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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088
Hi sur!Hey guglu!

Finally I finished reading all the parts of this fic. I loved the way u have portrayed Rajeev as Devraj and Pri as Naina Roy.thnqqqqq But something is certainly fishy about her. hehe uski shakal hi aisi hai i tel u
I agree with sanskruthi, even I feel that Naina is somehow connected with the girl u mentioned in the prologue and Devraj had shot her.wait nd watch yaar Is Naina here to avenge that dead girl??? I hope the mystery is cleared soon. hmm i m working on it...
I loved Naina's style of working. mujhe bhi acha laga!And Karan asked the right question- chinta kar raha hai.maybe Devraj ne Naina par vishwas toh jaldi kar liya hai par ab kya karen, ye toh hona hi tha.nahi hoga to me story kaise agey badhaungi?
I loved the description of Raj's room. It is almost a palace in itself. Woooow.thnx again!
I loved this story. Please update as soon as possible.i wil try my best
thnx a bunch fr reading and commenting!!
Love
Guglu

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter-5
Naina walked towards her bedroom which was last in the corridor. She was nearly midway when she sensed some movement behind her. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Alex and Steve. She could feel some trouble coming up but continued to walk, ignoring them.She wasnt afraid but wanted to avoid trouble.They came closer to her, walking with uncoordinated steps, clearly drunk. Alex overtook her just before she reached the door of her room.
"hey beautiful"He said grinning sheepishly.
Naina:"Get out of the way Alex if you dont like hospitals"
Steve rounded up on her and said"Cmon such a sweet gal and such stingy words...all da gals over here do this,tonight in my room"
Naina:"steve I am NOT your call girl" but they ignored her.
Alex:"Come babes..."He pulled Naina's hand and wrapped his arm around her slender waist. Steve grabbed her other hand and they begun to pull her towards steve's room. Naina didnt oppose them and let herself being steered away by them. They realised she wasnt fighting and loosened their grip to open the doors to Steve's chambers when Naina saw her chance and slipped out of their reach. They both turned back, surprised. Even though the alcohol had slowed down their reactions, they both were big, burly men with a lot of muscle. Naina knew she had to use her brains to fight them...after all they were Devraj's men, the best in the underworld. Alex roared in anger and advanced towards her, a strange madness in his eyes. Naina backed off against the corridor wall and waited for him and when he was close enough, shove her knee hard into his abdomen. He howled with pain and jumped back. Then she kicked him in his face and he fell down.Steve came to her from her left side before she had time to react and pinned her against the wall. She relaxed for a moment and then Steve was howling too...she had stamped his foot with her high heels. His grip slackened and she punched him hard in the eye. He also stepped back a few paces. Grabbing the opportunity, she picked up a long glass show piece and smashed it on his head. She went to Alex who was recovering and banged his head against the wall. Both Alex and Steve fainted. She dropped the glass piece, flipped back her long hair and said softly"I warned you"
Hearing the glass break Devraj and Karan, who were both talking in the hall looked up. Security guards ran past them to check and they followed. when they reached, Naina was gone and both the men were lying in the corridor, bleeding a bit. everybody was shocked and their immediate reaction was that somebody had broken into their house. The guard called up camera room and heard something and cut the phone relieved. He turned to Devraj and answered his silent question"They tried to force Miss Roy to sleep with them, so she did this"
Devraj supressed his amused smile and looked at the men. He ordered him to take them to their rooms and attend to their wounds, if necessary. He nodded and with the help of 2 other men dragged Steve and Alex away. Devraj looked at Karan who raised his eyebrows quizically.
Karan:"Ye sab kya tha? Chalo camera room me chalke dekhte hai"
Devraj:"Chalo"
They went to the camera room and saw the action replay of the whole fight. By the end of it, Karan and Devraj were both feeling highly entertained.
Karan:"Fools, both of them...I never thought it would be so easy for her"
Devraj:"In dono ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...Mujhe pehle se hi unki niyat par shaq tha...I think Naina ne jo kia wo sahi kia"
Karan:"Haan, tumhe kabse wo galat lagne lagi...par kuch zyada nahi ho gaya?"
Devraj:"Haan par uske baare me kal subah baat karenge"
Karan:"yeah I would love to see her reaction"
Saying this, Devraj left and Karan went to Alex who was coming around by now. He walked to his bedside and slapped him hard. Alex looked up confused.
Karan:"I asked you to drug her and interrogate her, not try to rape her"
Alex:"I am sorry I was doing that only but Steve said lets have some fun so..."
Karan:"You are a useless scoundrel...keep drinking like this and you will be on the post of watchman of the mansion soon...and dare to tell anyone that I asked you to do this and you yourself wont realise what will happen to your corpse."
Karan left to sleep fuming, as his plan had backfired. He had asked Alex to accompany Naina for a drink, drug her and then try to make her speak. But the idiot fell for her beauty, got drunk and beaten up by a woman. Karan knew it was useless now to try something else with the help of these guys as Naina would be alert. But he was still determined to rip off that composed look from her face. He had an odd feeling that Naina was trying to impress Devraj with her so called unassuming behaviour. He wanted to save Devraj at any cost and he knew very well that Devraj was not an emotional person on the surface, but even he had some points, if pressed correctly, could lead to his downfall. And he was the only man who knew where these points were. He was secretly glad that Devraj was single because most of the gangsters owed their downfall to their mistresses.
