Made for you - AR one-shot

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Posted: 14 years ago

HEY!!

I wrote this one-shot for a cotnest a long  time ago, so just thought of posting it here -
 
Made for you
 
She woke up with a twinkle in her eye. She was tired, definately but a good night's sleep did wonders to her! Since it was a Sunday she need'nt get up this early but she was an early riser πŸ˜‰. So she got up n checked her cell for the time but she found a SMS. She clicked on the 'Open' button to display it.

"I love u! Meet my at 8 at The Empire"

'Wow' she thought, who could be sending this to her. She thought of ingoring it because maybe it had to go to someone else n it came to her. But she did a feel a bit happy on the inside what if it was for her. 😳

She thought that maybe she will go as anway its a Sunday n did'nt have much to do.

She waited desperately for the evening. but she herself did'nt know why she was getting this separate! She picked up the most beautiful dress she could find in her wardrobe. She knew that whatever she wears it cant impress  but still since she had got that SMS she had decided she will try to her look her best.

She got ready wearing a purple one-strap knee length dress. She did look elegant but she failed to believe that she can ever look beautiful. 😳 
She walked into The Empire , n could see everyone busy in their own world. Then she asked her the waiter if any table was reserved for her. " Ridhimma Gupta?"
The watier smiled n led her to a table which had being beautifully decorated. It was facing the beach n there were was a rose kept on the table. She looked at impressed πŸ˜‰ 
She sat down looking for the guy who had called her here. She waited for 10 mins, still no sight of him.
"Sorry to keep you waiting, just wanted to know how eager u are to meet me! πŸ˜‰" , a voice was heard above all the gossip going on.
She turned around to have a look at the guy who said this. She was shocked to see an amazingly-handsome n extremely hot guy standing there. Now she felt it was obvious that the SMS had reached her by mistake. But the guy seemed to be looking at her. πŸ˜•

She got up, very embarassed n was heading towards the door. A hand held her. She was feeling weird .
She turned around n apologized " I'm sorry! I know that this was'nt for me but i just came along.."
She was interrupted by him " Ridhimma! I am the one who called u here. n it was YOU!"

He continued " I remember the 1st day i saw u - in college?! "
She was ultimately shocked 😲 i had never seen him in college n he would have definately been popular, he looks so smashing hawt 😳.
" You were wearing this jetang red suit πŸ˜† ..yeah u did look funny yet beautiful πŸ˜‰.."
She blushed a bit n was a bit embarassed too. 😳 
"U were smiling  at this guy who you found very cute" he said with hurt visible in his voice. She looked him in the eye, he did seem hurt.
"But truly speaking that guy wasnt worth you πŸ˜›..he used drugs..! 😑" Ridhimma's mouth literally fell open - Vicky used drugs?! 😲 She loved that guy..n she did'nt know this till date..!
" n d 2nd time i saw u  was when you had gown to the shopping mall with ur frnds. You seemed to shy to try on anything but i remember Muskaan forcing you to try on a really pretty yellow gown n i then i was so mesmerized that i decided this is it ..ure my bride..πŸ˜‰"
Ridhimma was happy..she knew she was...she did'nt believe in love at 1st sight but when it happens - it really exists! 😳
This guy knew so much about her, so he definately deserved a chance! But still she atleast wanted to know his name n stuff. πŸ˜›
"You noe a lot abt me..me liking Vicky was not even known to Nikki - my best friend..well i guess u noe tat too..so it really seems wow! " she said still surprised how he knew about Vicky.
" Bas bas..hana sab pata hai mujhe...now jus cum wid me..!" . he said n without waiting for her answer pulled her hand n embraced her in a HUG!
"Armaan Mallik swears to stand by Ridhimma Gupta throughout his life n if possible after that too 😳" Armaan screamed out!
Ridhimma was touched she broke the hug n looked into his eyes, she could see only one thing - LOVE! n as they say ones eyes can never show so much passion if that person is lying or faking. Armaan so would'nt be doing that to her. She knew!

She looked into his eyes. blushing a little " And Ridhimma will keep forgiving all ur mistakes throughout her life" The crowd present burst into laughter πŸ˜† 
n Armaan and Ridhimma - were in love, deeply and truly.
 
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Yeah i know,bad attempt.

Anyway pass ur comments.

-aish

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k_anjali12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
 
 
 
                               Hey I read this one shot in a contest!!

Its really a nice oneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Edited by k_anjali12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
woahhh.. u calling it a bad attempt?? 😲😲

its awesome meri jaan.. hayyeee sooo romantic..
i hv to confess that all i cud imagine here ws KaSh and only KaSh..

superbly writen.. πŸ‘
keep that coming meri jaan.. wud luvvv to read them πŸ˜‰
Edited by freezinme - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey it was really gud and simple really sweet

Edited by kajen - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
It wasn't a bad attempt, I thought it was cute like young love freshly blossoming, As a reader you can sense the spring. Their new love like a small bud opening in spring. Yet to blossom.

Thanks for the PM

Sophxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
woah dear  its really an awesome one mind blowingso cute thanks for the pm


From Ridhima "The happiest day of my life
was the day that I met you,
Always loving and understanding,
with a heart of gold too....
You'd always show how much you care,
with the loving things you do,
From a tender kiss to a warm,
embrace and whisper "I LOVE YOU"
We've had a lot of happy times,
and also had some tears,
but our love for each other,
still remained strong,
throughout the years....
All goods things have to,
come to an end it's sad I know,
but true though in my heart,
I know that I will always love you,
And your heart of gold...." To Armaan









Nidha 
Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy aish...
that was a nice read hun :) it was a simple and sweet story...
i've actually read it when u posted it for the contest and halfway thro' reading it now, i felt that i've read it before and then i remembered ur post in that contest :) it was nice reading it again...
 
thanks for the pm...
nice one :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey aish
 
it's awesome dear.......nice one shot.........loved it....
 
prinnia
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey aish that was beautiful one shot
it was realy cute and adorable
i loved it very much
the idea for the first date was just amazing
do write more of one shot
u r gr8 at it
thanxs for the PM
lov u lods
nruti
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was extramly cuuutee hun sooo beautiful i just looved it ^^
 
Love, Nina^^