FF:Pyar Mein Kabhi Kabhi (ch41-pg148)30/10

Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys, this is my first ever fanfic.
I got inspiration from all the wonderful fanfic writers in this forum.
So, plz do read it and comment.
Suggestions are most welcome as this is my first try at writing.
ok now proceeding ahead.

Pyar Mein Kabhi Kabhi

The story revolves around a guy who is helpful, full of energy and fills evrywhere he goes with happiness falls for a gal at first sight.Briefing up pyaar mein kabhi kabhi kya kya karna padta hai.


Character Sketch

Lalit Juneja-Head of the family.
Loves his family a lot.His decisions are to be accepted.

Gayatri Juneja-Wife of Lalit.
A mother who loves her children a lot and a wife who can never go against her husband's wishes.

Pratham Juneja-The eldest son of Lalit and Gayatri. The CEO of the Junejagroup of industries. Happily married to Gauri.An idealbrother.

Gauri Juneja- Wife of Pratham. She takes care of everyone in the family is loved by all. Likes teasing Pratham.

Prem Juneja-The middle son of Lalit and Gayatri. Apple of everyone's eye.He never says no to anyone in need. He's in the last year of his mangement studies.

Preet Juneja-The youngest one in the family.Higly spoiled by his brothers.Always lands himself into bad books of Lalit.

Vrinda-Daughter of lalit's freind who died when she was young. Brought up with the kids in the Juneja family. A good freind of prem.

Kunal-A friend of prem from school days,been with even in college.woh koi bhi kaam shuru karne se pehle subh muhurat dekhta hai.
Anjali-Prem and kunal's friend in college
Kavya- He is in the same batch as Prem, but a bit unfriendly with him and Kunal...
Yug-Vrinda's friend who later becomes prem's friend too
Heer-The happiness in her parents' life. All her wishes have been fulfilled. She faces every challenge with courage but everything changes when her parents die and she comes to live with her bua.

Daljeet-Heer's bua. She loves her daughter a lot and can go to any extent for her happiness.

Manmeet-Workingin daljeet's husband's company. A hardworking employee but he is in need of money

Meher-A bubbly, fun lovinggirl who enters preets' life mysteriously and changes it.

Ishita- Kavya's cousin. She is a very sweet girl but a bit religious.

UPDATES

CHAPTER1- PG1 " prem and his famly "

CHAPTER2- PG3 "pratham blaming gauri;"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=3

CHAPTER3- PG5
" vrindas' marriage "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=5

CHAPTER4- PG6 " emotional atyachar on preet "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=6

CHAPTER5- PG8 "prem asked to leave"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=8

CHAPTER6- PG11 " prem and kunal in college "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=11
 
CHAPTER7- PG14 "prem sees heer for the first time "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=14

CHAPTER8- PG18 " sees heer second time "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=18

CHAPTER9- PG19 " heer's family "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=19

CHAPTER10- PG22 " heer sees prem for the first time "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=22

CHAPTER11- PG25 " heer in trouble "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=25

CHAPTER12- PG28 " kavya asking prem for help "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=28

CHAPTER13- PG31 " heers' escape "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=31

CHAPTER14- PG33 " premeers' first encounter "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=33

CHAPTER15- PG36 " welcome back "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=36

CHAPTER16- PG39 " prem in canada "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=39

CHAPTER17- PG42 " heer in juneja house "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=42

CHAPTER18- PG45 " prem returns "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=45

CHAPTER19- PG50 " premeer together in office "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=50

CHAPTER20- PG52 "prathams' gussa"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=52

CHAPTER21- PG55 "pratham and prem say sorry to each other"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=55

CHAPTER22- PG57 " heer realizing her love "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=57

CHAPTER23- PG61 " prem confessing heer about his first love "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=61

CHAPTER24- PG67 "heers' proposal "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=67

CHAPTER25- PG72 " heers' gift "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=72

CHAPTER26- PG76 "angads' entry"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=76

CHAPTER27- PG85 " kavya calling prem for his marriage "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=85