Lost in his thoughts, he walked into his room and laid down on his bed and fell asleep without changing.
Next morning, Devraj called the meeting to discuss their plan. Everyone knew that this mission was a reply to Maxwell for his attack on Devraj at that party, but nobody dared to speak it aloud. They knew that forgiveness was not there in his dictionary.
Everybody arrived at the right time. Devraj was the last to arrive along with Karan. He observed Naina carefully.She was dressed in black trousers and a short sleeved shirt and was going through the file she had brought along with her. Her left wrist had deep blue bruise marks. A small voice in Devraj's head said that he wanted to murder Steve for that but he shut it down and looked at Alex and Steve. Alex was still sporting the black eye and a swollen temple. Steve had limped to the meeting hall and was wearing a bandage around his head. They were looking very uncomfortable and comical as they tried to avoid the questioning gazes around them. Every time their eyes flitted to Naina, a shiver passed through their spine. Amused, Devraj started the meeting.
Devraj:"Goodmorning gentlemen...and Miss Roy.I hope you all have made some efforts towards the tasks assigned to you. Miss Roy?"
Naina looked at him and passed him the file"Boss, I went to some trusted contacts of mine and we followed Ronald Black for sometime. This man is very cautious and never travels in the same car twice in a month atleast. His visits are random and hold no particular pattern. But every week, on Thursday, if he is in the town, he goes to this casino bar for gambling. Its a small place, nothing special near the outskirts of the city. But there too, he is accompanied by his guards and plays in a separate room made for him only. He never goes into that place without sending his guards first. After they have checked every corner of the place, only then Ronald Black enters. New members are not allowed to go in there so first one of our men have to become a member of this casino club and win over the trust of these people. This can take a lot of time and surpass our one month deadline so we have to think of another way..."
Devraj looked at the file carrying the details thoughtfully and said"Good work Miss roy". He got up, took round of the conference table and sat back on his chair.
Finally he spoke "I think we have to do this simultaneously...This thursday that is tomorrow Harry, your informer will keep an eye on this casino club and note down the timings of of arrivals and departure of Ronald Black and his men. After that has been verified, Steve send your shooters to the 3 lock ups...wait a second, arent these men going to be released on Thursday?"
Karan:"Yes"
Devraj's face lit up with his famous dangerous smile and he threw back his head and said
"All said and done then. We will shoot these 3 men when they are being released along with Ronald Black. Release timings are 5 in the evening and at that time Ronald Black will enter his club. This is a one time mission...Steve get your very best men on the job, no newcomers. Naina you can assist him...infact, you take up Ronald Black, Steve you go for those 3 men. shoot them just as they step out of the lock up. And no body should survive...Try not to kill the cops,but go ahead if you have to. no civilians are to be targetted.Do I make myself clear?"
They all nodded and were again signalled to leave.
"Alex, steve and Naina, please stay back"Devraj said in a light voice. Alex and Steve froze as though Devraj had announced their death sentence. Naina simply looked curious.
Devraj walked upto them and said"I think its pretty obvious why I have called you...What happened to you Alex and Steve?"
Alex and Steve exchanged glances and steve spoke"Ummm boss actually we...uh"
Devraj raised his eyebrows and said in a chilling tone"I know very well what happened and let me warn you, this is for the first and last time I am tolerating your behaviour. If in the future you tried any thing like that, you know what I do to miscreants. I would have punished you myself but it seems Miss Roy has done better than me. Apologise to her right now."
Alex and Steve hung their heads and turned to Naina who stood looking bored as usual and she said
"Dont bother cuz I wont forgive them... You guys are sick...you wont get any complaints in your work boss, I have worked with worse men than these 2... but never ask me to befriend them."
Devraj:"Thats your personal problem...Nice moves by the way"
Devraj turned to Naina and said"Get ready, I have to leave for a conference meeting with the corporate heads of my companies. You and Karan will come with me along with John."
Karan was unusually quite that day. They nodded and within 5 minutes, both of them were standing near the Gates waiting for Devraj. He arrived and Naina got in the car, in the passenger seat, while Devraj and Karan sat in the back seat. 2 cars followed them and 2 lead them giving Devraj a complete cover. The meeting was to be held in a 5 star hotel. They reached there and went in towards the venue.
In the meeting Devraj discussed his companies' Annual reports and marked new profit targets. After it was done, they came out and and just as they stepped out of the hotel, Naina and Karan suddenly sprang in front of Devraj to protect him as they saw a bullet being fired from a gun. End

