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Originally posted by: Arjun_mayankvery nice and unique concept... i liked u r FF... I am glad that u liked d concept.
can u PM mi next time when u update?i'll surely pm u next time.
Originally posted by: Arjun_mayankvery nice and unique concept... i liked u r FF... I am glad that u liked d concept.
can u PM mi next time when u update?i'll surely pm u next time.
Originally posted by: adi_guptaawesome yaar ....Thank you.
nupur ke entry next part me hoge wait for thisand the fight section is too good ..Iam happy that u liked it...awesom yaar...thx for the pm
Originally posted by: adi_guptashe cares for her mother
but why mayu not in colcatta.....Mayu cares for his mother...But he can't return to kolkata...He is doing a thesis on graphology...So he needs to stay at mumbai...nice partnext time plz pm when u update
Originally posted by: preethisvery nice dear,, so nupur child hood frined haan.. so when is she coming???
she is not coming in d next part.. Waiting for the next part do PPM me... ok...i'll surely do that.
Originally posted by: robinblue91hey...
i m so in luv wid ur ff..!!
so different i must say..!!
Originally posted by: preethiswow next part nupur conversation was wonderful.. I am glad that u liked it.
she should take responsibilities of mayank also.. Hehe...She will take...pad thoda time lagega.😆ufffffffff waiting for the next part,...
Originally posted by: hgrhrI'm really loving reading your FF...it feels like reading an old-fashioned detective novel...which has all the elements in it!! Really? 😃
I mean really....like right down to the protagonist being a man of principals....has an eye for detail....mom in kolkata...childhood sweetheart...and samrat as the best friend who's an officer...and the politics!! The graphology adds such an interesting twist! Thank u so much .....🤗The riot that broke out and mayank jumping in between...awesome scene!! I am glad that u liked the fight...I was worried whether everyone will like it or not...Something is going on here....this undercurrent of mystery is really exciting!!At Last nupur's entry!! Loved their conversation...they know each other so well!!...hmmm....mom's trying some matchmating..LOL...!soo looks like nupur's going to come meet him..!yup..She is coming...but not in d next update...AND on top of that the looong update was a treat to read!! I was wondering whether i am boring readers with long update or not..looking forward to the next part! do continue soon....! I'll update tomorrow.thanks for the pm!
Originally posted by: utfracksheyy awesome part yaar....really cool...oooh...mayur childhood frnds...dats awesome....do continue soon and pm me
Thank u.Originally posted by: KitsinHey great update! Thanx for the pm. Your FF is totally different like one of those thrillers with the right touch of family, friends and political drama!!! 👍🏼
Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfanoh nice part yaar... plzz continue soon... thanks 4 d pm dear....
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