CHAPTER28- PG90 " premeer plans on future "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=90

CHAPTER29- PG95 " shopping"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=95

CHAPTER30A- PG98 "heers' jealousy"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=98

CHAPTER30B-PG101 "one month aniversary"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=101

CHAPTER31- PG103 " daljeets' truth "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=103

CHAPTER32- PG107 " Kavyaanjali's engagement "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=107

CHAPTER33- PG109 " Sight seeing in hyderabad "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=109

CHAPTER34- PG112 "Singing and dancing"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=112

CHAPTER35- PG116 " Ghost House"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=116

CHAPTER36- PG119 "Fight "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=119

CHAPTER37-PG122 " Anjali's Mehendi "
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=122

CHAPTER38- PG127 "Kavyaanjali's marriage"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=127

CHAPTER39- PG132 "Premeer fight"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=132

CHAPTER40A- PG138 "Boys' plan"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=138

CHAPTER40B- PG141"Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi"
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1217267&TPN=141

CHAPTER41- Coming soon
Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Nice INTRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Continue...............
Posted: 14 years ago

thnks u ppl.it'll be updated in few hours.

Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter-1

 

A large mansion in the heart of the city decked with flowers and light. The mansion was filled with people laughing and enjoying themselves while some were busy with the last minute preparations. Children were running here and there unconcerned about the noise they were making. A group of them ran into Lalit, who was appearing sulky and tensed. He was about to shout at them when a man in his late twenties comes and stop him.

 

LALIT: Pratham sari tayariya hogayi

 

PRATHAM: Ji papa bas sab kuch katam hone ko hai

 

LALIT: Katam hone ko hai matlab jaldi karo na

 

PRATHAM: Papa trust me sab kuch ho jayega

 

LALIT: Beta mein toh bas yeh nahin  chahtha ki vrinda ki shaadi  mein kuch kami ho tumhe toh pata hai na mene is din ke liye  kab se intezaar kar raha tha. Aaj mere dost se kiya hua vaada poora ho jayega(tears drop rom his eyes. He quickly wipes them off)

acha woh shaadi ka joda aagaya?

 

PRATHAM: aap ka ladla gaya he usse lane ke liye bas aata hi hoga.

 

Then someone comes from behind and says "aata hi hoga matlab kya? Abhi tak aaya nahin.pata karo kahan hai.hai bhagwaan kya karoon tum logon ka"

Lalit grabs the person's ear and shouts

 

LALIT: Preet Nalayak. Woh mera beta hai woh jaanta hai ki kab kya karna hai  aur kaise karna hai.

 

PREET: (angrily)mera beta matlab kya ?kya mein aapka beta nahin hoon?

 

LALIT: mene aisa kab kaha? mein toh yehi kehna chahtha hoon ki woh mera layak beta hai aur tu nalayak

 

PREET: Pratham bhaiya dekhiye na bauji kya keh rahe hain

 

PRATHAM: Papa aap bhi na aaj ke din toh isse chod dijiyeh

 

Then a woman who was standing behind them listening to all the conversation going on between father and sons comes there. She is none other than Gayatri.

 

GAYATRI: ab agar baap beton ki baatein katam hogayi ho toh jaake tayar ho jaaye.der ho rahi he.

 

Lalit then sees gayatri and says

Mujhe toh laga ki aaj vrinda ki shaadi he lekin tumhe dekhar lag raha hai ki dulhan woh nahin tum ho (pratham and preet were giggling)

 

GAYATRI:ye kya keh rahe hain bachon ke samne

 

LALIT: mein toh yehi keh raha tha ki unki ma aaj bahut pyaari lag rahi he

 

PREET: papa aaj pehli baar mujhe aapki baat sahi lag rahi hain

 

GAYATRI: preet aaj tu mere haat se mar kayega

 

PREET: No mom aap aisa nahin kar sakti

 

GAYATRI: Mein aisa kar sakti hoon

She was about to hit him when he runs away from there.