I know as usual ud late ho gaya par kya kare, I was not well.

ab jaldi jaldi comments likho taki mai naya ud karu...jitne zada comments ayenge utne jaldi ud karungi...

AND YES CHECK OUT D PIX I HAV POSTED ON 1ST PAGE....

love

Sur😊

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 14 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Sur,

Great update. Naina did the right thing with Steve and Alex. They deserved more than that. Wow!!! That was a great action scene.😆 😆 😆 Devraj and Karan were amused when they saw the tapes. Well, they ought to be.

So Karan wanted to drug and intoxicate Naina and then find out the truth about her. His sixth sense says that something is wrong about Naina. Well Karan, I support your gut feeling. Even I feel the same. Naina is trying a bit too much to impress Devraj and her cool, controlled and calm exterior give the signs of something very mysterious in her interior. Devraj is falling a bit too sonn for Naina. Stay away Raj, she may betray you!!!😡 But then humari Sur hai na!!! Sab sambhalne ke liye.😆 😆 😆 😉 😉 😉

So the moment Devraj came his eyes went towards Naina and he saw the bruise marks on her wrist. Lakshan ache nahi hai Raj bete. Tu toh gaya.😆

Somebody has again attacked Devraj. Karan and Naina sprang forward to protect Devraj. Good.👏. But I would like to know what this Karan is upto.😕. His silence is giving me a strange feeling.

Do update asap.

