mera pehla pehla pyaar - Page 7

Posted: 14 years ago

hey!!!

that was really cool yaar,,,

i mean sam and ammy's talk....like the way you describe the scean,,,like that devide into two part and ammy and ridz..really cool yaar,,

gunji try to make ridz understand her feelings...

and mayur...ohh "bechare to gaye"...ohh ridz sound like a kirti,,good,..

armaan ohh are hero is angry ....well i think ridz will deal with that...

well precap sounds cool myur's prank,,,

update next one.....

Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice one.......cont. soon.....thnx 4 d pm
Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
really nice update
continue soon
n thanx for the pm
Posted: 14 years ago
hi. nice update. continiue soon
Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part..............liked it..........armaan is total professional .....hmmm......good.....exited about next part.
Posted: 14 years ago
wowowow tht was awesome part plzz contuied soon
Posted: 14 years ago
great story!!
plz pm me
wen u cont!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 14 years ago
                                                             part=10
nupur
n=by god..kabhi zindagi mein itna kaam nahi kia jitna ek din mein aj karrahi hu.....
mayank
m=us nupur ki waja se mujhe aj itna kaam karneko mila ha..aur wo bhi begar galti ke madaat karneko gaya tha aur hua kya?? khudka bura...
n=kya khak madaat ki ha?? ulta kam bigar dia uss saru akru mayank ne!!!!!! dekhlungi usse.. m=dekhlunga usse...
armaan's cabin... riddhima comes..
r=armaan woh file......she sees him no where....
r=armaan.....armaan kaha ho tum??? kaha chala gaya ye?? reception mein puchti hu...
reception
r=sister dr armaan ko kahi dekha hai????
s=woh thori der pehle bahar gaye hai..kaaha batake nahi gaye....
r=ok..thank you.....
childrens ward....
samrat is talking to his patient mini..
s=mmm mini woh tumhara bukhar ek din ma kam hogaya!!! very gud....
m=bhaiya thank you to mujhe apko kehna chahiye....
s=accha kyu???
m=ap jo meri itni care karte ho..mera itne pyaarse dekhbhal karte ho mujhe to thik hona hi tha...
s=par ye to mera kaam ha na???
m=lekin aap baaki doctors se sabse zyaada acche ho...dekhna intern of the month ap hi banoge....
s=thank you..he kissed her on forehead..
s=accha tum betho mein tumhare reports leke aata hu thik ha???
m=ok....
then gunjan arrives....to see her patient gappu..
g=sister gappu???
ga=didi..ap agayi....
g=ha..chalo mujhe tumhara blood lena hai...
ga=phirse???
g=ha warna tumhara bimari kaise thik hoga???? she takes some blood of him..
g=sister isse test karke reports mujhe dedena thik ha??
s=ok doctor....
g=jao tum khelo.....then she sees mini...wents to her...
riddhima's cabin....
r=paat nahi ye armaan kaha chala gaya??? kabhi to esa nahi karta!!!
"armaan ke lie itna pareshan???" riddhima turns n finds anjali...
r=anjie!!!! hi....
a=hi!!!! both hugg each other....
r=good to see you yaar..kab ayi tum???
a=abhi abhi...jis armaan ko leke tum itna pareshan thi..woh humhe airport lene aya tha....
r=oh...dr kirti kaha ha???
a=bahar...
r=chalo.....
reception.....
r=dr kirti....she hugs her tightly...
k=riddhima..kaisi ho???
r=ap jaise chodke gayi thi waisi hu.....
k=lagta too nahi ha....
m=ridzi hum bhi yahi ha....
r=rahull....muski....she hugs both of them...
ra=kaisi ho riddhima???
r=mai to thik hu..par tum dono kaise ho??? abhi bhi ladte ho????
a=aur nahi to kya??? pehlese zyadaa...
r=ma'm..dr shubhankar kaha ha???
k=riddhima....navnita waha ha isiliye woh nahi aye anjali ayi ha..
