I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 3

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Sumaiyyaaaaa!!!! Umm....dear jis din aap mujhe apna naam PM kar dengi uss din shayad kripa ho jayegi aur main bhi apko iss kadar pyaar se pukaar paungi...😆

 

 hadh hai yaar!

 

inform bhi nahi keeya????😡 Extremely sry abt that....apne iss bhulakkar dost ko shama karna😳😳😳

 

Dost dost naa raha..😭😭😭 Look who's speaking...apna naam tak PM nahi kiya abhi tak tumne😭😭😭

Achcha ab nautanki bandh!!😃 Mera bhi....😆😆😆

 

Nice prologue!! thnx

 

Asmi is in a way in pathetic condition....parents ka hokar bhi naa hona is pathetic! I knw its pathetic......but dont worry Main Hoon Na....and even if I am not there....hamara hero hai na....apna Shahrukh😉😉😉

 

Waitingggg for more!!!! Kal UD kardungi dear

Thnx for commenting. Am really glad that u liked it. And yes, jaldi se mujhe name PM karo.....jaldi!!!!

Hey Sumaiya!

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon..........

This content was originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hey Sumaiya!

Finally u started ur own ff....😊I m soooo glad....d fisrt part cum prologue was amazing Thank u so much dear...am so glad that u liked it😳😳😳....I m sure dat it wil be a gr8 hit Awe....thnx for having that faith in me...I really hope to do justice with that😃😃...vese 1 year completion par badhia! Thnx... 👏I wil wait fr d nxt part.. Jaldi jaldi ud karna varna suspense k maare nind nahi ati hai Well suspense....dekhte hai kab khulta hai...pm me wen u ud Sure dear😊😊

Lotsa love

Sur

Thnx for commenting Sur. I am glad to hav ur comments.😃😃



@ Rituka7:

Thnx for commenting. Glad that u liked it.😊😊😊

😃

Part # 2

 

It's the engagement day'..and we r entering a big room''the room is very well kept'.everything is neat n clean'. very organized'..and now we c a person pacing in the room'..well that's our wud-be groom Samay Shergill (played by Iqbal Khan)'he seems to be pissed off with sumthing'just then a girl enters the room'.yup that was Asmi.

 

Asmi: Bhaiya'..(as he looks up)'arre apka mood itna bigda hua kyun hai? Sagai nahi karni kya?? (he gives her an irritated look) Aap chaho to main Bhabhi se BAAT kar sakti hu '.(she stressed on "Baat")

 

Now Samay was really irritated'.poor guy could not talk to Kinjal since yesterday'actually Kinjal was really busy n cudnt manage to talk to him properly '.and so lover boy was extremely frustrated.

 

Samay: Haan haan'.ja kar baat kar na'..kuch bhi baat kar'..yaha kyun khadi hai'.sab baat hi to karte hai'..tu bhi karle'yaha to sabko baat karna ata hai'mujhe hi nahi ata'.

 

Asmi: (giggled) Bhaiya'.apna chehra dekhiye aaine me'.kitna frustrated lag rahe hai'.agar koi dekhega to kahega'.aap se zabardasti se ye sagai karwai ja rahi hai'.hehe

 

Samay: Jisko jo kehna hai kahe''(murmers) jise kuch kehna chahiye wo to nahi kehti'.

 

Asmi: Bhaiya'that was loud enough'.

 

Samay: Huh'kya?.....dekh tu mujhe paka mat'.mera dimag bahut garam hai'..ja yaha se'.akela chhor de mujhe'

 

Asmi: Well, chali to main jaungi'.par apko akela chhor ke nahi'..wo kya hai na'.koi bahut betaab hai'apse BAAT karne ko'..(she shows him her mobile) lekin koi baat nahi main unse keh deti hu'.apka dimaag abhi garam hai'aap baat nahi karoge'thik hai?

 

Samay: Haan'haan'thik hai.

Asmi: (on the phn) Bhabhi'..

 

As soon as she says that, Samay rushes to her n snatches the phn n rolls his eyes'Asmi giggles n goes away'..