Love
Guglu
Edited by guglu088 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi sur,,,

Superb,mind blowing update 👏

Naina ne kya pitayi ki .......just too good How dare they touch naina,samaj kya rakha hain ye log........ usne pehle warning bhi ki steve aur alex ko,phir bhi donon ne seriously nahi liya aur natija ek ko swollen eye,aur dusre ko bandage on head n limping 😆😆😆

I just loved the whole scene ,the way she handled them cooly with out panicking ...... she made them fainted aur aaram se apni room mein chaligayee

Karan ,raj aur sabhi security aagaya ye awaz se socha koi gusgaya house mein lekin badh mein pata chala ye sab miss.naina roy ne kiya hai,when raj n karan saw the tapes they feel like entertained…….ab ye koi action sequence se kam tha kya...... aur raj ne bilkul sahi kaha that naina ne jo kiya wo tikh kiya ……karan ka poochna when did naina was wrong for u…….so true

To ye sab mr.karan ka idea hai....... he asked them to drug naina aur sach bahar nikalvawo ki wo kis maksad se aayi……….par galat admiyon ko chuna apne plan ke liye …..vaise naina itni jaldi haath main nahi anewali….are fic ke heroine jo hai, smart hai

Me also feel same like karan ki naina kuch jyadahi raj ko impress kar rahi hai aur wo bhi itni jaldi ,jabhi mein padthi hun ki naina stand there or sit there with boring face meri shak aur badthi ja rahi hai

Naina ne kafi investigate ki hai Ronald black ke bare mein kahi ye naina police wali hai kya….hehehehe…. ..i know meri ye guess kuch jyada hi weird lag rahi haina 😃

Meeting mein aate hi raj ka pehla kaam naina ko dekhana n naina ki hand pe bruises dekh ke usko bahut gusa agaya steve pe………ummmmmm so much concern ,😉

Raj asked steve n alex to say sorry to naina n warned both of them………why this karan is so calm……is he planning something

In a short time only naina kitni khass jagah bana li devraj ki gang mein,he took her to the conference also along with karan n john

Ye hamla kisne kiya ……….hope raj ,naina aur karan safe ho

Its a beautiful update dear 😃

n your choice of actors for karan n sam is so good ,👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼👍🏼

plz take rest n get well soon 😊

waiting eagely for the next part

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey firstly awesum pix....hehe. I always knew its Rajeev as Devraj but then a confirmation is always pleasant.😳 Well the part was gr8 as usual.....u describe everything amazingly. But just like Karan I dont Devraj to be so much impressed by Naina n trust her....I knw they r the pair here....but Raj's safety means the most. 😳😳

But then why am I worried....I knw my Sur....she'll never do anything bad to Devraj...right?😃

Pls continue soon dear.

P.S. I'm sorry for keeping it short...but am in a hurry dear. I knw u understand.😳
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

kya ud tha yaar...just mindblowing...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!! vaise bhi mujhe actions baht pasand hain. khaash kar k jab ek girl yeh sab karti ho na...toh main kuch jyada hi xcited ho jati hun. personally main bhi kafi action scenes karti hun(real lyf) na...toh isiliye mujhe baht achha lagta hai...!!!

phir se ek baat siti maarti hun phir is ud k bare me batati hun...!!! yaar kya mast fight ki naina ne...!!!too gud...too gud...too gud...!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

naina ko pata tha ki voh ba***** us k sath kya karna chahte hain...toh us ne kitni sujh bujh k sath un sab ko line me le kar aayi...!!! bichare zindagi bhar yaad rakhenge ki ek phoolan devi se hi in ka pala pada tha...!!! ab toh aqal aa hi gayi hogi un dono me...!!! vaise sach kahun toh jis tarah se tumne voh fight scene likha hai na...dat was awesome yaar...!!! main sach me baht enjoy kar rahi thi. naina ne pahle warning di phir us k baad bina detergent k dhulai kar di aur bhi apne hath aur pairon se ...vahan par washing machine bhi nahin tha...!!!👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

phir un dono ko dirty cloths ki tarah zameen me phenk kar appne room me bade aaram se chali gayi....jaise kuch hua hi nahin tha. par karan aur devraj ne sara mazra jana...aur devraj toh pahle se hi us ki hunar ka kayal tha...ab toh voh us par thoda baht fida ho hi gaya hoga...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

