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Posted: 14 years ago
hello evry1......πŸ˜ƒ
this is my 1 ff........
i m not a gud writer..bt i ll try my best.......
 
my story is all about love....revenge.....pain
 
my story revolves around childhood love.......
is childhood love true.......or its just an attraction....
 
*~*childhood love*~*
 
It all started out with a peck on a cheek,
Then a small secret we swore to keep,
Isn't childhood love just so sweet?
*
He gave me a few present and flowers each time,
He even drew me a small heart that says, "Your Mine,"
How can cupid make true love ever so blind?
*
Through years sadly we grew apart,
But your face will never leave my heart,
It wasn't an ending, it was a start.
*
You started looking at other girls,
Leaving me alone in the old world,
What happened to all those sweet whispeers and words?
*
I watched you from afar,
Making sure you were in no harm,
Yet secretly wishing you were in MY arms..!!
 
 
 
 
 
my story is abt 2 best frenz...prithvi n sanyogita........their love......friendship......misunderstandings...revenge........
 
 
 

 
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Posted: 14 years ago
character sketch:
 
 chauhan family:
mr.somesh chauhan-prithvi's dad
mrs.ketaki chauhan-prithvi's mom
pratha chauhan-prithvi's sis
prithvi chauhan-a smart..intelligent..12 yr old boy
 
 singh family:
mr.jai singh-sanyogita's dad
mrs.damini singh-sanyogita's step mom
sanyogita singh-a sweet..beautiful...10 yr old girl
 
*******
 
somesh n jai are business partners.......
they live in dehradun......
they are family friends......
prithvi n sanyogita are best friends.........
 
as sanyogita's step mom is vry cruel..so..prithvi alwayz protects sanyogita frm her...
but kab tak..kab tak prithvi sanyogita ke sath rahega.........
 
 
Edited by pRaTiBhA.1990 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

hello evry1......πŸ˜ƒ
this is my 1 ff........
i m not a gud writer..bt i ll try my best.......
 
my story is all about love....revenge.....pain
 
my story revolver around childhood love.......
is childhood love true.......or its just an attraction....
 
*~*childhood love*~*
 
It all started out with a peck on a cheek,
Then a small secret we swore to keep,
Isn't childhood love just so sweet?
*
He gave me a few present and flowers each time,
He even drew me a small heart that says, "Your Mine,"
How can cupid make true love ever so blind?
*
Through years sadly we grew apart,
But your face will never leave my heart,
It wasn't an ending, it was a start.
*
You started looking at other girls,
Leaving me alone in the old world,
What happened to all those sweet whispeers and words?
*
I watched you from afar,
Making sure you were in no harm,
Yet secretly wishing you were in MY arms..!!
 
 
 
 
 
my story is abt 2 best frenz...prithvi n sanyogita........their love......friendship......misunderstandings...revenge........
 
 
 

 

Nice poem and intro pratyπŸ˜³πŸ‘.I liked ur ff's title veryπŸ˜³πŸ‘.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

character sketch:

 
 chauhan family:
mr.somesh chauhan-prithvi's dad
mrs.ketaki chauhan-prithvi's mom
pratha chauhan-prithvi's sis
prithvi chauhan-a smart..intelligent..12 yr old boy
 
 singh family:
mr.jai singh-sanyogita's dad
mrs.damini singh-sanyogita's step mom
sanyogita singh-a sweet..beautiful...10 yr old girl
 
*******
 
somesh n jai are business partners.......
they live in dehradun......
they are family friends......
prithvi n sanyogita are best friends.........
 
as sanyogita's step mom is vry cruel..so..prithvi alwayz protects sanyogita frm her...
but kab tak..kab tak prithvi sanyogita ke sath rahega.........
 
 

 
Good character sketch pratyπŸ˜ƒ.Continue soon jaanu😳😊.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

hello evry1......πŸ˜ƒ
this is my 1 ff........
i m not a gud writer..bt i ll try my best.......
 
my story is all about love....revenge.....pain
 
my story revolver around childhood love.......
is childhood love true.......or its just an attraction....
 
*~*childhood love*~*
 
It all started out with a peck on a cheek,
Then a small secret we swore to keep,
Isn't childhood love just so sweet?
*
He gave me a few present and flowers each time,
He even drew me a small heart that says, "Your Mine,"
How can cupid make true love ever so blind?
*
Through years sadly we grew apart,
But your face will never leave my heart,
It wasn't an ending, it was a start.
*
You started looking at other girls,
Leaving me alone in the old world,
What happened to all those sweet whispeers and words?
*
I watched you from afar,
Making sure you were in no harm,
Yet secretly wishing you were in MY arms..!!
 
 
 
 
 
my story is abt 2 best frenz...prithvi n sanyogita........their love......friendship......misunderstandings...revenge........
 
 
 

 


hey praty....lovely work...especially the poem
sounds good...more than good
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

character sketch:

 
 chauhan family:
mr.somesh chauhan-prithvi's dad
mrs.ketaki chauhan-prithvi's mom
pratha chauhan-prithvi's sis
prithvi chauhan-a smart..intelligent..12 yr old boy
 
 singh family:
mr.jai singh-sanyogita's dad
mrs.damini singh-sanyogita's step mom
sanyogita singh-a sweet..beautiful...10 yr old girl
 
*******
 
somesh n jai are business partners.......
they live in dehradun......
they are family friends......
prithvi n sanyogita are best friends.........
 
as sanyogita's step mom is vry cruel..so..prithvi alwayz protects sanyogita frm her...
but kab tak..kab tak prithvi sanyogita ke sath rahega.........
 
 


wow this is gona b so exciting....praty please continue
the sketch was well detailed.....wonderful work huni!!!
Posted: 14 years ago
BY GOD jaaneman, awesome start!
this sounds soooooooooo terific!
do continue and pm me!
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Posted: 14 years ago
haila praty... nyc concept..
frendship..love...revenge..sounds gud shona..do continue...........n plzzz..mail me all d UDs..kk..take care..all d best!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Nice poem and intro pratyπŸ˜³πŸ‘.I liked ur ff's title veryπŸ˜³πŸ‘.

thnxx sweety.............i knw d poem is vry sweet..jab mene padhi thi..to i was like πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒwow..
well..title is gud..hmm..afterall..tera hi idea tha madam..hehehe.....😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

thnxx sweety.............i knw d poem is vry sweet..jab mene padhi thi..to i was like πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒwow..

well..title is gud..hmm..afterall..tera hi idea tha madam..hehehe.....😳😳

welcome jaanu.
He he, sirf mere nehi tune kaha aur meine kaha thik hain.Main idea tere hi hain jaanu....😳