Tujhpe Dil Qurbaan(RN fic) PT7/PG25 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
woooooooooooooooooooooooooow
amazing story i loved every and each moment from  tujhpe dil qurbaan story
thanks for pm  me my friend
u are amazing story writer
i am waiting for ur next update πŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
after a very long period of time.........
very nice updateπŸ‘
like in lrl in this fic also naveen singh ahluwalia is naina's bro or just raj's friend character onlyπŸ˜• 
i was confused from the intro part that he is her bro or not????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx for updating

loved it 
tk ur time but dnt forget to upd 
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a surprise.
I am glad to see that you have not fogotten about this fic and that you will continue with it till the end.
Update was too good.
Alekh, sneha and Abhi are worried about their mission now that the cover has been blown.
Abhi is right, everyone except Prem and Adit are aware of their feelings for each other.
Abhi is worried about Raj....par jab tak naina uske saath hai...raj ko kuch ho hi nahi sakta. He touched to see the care that she has shown for him
Naina Raj se naraz hai kyunki usne naina ke liye apni jaan khatre mein dali thi. But all Raj can think about is the danger to her life in this mission.
The SOC and army have decided to continue with their plan and catch the terrorist. And Raj's team will be joining shortly. Loved the way in which Raj told naina about his team mates. Naina could see the special bond between Raj and naveen
Naveen is shocked to hear that his friend has finally fallen for a girl. While Harsh is worried about the mission as his father had made all the arrangements for them to attend the fare.
Raj and naina have come to lave each other deeply in the past few days. Naina is well aware about Raj's hesitation and concerns about her being in the mission. She tries to assure him that nothing will happen to her.
Waiting for the reunioun of both the teams and to see what their plan is......so please try and continue soon.
Will be waiting for your next update.
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant part. loved it.
it's ok dear, take ur time.
update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😑arey yaar...yeh LIKE button kaam kyoun nahi karr raha hai...
 
15 min se lagi hui hun...is ke piche...
 
ab ho gaya...πŸ˜ƒ
 
ab comments ki bari...par us se pahle mujhe comments likhna bhi toh hai...πŸ˜ƒ
 
tu thodi der rukk...main bhi thodi der me hi aati hun...vaise bhi mujhe teri achhe se Aarti utarni hai...πŸ˜†
 
 
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Guglu
 
So u finally updated this fiction..It was a pleasant surprise for me..I hope u'll continue updating from now on..πŸ˜ƒ
anyways update was indeed too gud...
few of the mysteries have neen solved..but danger is still there..Wat will Rajesh do now?? I hope he is not too dangerous for Raj's mission.
Aditi was so relieved to see Prem..
Raj is indeed too worried abt Naina's safety and she understands his delimma..
Is Naveen naina's brother or just Raj's friend..He was so shocked to know that Raj is getting cozy with a girl.wat will b his reaction when he'll see that his friend is head over heals in love with that same girl.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Raj and Naina's romance was subtle and too sweet..😊 
 
Do continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
heya debs ! wonderful update yaar !
waiting for more.................
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update........................................i thought that u forgot about this ff......................
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Posted: 13 years ago

Om jay Guglu mata...

Maiya Jay Guglu mata...

tum ko neet din gali det...

Guglu mata ko neet din dhudhat...

mere danda...aur thappad...laata...

Om jay Guglu mata...

bich rashte me fic ko chodat...

ud nahi deta...

Guglu mata ...ud nahi deta...

ek saal baad..aata(2)

chota sa phir ud deta...

om jay Guglu mata...

gali dete dete hum thakat

in pe koi farq na padta...

maiya Guglu par koi farq na padta...

phir jab do darzen gali dett...dimag ka batti jalata...

hai Guglu mata...

next tym agar phir se ud late hott

hum is baar kuch na kahenge...

bass...thappad aur gali se apna kaam chalenge...

phir aap ko jo bhata...hum vohi parcel karta...

Om Jay guglu mata...

 
bhakton gan...aarti khatam hui...ab sabhi zor se Mayian guglu ko galiyan do...taki yeh dubara late UD karne ke bare me soche bhi na...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†