toh yeh sab kiya karaya mr karan ka tha. well pahle mujhe is karan par gussa aaya. par aage padha toh laga karan ne kuch galat nahin kiya tha. us ne toh bass un dono ko sachhai bahar nikalwane ko kaha tha. par voh dono toh peet kar hi mane...!!! karan...raj ki care karta hai aur us k liye apni jaan bhi de sakta hai...isiliye voh yeh sab kar raha tha...!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

par naina ne jis tarah se us gangstar k bare me information di...us se koi bhi impress ho sakta hai. matlab Ronald Black ki sare safed kaale sabhi chiz us ne bade hi achhe se samjha diya raj ko...!!!👏👏 👏👏 👏👏

mujhe lagta hai ki raj ab naina par trust karne laga hai...!!! lekin ab koi aur raj ko marna chahta hai...!!! ab naina n karan k hote hue...yeh sab toh nahin ho sakta hai. phir bhi dekhte hain ki tum kya karti ho next ud me...!!!😉

main first page abhi bhi open nahin kar pa rahi hun...!!! tabhi maine tumhare intro k bare me comments nahin kiya tha...virus aa raha hai yaar...!!! aur main un pix ko bhi dekh nahin pa rahi hun.😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

ab jaldi se ud karna😃. sare RN fic writers ki tarah late mat ho jana😛. lekin is ud me jo tumne action scene rakhe hain na naina k us k liye itni dur se aur kuch toh post nahin kar sakti phil haal mere jadu k jhappi se kaam chala lena...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

ab tumhari tabiyat ko kya hua hai...??? jaldi se thik ho jana...main wait kar rahi hun...!!!😃😃

love ya

bye

pppppp....Priya(ha ha ha...SRK style)😆

Edited by Lion_Priya - 14 years ago

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088
Hi Sur,

Great update.Thnx a lot... Naina did the right thing with Steve and Alex.ye dono hai hi aise! They deserved more than that. Wow!!! That was a great action scene.😆 😆 😆 Devraj and Karan were amused when they saw the tapes.yeah...dey like such things Well, they ought to be.

So Karan wanted to drug and intoxicate Naina and then find out the truth about her.plan to yahi tha par ab nahi raha!!! His sixth sense says that something is wrong about Naina. Well Karan, I support your gut feeling.yaar jis hisab se log karan ko like krte hai, i think i shud change d fic title 2 karan fic... Even I feel the same. Naina is trying a bit too much to impress Devraj and her cool, controlled and calm exterior give the signs of something very mysterious in her interior.u think so? Devraj is falling a bit too sonn for Naina. Stay away Raj, she may betray you!!!😡 But then humari Sur hai na!!!thnx fr da confidence dear! Sab sambhalne ke liye.😆 😆 😆 😉 😉 😉

So the moment Devraj came his eyes went towards Naina and he saw the bruise marks on her wrist. Lakshan ache nahi hai Raj bete. Tu toh gaya.😆bhai yahi to prob hai, jaha koi acha laga, wahi se barbadi shuru!

Somebody has again attacked Devraj. Karan and Naina sprang forward to protect Devraj. Good.👏. yaar Devraj Naina ko iski pagar deta hai...But I would like to know what this Karan is upto.😕. His silence is giving me a strange feeling.

Do update asap.i wil try dear
thnx sooo much fr ur precious comment

Love
Guglu

thanx a lot guglu comment nd appreciation k liye!!!😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi sur,,,Hi Yogitha!

Superb,mind blowing update 👏I m glad u liked it, thnx.

Naina ne kya pitayi ki .......just too good How dare they touch naina,samaj kya rakha hain ye log........ vahi to....gadhe kahi ke! usne pehle warning bhi ki steve aur alex ko,phir bhi donon ne seriously nahi liya aur natija ek ko swollen eye,aur dusre ko bandage on head n limping 😆😆😆naina ko pata tha na ke ye pite bina nahi sudhrenge...

I just loved the whole scene ,the way she handled them cooly with out panicking ...... she made them fainted aur aaram se apni room mein chaligayeehehe she never panics u see...

