Dil Ne Jise Apna Kahaa-mini FF*NOTE Pg 3*

Jis bepanah pyaar ki jhalak maine uss din dekhi thi...
Usse main roz ru-ba-ru hoti hoon..
Har roz mayank ki aankhon me main..
Apne liye beintehaa mohabbat dekhti hoon..

Uske pyaar se bejaan phool bhi mehekne lagte hain...
Laakh rokna chaahu main khud ko lekin..
Iss mohabbat mein ye kadam behekne hi lagte hain..

Hawaaon mein ab bhi uski goonj hai..
Fizaaon mein ab bhi uski khushboo hai..
Chhayi hai aisi deewangi mujh par..
Ki ab bhi uske khayalon me mere hosh gum hain..

Pehle hum dil ki baat labo tak laa nahi paate the..
Aur unke dil ko yoon hi behlaate reh jaate the...
Magar pyaar ke wo 3 shabd keh kar unse..

                      Hum to unke aur bhi kareeb aa gaye hain..
(credit to Ankita(Falak01))

 

 

Edited by ranbir_lekha - 14 years ago

Originally posted by: born_only_4_IF

nice concept

Lovely concept Lekha!

Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Lovely concept Lekha!

so sorry nupur die i cant digest it so sorry 😭 i never imagine any one in nupur place 😭

Awesome concept Lekha. Continue soon and do pm me. Love ya!

 Aww, my poor Nups dies.

Originally posted by: debolinaroy08

aww but nupur dies??

yep but  dun't wanna  spoil If possible I'll update   today itself

aww nupur dies!!
very interesting tho
continue soon

hey lekha sis, wow ur going to write an ff, amzinn can't wait, but what is this you killed nupur in the story, i'm srry but i can't see anyone take the place of nupsie!! lekha sis do something please don't take her out of the story hey maybe dhani could be her long lost twin sister, and mayank meets her huh!!!!!!, how about that idea, okay fine i'll stop giving you stupid ideas now, but listen this concept looks like a movie i watched, ofcourse dil ne jise apna kaha, i just looked at your title and it hit mee, though i watched the movie long time agooooooooo!!!!!!!!!, anyways con't soon and post the first part, can't wait!

congrats

luv sanam