ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157

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Posted: 14 years ago
                                         ANKAHI...
                                      
                                        Intro
 
In background...
 
Zindagi milne aur bichadne ka naam hota hai. Jise humne siddat se mohabbat ki...dil ki geharaiyon se chaha...agar vo humain mil jaye toh zindagi ko ek nayi raah mil jati hai...naye sapne mil jate hain...naye rango k sath...
 
Pahla Pyar...
 
Pahle pyar ka zikar aate hi mano aisa lagta hai...jaise patjhaad k mausam me bhi sukh chuke daaliyon me naye komal patton ki bahar aa gaye ho. Tapti garmi ki aanch se rahat dene k liye...barshat apni thirakte hue kadmon se zameen me aa lipti ho. Dum ghut rahe roz ki zindagi me...Rajnigandha phulon ki khushboo liye hawa bah rahi ho...!!! Dil k kisi kone me kisi ne koi baht hi dil ko choo lene wali saaz ched di ho...!!!
 
Pahla Pyar...
 
Pahla pyar...achanak hi hota hai. Yeh kab ...kahan...aur kis mod par hota hai...yeh koi bhi nahin jaan pata. Koi is k bare me kuch nahin kah pata. Lekin yeh sach hai ki pahle pyar ka nasha...us ka khumaar...har insaan apni zindagi me...ek baar mehsus karta hai.
 
Aaj Rajveer ko is base-camp me do saal ho chuke hain. Aaj bhi use apne pahle pyar ka ehsaas bakhubi mehsus hota hai. Vo janta hai...sayad voh ab kabhi apne pahle pyar ko pa nahin sakta. Lekin yeh bhi sach hai ki voh kabhi apne pahle pyar ko bhul bhi nahin payega.
 
Us ki voh badi badi khubsurat ankhen...jis me sirf aur sirf sawal hi sawal bhare hue the. Us ka voh yakeen...jo yeh kahta tha ki us k sare sawalon k jawab sirf aur sirf us k Rajveer sir k paas hai. Tabhi toh vo apne chote bade har sawal le kar rajveer k paas daud aati thi. Us ki har ek zidd...sirf Rajveer k samne...!!! Rajveer par us ka sab se jyada haq...!!! Kyoun lagta tha use ki jitna haq us ka Rajveer k upar hai...aur kisi ka nahin...!!! Kyoun voh apna har ek gussa har ek anshun...apne Rajveer sir k samne bayan karti thi...???
 
Aaj mera dost apne sare ilzaamo se ba-izzat bari ho chuka hai. Aur us k sath hue sare na-insaafi ko dekhte hue...aur apne duty ko pura karte hue us ne jo kurbani di thi us ko nazar me rakhte hue...sarahana karte hue...Capt. Rajveer Singh Sekhawat ko un ki vardi wapas mil gayi aur sath hi promotion bhi.
 
Aaj mera dost Raj...Capt. Rajveer Singh Sekhwat nahin...bal ki... Maj. Rajveer Singh Sekhawat ban chuka hai.
 
Col. Sakthichandra k case ki sachhai jan ne k baad ...Rajveer k case ko... vahin army head quater me hi clear kar diya gaya. Kyoun ki agar sari sachhai bahar aa jati toh...aam insaan kabhi kisi politician par ya phir is desh k kanun par bharosha nahin kar pate.
 
Par main khus hun...baht khus hun...!!! Kyoun ki jo mere sath hua tha...voh sab mere dost Raj k sath nahin hua. Sayad isiliye kyoun ki mere sath meri mohabbat ka dhoka tha...toh Rajveer k paas meri bahen Naina ki sachhi mohabbat. Jis ki wajah se aaj Rajveer ko us ki khoyi hui zindagi...us ka gaurav...wapas mil gaya...jis ka voh hamesha se haqdaar tha.
 
Bas...aaj mere dil se yahi dua nikalti hai ki...yeh do dil jo ek dushre k liye dhadak rahe hain...ek dushre k liye tadap rahe hain...ek dushre ki yaad me ji rahe hain...!!! Voh do dil mil jaye...ek ho jaye...hamesha...hamesha k liye...!!!
 
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                                             EPISODE:-1
 
Rajveer...
 
Re-posted hone k turant baad hi use Afghanisthan bhej diya gaya tha. Do saal baad us ki wapas India me posting hui hai. us k orders bhi us ko mil chuke hain.
 
Voh nahin janta voh is khabar se khush ho...ya dukhi. Lekin yeh bhi sach hai ki in do saalon me us ne hamesha apne fav cadets ko yaad karta raha.
 
NAINA...!!! Naina ko voh tabhi mehsus karta tha...jab use is baat ka ehsaas hota tha ki us k ander ek dil hai...jo ki kisi k liye dhadkta hai. Apne har ek dhadkan me use Naina ki yaad aati thi...!!! Har ek saansh me voh Naina ki khushboo ko mehsus karta. Jab bhi Rajveer k chehre par mushkurahat aayi...toh us ki wajah...Naina k sath bitaye hue un palon ki yaad thi...!!!
 
Kabul...
 
Afghanisthan...
 
