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MayurFF-MayurAfterMarriage[Part 12-LastPart-Pg 23] - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
aww jealous nupsi is so cute.......awesome updt

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Posted: 14 years ago

very sweet update.......!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

luuvveeddd it anshika...

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice
nice part  they love each other alot
and mayu is great car nahi purchase karna chata awesome
so now she is angry so their is some jealousy
oh love the part
Edited by adi_gupta - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guyz...I didn't expected that i'll update this one so fast...NO PMs...critisizms allowed...i know that this part is a short one but next part is gonna be longer, at least a bit...and there will be sum romance of mayur in the next part...till then...have a look here:

Part-4

When they reached home, Nupur got down from the bike with the things but didn't said a word to Mayank and when inside. There, she kept everything with a bang on the table and went to the window watching outside. Mayank saw her and went towards her.😲

M- Kya hua? Tum naraz ho kya?

N- Haan.

M- Nupur, tumne mujhe bataya nahi ki aaj Samrat aur Gunjan ghar aa rahe hain.

N- Mayank, wo dono ghar aa rahe hote to batati na.

M- Kya? Wo dono ghar nahi aa rahe to tumne uss ladki ke saamne aisa kyo kaha?

N- Wo...pata nahi kyo par mujhe achchha nahi laga jab wo ladki tumse takrayi.

Mayank understood why she was angry but he then he thought of some mischief.

M- Achchha. Par kyo?πŸ˜ƒ

Nupur looked at Mayank with a very angry face.😑

M- Achchha-achchha. Mein to bas mazak kar raha tha.

Nupur started looking out of the window.

M- Sorry.

Nupur didn't looked towards him and even didn't said anything.

M- Sorry. Please maan jao na. Dekho mein tumhare liye wohi magazine laya hu jo tumhe chahiye thi.

Mayank taking out the magazine. Nupur saw it and then had a big smile on her face.

N- By god Mayank! Mujhe to ye hi magazine chihiye thi.πŸ‘

M- Lekin mein yeh magazine tumhe tabhi dunga jab tum mujhe maaf kar dogi.

N- Thik hai. Aur waise bhi mein tumse zyada der baat kiye bina nahi reh sakti.

Mayank gave her the magazine.

N- Mayank tumhe kaise pata chala ki mujhe ye magazine chahiye? Maine to tumhe bataya hi nahi tha.

M- Wo maine tumhe ek din doosri magazine mein iss magazine ke cover ko nihaarte hue dekha tha. Fir tumhe maa se kehte hue suna tha ki tumhe ye waali magazine chihiye thi.😳

The door was opened wide. Someone came on the door. The person stood silently watching, smiling. Nupur and Mayank didn't knew about that person's presence.

N- Tum ye magazine kaha se laaye?

Mayank thought of kidding.

M- Mein apni kitabein dhoond raha tha mall mein ki tabhi achanak se ek aadmi aaya aur usne mujhe ye kitaab dete hue kaha ki ye kitaab fek dena. Iski wajah se meri patni mujhe chod ke bhaag gayi kyonki isme ek jagah ek handsome aadmi apne liye patni dhoond raha hai. Maine dekha ki ye wohi magazine hai jo tumhe chahiye to maine isse fenki nahi.πŸ˜†

N- Thanks Mayank.

First Nupur was very happy. Mayank was shocked. Then Nupur looked up.

N- Kya kaha tumne Mayank? Ek aadmi ne tumhe ye kitaab di (moving towards him) aur usne ye kaha ki iski wajah se uski biwi use chodke bhaag gayi. Aur tumne ye feki nahi kyoki tumhe pata tha ki ye kitaab mujhe pasand aayegi aur mujhe khush karne ke liye(picks up a cushion from the sofa) tumne ye kitaab (starts hitting him) mujhe de di.πŸ˜›

M- (Trying to defend himself) Arre, Nupur ruko.

He also picks up a cushion and starts defending himself and hitting Nupur when suddenly Nupur slips as she was wearing heel sandals, and she fell on Mayank's arms and they have an eye lock. The person standing on the door knocks the door but they didn't seem to regain consciousness. So, the person came inside.😳

Person- Ahem-ahem. Knock-knock. Ding-dong.

They both regain consciousness. Nupur gets up. They both were shocked to see that person.πŸ˜•

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Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
you post so soon
is it the same girl with mayu collided
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: adi_gupta

nice part

you post so soon
is it the same girl with mayu collided


no...it's not that girl...u'll cum 2 kno who's that by the next update...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very short part
But Cool
And that person is Mayu's Maa
I knpw But not sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome yaar
who is that person ???????
update next part sooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part. keep it up.
when r u updating the next1?