Karan ,raj aur sabhi security aagaya ye awaz se socha koi gusgaya house mein lekin badh mein pata chala ye sab miss.naina roy ne kiya hai,when raj n karan saw the tapes they feel like entertained''.ab action sequences kise pasand nahi ayenge?ab ye koi action sequence se kam tha kya...... aur raj ne bilkul sahi kaha that naina ne jo kiya wo tikh kiya ''karan ka poochna when did naina was wrong for u''.karan samjhdar hai...so true

To ye sab mr.karan ka idea hai....... he asked them to drug naina aur sach bahar nikalvawo ki wo kis maksad se aayi'''.par galat admiyon ko chuna apne plan ke liye '..vaise naina itni jaldi haath main nahi anewali'vo to hai hi...agar sahi admi chune hote to pata nahi kya hota.are fic ke heroine jo hai, smart haivo to hai hi!!!

Me also feel same like karan ki naina kuch jyadahi raj ko impress kar rahi hai aur wo bhi itni jaldi ,jabhi mein padthi hun ki naina stand there or sit there with boring face meri shak aur badthi ja rahi hai aisi hi hai vo...ab kya kare?

Naina ne kafi investigate ki hai Ronald black ke bare mein kahi ye naina police wali hai kya'.hehehehe'. ..i know meri ye guess kuch jyada hi weird lag rahi haina 😃paidayashi detective hai

Meeting mein aate hi raj ka pehla kaam naina ko dekhana n naina ki hand pe bruises dekh ke usko bahut gusa agaya steve pe'''ummmmmm so much concern ,😉ab agar hero ko heroie ki chinta nahi hogi to story kese agey badhegi bhai?

Raj asked steve n alex to say sorry to naina n warned both of them'''why this karan is so calm''is he planning something mr gadbad krne ki mood me hai

In a short time only naina kitni khass jagah bana li devraj ki gang mein,he took her to the conference also along with karan n john vahi to!

Ye hamla kisne kiya '''.hope raj ,naina aur karan safe ho vo mujhpe chod do dear

Its a beautiful update dear 😃thnx again so much
n your choice of actors for karan n sam is so good ,👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼👍🏼
glad u liked it...

plz take rest n get well soon 😊 thnx 2 ur wishes nw im back in action!!

waiting eagely for the next part

thnx soooo much fr commenting yogitha..its really encouraging!

love

sur😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hey firstly awesum pix....hehe.hey thnx glad u liked it I always knew its Rajeev as Devraj but then a confirmation is always pleasant.😳mujhe pata tha rajeev ki pic dekh k koi khush ho na ho tum zarur khush and lal ho jaogi!! Well the part was gr8 as usual.....shukriya dear u describe everything amazingly. But just like Karan I dont Devraj to be so much impressed by Naina n trust her....I knw they r the pair here....but Raj's safety means the most. 😳😳ek aur fan karan ka! now i wil surely make him the lead...hehe just joking

But then why am I worried....I knw my Sur....arre wah thnx fr d confidence!she'll never do anything bad to Devraj...right?😃meri itni mazal k sumi se panga lu! no way !!!

Pls continue soon dear.i wil try

P.S. I'm sorry for keeping it short...but am in a hurry dear. I knw u understand.😳hehe dont b sry yaar im glad k tumne comment kia, chota bada doesnt matter,

thnx a bunch fr reading nd commenting sumi dear, u r a real swetheart!

love

sur

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya
kya ud tha yaar...just mindblowing...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!thanx sooo much pppp priya!😆 vaise bhi mujhe actions baht pasand hain.i know yaar, me 2... khaash kar k jab ek girl yeh sab karti ho na...mai bhi mai bhi!toh main kuch jyada hi xcited ho jati hun. personally main bhi kafi action scenes karti hun(real lyf) na...r u a stuntwoman? no seriously batao!😉toh isiliye mujhe baht achha lagta hai...!!!