 

PRATHAM: Ma usse hum baad mein dekhlenge filhaal shaadi ka joda nahin aaya abhi tak apne baat ki usse kahan hai.

 

GAYATRI: Usne kaha hai  5min mein aajayega

 

Meanwhile, a car enters the mansion.

A tall, handsome hunk with chocolate brown eyes and a killer smile gets down with a packet in his hand and rushes inside.

 

PRATHAM: Lijiye aagaya PREM

 

Prem comes and touches lalit and gayatri's feet. He also touches his elder brothers' feet and then both hug each other.

 

LALIT: Prem tu aa gaya beta. Exams toh achi tarike se likana?

Joda leke aaya na

 

PREM: ji papa exams were good. Aab bas 1 semsiter baaki hain and joda kaise nahin lata akir meri best friend ko mene promise kiya tha.

 

GAYATRI: aab ja usse dekhar aa kab se tera intezaar kar rahi thi. Phir tu bhi jaake ready ho ja. Mene tere kapde nikaal ke rakh diye

 

PREM: Thank you ma love you.

 

He then hugs her and goes to vrinda's room. Gayatri also walks away to go and assure that everything were set. She then sees a lady stormed by a group of people asking her what to place where. It was GAURI.

 Gauri instructs everyone what to do patiently and then after the work was done she heaves a sigh of relief. At the same time gayatri comes to her and gauri is about to speak when gayatri interrupts her.

 Gayatri: I know beta saari tayari ho gayi hain aur hoti bhi kaise nahin meri bahu ne jo sab kuch sambhala hain. Sach mein I'm so lucky to have you. Aab ja go and get ready.

Prem in Vrinda's room

As soon as he enters all her friends who were teasing her leaves from there. He hands the packet to her.

VRINDA: Thanks prem and passes a weak smile

He jus says get ready soon and was about to leave the room when vrinda asks him whether what she was doing was right. He jus blinks his eyes and says yes and leaves from there.

so how was it? plz forgive me for mistakes. pehli baar galtiyaan so jaati hain help me overcome them Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
nice start to the ff,
but how comes you aint added heer and family to the character sketch???
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Star-Crazy


nice start to the ff,
but how comes you aint added heer and family to the character sketch???
 
thanks atleast someone commented i decide to quit actually
heer isn't intorduced in the story yet so just thought to keep it aside for a while
as the story proceeds the focus mainly shifts to her side and the biggest truth is
i ddn't think about the characters in her family so far 😆
don worry everything will be cleared soon
 
Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!It's a really good FF and you also have Vrinda who's also my favorite!Please continue soon and PM for the next update!
Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update get going
wish to see more
my two most fav pairs hiten and gauri(sorry if i'm mistaken but pratham and gauri i assumed its dem) & prem and heer are there
u ddn't mention heer but i guess its heer only
Edited by miilee05 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by buttercup123


Wow!It's a really good FF and you also have Vrinda who's also my favorite!Please continue soon and PM for the next update!
 thank you i jus came to back 1 last time to decide to continue it or not but now i wud do continue
yeah vrinda's der for a while and nxt update is ready it'll be updated 2mrw  or tue
i'd pm you
 
Originally posted by miilee05


wow nice update get going
wish to see more
my two most fav pairs hiten and gauri(sorry if i'm mistaken but pratham and gauri i assumed its dem) & prem and heer are there
u ddn't mention heer but i guess its heer only
 
thank you i'd surely update
yeah its hiten and gauri only i actually thought of keeping pics but culdn't so jus tell you names here
 
lait- deepak qazir
gayatri-shama deshpande
pratham- hiten tejwani
gauri-gauri tejwani
prem-harshad chopra
preet- sushant rajput
vrinda- pooja bose
 
i too lyk both of them so jus culdn't leave them😉
cumng to heer you have to be patient for a while😊
ok now i hav to prepare nxt update so dat it cud be posted 2mrw
bye ppl catch u 2mrw with another better chapter than this
 
 
Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Hi how r u?
urz ff is awesome.like all the characters.wait 4 the next update asap.
PM me when u update.
luv
Fatima

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