ar=milliya sabse????
r=ha..tumne bataya kyu nahi tum inhe lene airport ja rahe ho??? ma bhi...
ar=kyuki interns pe nazar rakhna zaruri tha....
r=ha...
a=woh armaan...apto senior doctor ho rite????
ar=jaise tum log nahi ho......
ra=hum bhi ha..par tum dono jaise itne acche nahi....
m=bilkul.....
ar=accha ab tum sab riddhima ke cabin mein jao hum abhi ate ha....
a=ok...they leave...
ar=ab..riddhima....
r=ha???
ar=woh dr kirti yahaadmitt hone wali ha..to unki responsibilty hum kise denge???
r=armaan tum ho..phir????
ar=ha..par interns kisiko dena chahta hu...kyuki mere already 2 patients ha...
r=mere bhi...so????
ar=wahi to....
r=samrat aur gunjan???? interns mese wo dono sabse zyaada kabil aur responsible ha...
ar=mm..rite....unhe page karke tumhare cabin mein bulalo...
r=ok...
pathlab....
n=by god!!!!!!!! ma to thak gayi..abhibi 10 aur??? mai nahi kar paungi....
samrat comes...
s=hi nups...
n=hi sam....
s=kya hua??? chehra uthra hua kyu ha????
n=jaise tum nahi jante..gives him a angry look....
s=oh sorry..ma jata hu...
childrens ward.....
g=hi mini...kaisi ho???
m=ma thik hu..ap kaisi ho didi????
g=ma bhi thik hu......apki bukha kaisi ha????
m=abhi bukhar nahi ha..samrat bhaiya jo ha....
g=accha?? very gud.....wase samrat bhaiya ha kaha?????
m=woh mere reports lene gaye ha.......
g=oh..her pager rings....
riddhima's cabin....
r=dr's ap sab ko yaha isiliye bulaya gaya ha kyuki aplogoki duty's change kar di gayi ha....
ar=ye hai dr kirti humari senior doctor.....woh 7 mahine pregnanat ha aur 2 mahiune baad unki delivary yaha hogi...
r=unki case hum dono ne dr samrat ke hawale karneka faisla kia ha....
s=ma'm ma???
r=ha kyuki interns maise apke marks sabse high ha....
ar=dr samrat aap dr kirtika case handle karenge aur apko asist karengi dr gunjan....
g=yes sir....
r=senior dr ke lie dr anjali apko supervise karengi......points to anjali.....
sg=yes ma'm...
ar=dsr kirit cabin no 202 ma ha....unhe puri comfortable milni chahiye.....koi bhi takleef nahi..ok????
r=aur ha..dr kirti ke sare test reports dr armaan ko aplog dikhayenge ok????
ar=dr samrat apki jo patient ha....mini woh...
s=sir please mini meri responsibility ha...ma usse handle karna chahata hu....
ar=par...ap itne sare...
s=sir koi problem hogi...to ma apko khud kahunga....
g=sir mini ko samrat ke under rehne dijiye....use samrat ki aadat hogayi ha..aur samrat ko uski..so...
r=ok....aur dr gunjan apke general ward ki patient ajse dr nupur aur mayank ki zimmadari ha
mn=KYA????????????????????????
ar(angrily)=any problem????
mn=abb...no sir.....
ar=gud.,...now resume your duties...
outside....
n=no way!!!! no way....case aur iske sath???? no way....
m=mujhe bhi koi shok nahi ha...
s=no way..ye log phirse ladai..i'm out...
g=mai bhi.. sg goes other way n mayur keep on fighting.....
precap: mayank hides nupur's pager riddhima scolds nupur....
sajan share moments with the children n samrat falls on gunjan while playing....
party at riddhima's place.....ladki kyun song....
guys sorry for short n delay update..my exams are going on...enjoy n do comment.......i'll try to update longer one....
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update dear.....exited for next part and song....tc.
Posted: 14 years ago

hey!!!

cute update dear,,,

liked it,,,,,ohh mayur they are cool yaar...

so dmg gang is back ha!!!!

well am really eager for next part,,,party at ridz place....

well update soon and all the best for exam....

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