Pavitra Rishta - Chapter 4 (PG 3) ArMan Meet

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Pavitra Rishta

Dates of Update - Monday, Wednesday and Friday

Links to Chapters
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Characters

Manav [Sushant]

Archana [Ankita]

Nandhini [Divyanka]

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Chapter 1 - First Meeting

Archana pushed through the early morning crowd. She looked radiant even with simple makeup and every part of her sparkled. She reached Ganapati bappa and mentioned her prayer in silence. She surveyed the crowd of girls surrounding her and called out to her mother.
"Archana, you stay there until the prayer is complete!" Sulochana shouted.
Archana turned around and continued her prayer.

Manav was lying awake thinking about the busy day ahead and his phone rang. He moved quickly to the other side of the room hoping to answer a call of a needed customer, but the call was from Nandhini, his boss' daughter.
"Manav, get to the station temple," she said urgently.
"Are you OK?" He asked impatiently.
"No!" She ended the call.

Manav braked his bike near Nandhini's car. He looked through the closed window of the car and it was unoccupied. He turned to look for Nandhini, when an old looking woman approached him.
"She awaits you in the temple," She said softly, giving him a smile.
Manav smiled back and rushed inside.

Manav moved through a crowd of young girls bickering about the early morning prayer. He came to a halt when Archana turned and called, "Aai!" All of a sudden his mind shifted and he moved closer to her, breathing in her subtle fragrance.

Please share your thoughts and suggestions.😃 The chapters will be short this week.

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Devashree

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Posted: 14 years ago

I really loved it.Thanks.

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Latha Ramanujam

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Posted: 14 years ago

super 1st chapter. Pease continue even if they are short they are always welcome.

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Thanks for the encouraging comments!😃

Chapter 2

"Manav," a female voice whispered in his ears. He turned around and Nandhini was giving him a silly face.
"What are you doing here?" Manav asked, bewildered by Archana's beauty.
"Duh! I told you to come here," she answered as she clipped her bushy hair.
Manav took a quick glance at the unaware girl next to him and turned to see whether Nandhini had noticed. Nandhini rolled her fine eyes towards Archana.
"I'm not good enough, eh?" She dragged him out of the crowd forcefully.

"Perfect morning." Sulochana handed some prashad to her husband. She continued, "Where is everyone? Archana, you get ready fast!"
Manohar moved closer to his wife, "Varsha didn't take the day off and Vaishu left complaining how things are disrupting her studies."
"Archu stopped her studies to look after these two, but they show no kind of respect to her!" Sobbing hard, sulochana sank into a chair.
"Aai, Varshu forgot to take her lunch." Archana walked in from the kitchen carrying Varsha's tiffin box. Her heart sank seeing her mother and rushed to comfort her.

Varsha entered her boss' room and closed the door quietly.
"Welcome, Varsha," he said and looked at his watch. "Late. Once again!"
"Sorry, sir."
He moved to his drawer and pulled out an envelope. "Your payment," he added.

Well that's all for today! Keep your comments/ suggestions coming!😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Thamizhan, that's a very nice idea to write the tamil version of PR as a FF .. well written and explained, continue soon ..
ps : love ur Surya-Jo avi

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Sadvita

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks its really interesting,looking forward for more chapters.:)

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

Can't wait for the next part!!! 👏 Wow things r quicker in this serial... Archana and Manav meet in the first episode itself! I guess our Hindi serials love to drag.😆

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Chapter 3

Varsha walked in and observed the situation.
"You don't say what my daughter deserves and she deserves way more!" Sulochana shouted.
"Look for a mechanic, not an engineer," the lady said. Her son and husband nodded.
"Out!" Sulochana pointed her finger to the door. Vinod and Manjusha moved closer to support her. "Archu deserves more," Sulochana repeated, turning to her husband. Manohar lifted her head and wiped her tears away. Inside, Archana cried silently into the pillow she was hugging close.

"What educated, employed girl would want to marry you?" Nandhini asked and took another sip of her coffee.
"It's not all about education or employment," he answered and moved his cup closer. Silence occupied the local caf for a few minutes. Manav stared blankly into his cup, avoiding eye contact.
"We can't sit around all day, you know?"

"Aai thinks she's going to get Archu married to an engineer."

"What a joke!" Vaishu added. Both laughed knowing Archana was listening to them from outside. A single tear rolled down her soft cheek and Sulochana grabbed her hand from behind. Archana wiped her tear and carried on cleaning the shelves. Sulochana walked inside the room. "I will make sure myArchu is married to an engineer, NOT A MECHANIC!" She moved closer to her daughters and added, "When you laugh at her, you're actually laughing at yourselves!" .

Thanks again for all the comments an keep 'em coming!😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow...looks like unlike hindi show in tamil version the sisters dont have a good relationship with Archana. Atleast here Varshu and Vaishu love Archu.

Am I right T?

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