you wanted with the antara of the song!!
You are an incredible writer.....please don't stop but also study(have to say thatπ)
I loved the way you explained the rain scene ...the 4 lines go beautifully with your explanation of that scene
He silently stood there, looking at her, drinking in every detail of her as she desperately asked him to stay...for her. The words rung in his ears...for me...stay, please so beautiful ....I felt the same thing....thanks 4 putting them into words!!
Nigahon mein dekho meri
Jo hain bas gaya
Woh hain milta tumse hoobahoo
He pushed her against the wall and trapped her between his arms. She looked like a caged bird as she glanced at him frightenedly...terrified, but she still trusted him. She still looked into his eyes when she spoke. He was livid at her, at her friends for humiliating her...he inched closer to her, intimidating her, and she tried to look anywhere else but at her. He was sweaty, and deliberately flexed his muscles as he moved his arms, preventing her from running away. He could feel her breathing quicken, and could see her eyes silently begging him to stop, but he still came closer, knowing and very much enjoying the effect he was having on her. He wanted her to feel what he had been feeling for her for a long time...he wanted her to know that he was the one for her...that she only had to say it and he would give her all the love in the world.
This is my fav line of the song.....n my fav part of ur scene!!The bold part is like prose!!
Loved it is an understatement......keep up the beautiful work!!!
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