phir se ek baat siti maarti hun phir is ud k bare me batati hun...!!!bahut achi siti thi, very gud!!! yaar kya mast fight ki naina ne...!!!too gud...too gud...too gud...!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thnq thnq thnq...i was wondering k mene zada exagerrate to nhi kar dia?

naina ko pata tha ki voh ba***** us k sath kya karna chahte hain...yaar ab itni akal to hai hi usme...toh us ne kitni sujh bujh k sath un sab ko line me le kar aayi...!!! bichare zindagi bhar yaad rakhenge ki ek phoolan devi se hi in ka pala pada tha...!!!lol...sahi kaha ab toh aqal aa hi gayi hogi un dono me...!!! vaise sach kahun toh jis tarah se tumne voh fight scene likha hai na...dat was awesome yaar...!!!thnx again main sach me baht enjoy kar rahi thi.im glad naina ne pahle warning di phir us k baad bina detergent k dhulai kar di aur bhi apne hath aur pairon se ...vahan par washing machine bhi nahin tha...!!!👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏vo khud kisi machine se kam hai kya?

phir un dono ko dirty cloths ki tarah zameen me phenk kar appne room me bade aaram se chali gayi....jaise kuch hua hi nahin tha.ab batao aur kya karti wo waha? jhadoo pocha lagati? par karan aur devraj ne sara mazra jana...aur devraj toh pahle se hi us ki hunar ka kayal tha...ab toh voh us par thoda baht fida ho hi gaya hoga...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃flat hone hi wala hai Devraj Naina pe bas thodi der me!

toh yeh sab kiya karaya mr karan ka tha. well pahle mujhe is karan par gussa aaya.haan yaar karan to darr k bhagne hi wala tha par mene samjha bujha k rok liya...lol par aage padha toh laga karan ne kuch galat nahin kiya tha. us ne toh bass un dono ko sachhai bahar nikalwane ko kaha tha. par voh dono toh peet kar hi mane...!!! karan...raj ki care karta hai aur us k liye apni jaan bhi de sakta hai...isiliye voh yeh sab kar raha tha...!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊xactly!ab to bechare ko maaf kr do!

par naina ne jis tarah se us gangstar k bare me information di...us se koi bhi impress ho sakta hai. yeah...matlab Ronald Black ki sare safed kaale sabhi chiz us ne bade hi achhe se samjha diya raj ko...!!!👏👏 👏👏 👏👏ab uske lale padenge...

mujhe lagta hai ki raj ab naina par trust karne laga hai...!!!hmmmm really...ab story agey badhani hai na! lekin ab koi aur raj ko marna chahta hai...!!!very bad ab naina n karan k hote hue...yeh sab toh nahin ho sakta hai.bilkul nhi,mai hoo na! phir bhi dekhte hain ki tum kya karti ho next ud me...!!!😉wait nd watch!!!

main first page abhi bhi open nahin kar pa rahi hun...!!!aaawwwweee tabhi maine tumhare intro k bare me comments nahin kiya tha...virus aa raha hai yaar...!!! aur main un pix ko bhi dekh nahin pa rahi hun.😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭link bhejti hu tumhe ruko

ab jaldi se ud karna😃.i wil try my best sare RN fic writers ki tarah late mat ho jana😛.sorreee lekin is ud me jo tumne action scene rakhe hain na naina k us k liye itni dur se aur kuch toh post nahin kar sakti phil haal mere jadu k jhappi se kaam chala lena...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗i hug u back dear!!!

ab tumhari tabiyat ko kya hua hai...???hua tha..ab thik hai... jaldi se thik ho jana...main wait kar rahi hun...!!!😃😃i m rocking yaar dont worry

love ya love ya 2 dear

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pppppp....Priya(ha ha ha...SRK style)😆

hey Priya thnx a bunch fr commenting...pata hai, meri poori fic 1 taraf aur tumhare comments1 taraf...i just love them! kitne entertaing hote hai! kabhi comment krna mat chodna!

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