 

Samay: Helo''

 

On the other side, we see a girl turning'..thats Kinjal Dixit (played by Neha Bamb)'.Samay's love, life n wud-be wife'..

 

Kinjal: Samay'.tumhara phn kyun switched off hai??

 

Samay: Jee'.aap kaun bol rahi hai?

 

Kinjal: Hmm'.to janab abhi tak naraz hai'..par kya iska matlab ye hai k wo humse baat tak nahi karenge?

 

Samay: I guess narazgi ka yehi matlab hota hai'madam.

 

Kinjal: To sir'..iss narazgi ko kaise dur kiya jaa sakta hai??

 

Samay: Wo to unhe sochna chahiye jisne naraz kiya hai'..

 

Kinjal: Agar hum kaan pakre to chalega?

 

Samay: Umm'khata bahut bari thi ma'm'..itni asani se maafi nahi milegi'.

 

Kinjal: Wat abt "I am sorry"''

 

Samay: I hav 3 better words for u to say'.

 

Kinjal: Jaise?? (knwing very well wat he meant)

 

Samay: Jaise " I love you"'.

 

Kinjal: Dhatt'.Samay'pls ab iss baat ko jane bhi do na'.tum to jante ho kal main kitna bz thi'.saare rishtedaar aye hue the'.sab mujhe hi dekhna chahte the'..mujhse baat karna chahte the'.ab agar aise me main phn pe lagi rehti to kitna ajeeb lagta na?

 

Samay: Arre'tumne pehle kyun nahi bataya? Dekho tum na ek kaam karo'..ye phn rakho'aur mujhse baatein karna chhor ke rishtedaaro se baatein karo'..in fact on a better note'..sagai bhi unhi se karo aur shaadi bhi'

 

Kinjal: Samay'.dekho chupchap maan jao'.warna niche jake sabko keh deungi k ye sagai rukwade'(she warned playfully)

Samay: Arre wah'.acchi zabardasti hai'..naraz bhi main hu'..aur dhamkaya bhi mujhe hi jaa raha hai'.kisiko yaha meri fikr nahi hai'.koi PYAR SE sorry bolne tak ko tayyar nahi'.

 

Kinjal: Ab sorry to kaha na'.jab ki meri utni ghalti bhi nahi thi'

 

Samay: Thik hai'baba'.mana tumhari ghalti nahi thi'.aur tumhe kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai'.(he said being disappointed)

 

Kinjal: Arre aise kaise zaroorat nahi hai'..I need to say how much I LOVE U'..

 

Samay: Hmm''(suddenly realizing) Kya kaha'..phir se kaho'.

 

Kinjal: Bye Samay'..shyam ko milte hai'Take care.

 

Samay: Ahh'suno to sahi'helo'Kinjal''.arre yaar I LOVE U TOO'.. (sighs)'.I am deeply in luv man''(and this forms a smile on his lips)

 

Now lets go downstairs'..here Asmi is busy with many preparations. Just then a car stops in front of the mansion n we c a guy getting down from the driver's seat and there was another guy accompanying him.

 

This is wat the first guy is wearing'.

And this is wat the second one wearing''.he is also wearing glasses'

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

Ok guys, this is the 2nd part jisse UD karne me almost meri jaan nikal gayi....ye pics na!!! (thnx to goodkashish for her help warna shayad main pura din isime gujar deti😆😆) I knw its not big either n u all may want to kill me for stopping it here. But I had to end it here as it suited the best. Thnx to all for commenting n hope u like the part.

Luv,

Sumaiya (Sumi).😊😊

for part:1

hey Sumaiya...lovely start... 😛
Female lead...hmm..for me only priyanka bassi opposite rajeev.. 😉
so asmi n her brother has been neglected by their parents... their mom seems to understand them but bonded with her husband n her duties towards him that she forgot her duty towards her children..!!
waiting for the next update...!!!! 😊Edited by sweet_shona - 14 years ago

Hey vow a new RN fic just loved that yaar. Vartu is so quick na, she is already.
Good work yaar keep on updating fast.

hey nice update!!

Hiiiii Sumi......😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 14 years ago