Rajveer:- "Naina...tumhe sayad pata bhi nahin hoga ki main zinda hun. Tumhe is baat ka pata na chale yahi behtar hai hum dono k liye. Kyoun ki main tumhe hamesha ki tarah sirf dard k alawa aur kuch bhi nahin de sakta."
 
Rajveer ruka thodi der...apni ankhen band ki...do boond anshun chalke us ki ankhon se...!!! Use Naina ka haseen mushkurata hua chehra dikhai diya...
 
Rajveer:- "Thanxxx Naina...!!! Tumne apna vaada nibhaya. Naveen ko begunaah sabit karwaya...!!! Mera adhura kaam pura kiya...!!! Mujhe mera khoya hua samman wapas dilwaya. Thanx...Naina...sayad is k alwa aur mai kuch bhi nahin kah sakta..."
 
Back ground...
 
"Dil...badal bane...
 Ankhen...behne lage...
 Aahain...aise uthe...
 Jaise andhi chale...
 
 Toh phir aao...mujh ko satao...
 Toh phir aao...mujh ko rulao...
 Aa bhi jaao...aa bhi jaao...aa bhi jaao...aa bhi jaao...
 
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Us jeep me baht aag lag chuki thi...
 
Voh jeep bridge k upar me se usi jalti hui haalat me niche ja kar giri...
 
Naina zor se chillai..."RAJVEER SIR..."
 
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Naina ki ankh khuli...!!! Pure pasine se bhig gayi thi voh...!!! Wall-clock ki taraf dekha...3:30 a.m...
 
Voh apne room se bahr aa gayi...
 
Voh chalne lagi...bahr pahadi ki taraf...!!!
 
Use yaad aa raha tha...!!!
 
Us ki pahli mulakat...Capt Rajveer se...hall of fame k paas...
 
Jab use Capt Rajveer ne Maj Bharghav se court room me bachya tha...!!! Us k defence me khade ho kar...jab unhone pura acadamy k rules badle the...
 
Freshers ball party k liye use dance sikhate sikhate ...Naina ki naadani par hass rahe the...
 
Freshers ball me un k sath dance karna...
 
Mentor ship k dauran use yeh ehsaas hona ki kitne khaas hai us k liye Capt Rajveer...
 
Naina ka voh bharosha apne Rajveer sir k liye...jis k liye us ne kaha tha ki ab voh Maj Bharghav se nahin darti...
 
Valentine's day par dance karte samay Capt Rajveer ka yeh vaada karna ki chahe acadamy k ander ho ya bahar...voh hamesha us ka sath denge...
 
Naina k zidd par .1857 par sath jana...ek dushre ka naam sath me us pahadi k choti par pukarna...
 
Saree me use pahli baar dekh kar Rajveer sir ka kho jana...aur Naina ka ek school ki bachhi ki tarah sarmana...
 
Aur akhiri me vo vaada...jise Naina ne puara kiya hai...
 
Back ground...
 
 (Ghum... le ja tere...
 Jo bhi... tune diye...):-2
 Ya phir... mujh ko bata...
 In ko...kaise sahain...
 
 Toh phir aao...mujh ko satao...
 Toh phir aao mujh ko rulao...
 Hooo...aa bhi jaao...aa bhi jaao...aa bhi jaao...aa bhi jaao
 
Naina:-"Maine aap ki baat mani hai...!!! Aap ne kaha tha ki aap k jane k baad,,,us jung ko jise aap ne suru kiya tha...use mai khatam karun...!!! Toh phir maine aap ki baat maan li na...!!! Toh phir aap wapas kyoun nahin aa jate...!!! Pahle bhaya...aur ab aap bhi...!!! Maine zindagi me sab se jyada pyar jin dono insaano se kiya...unhi dono ne mujhe sab se jyada dukh diya. Kyoun sir...??? Kyoun...??? Aap ne toh kaha tha na ki duniya ki koi bhi taqat humain alag nahin kar sakti...!!! Toh phir aap mujhe chod kar kyoun chale gaye...???
 
Naina jhuki...!!! Baithi zameen par...!!! Apne hathon se apne chehre ko chupate hue rone lagi...
 
Background...
 
 "Ab toh...is manzaar se...
 Mujh ko...chale jana hai...
 Jin rahon...pe mera yaar hai...
 Un rahon ko...mujhe pana hai...
 
 Toh phir aao...mujh ko satao...
 Toh phir aao...mujh ko rulao...
 Aa bhi jaao... aa bhi jaao... aa bhi jaao... aa bhi jaao.."
 
Naina ek pahadi k choti par baithi hui thi...!!! Kisi ne us k piche se aa kar us k kandhon par hath rakha...!!!
 
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Ok...that's for today...!!! Plz do let me know whether i shud cont or not...!!! Plz leave ur views here or press d LIKE botton...
 
1st episode:- pg 1
2nd episode:- pg 5
3rd episode:- pg 12
4th episode:-pg 17
5th episode:- pg21
6th episode:-pg28
7th episode:-pg37
8th episode:-pg44
9th episode:-pg51
10th episode:-pg56
11th episode:- pg65
12th episode:- pg73
13th episode:- pg79
14th episode:- pg 86
15th episode:- pg 93
16th episode:- pg100
17th episode:- pg 107
18th episode:- pg115
19th episode:- pg123/124
20th episode:- pg 131
21th episode:- pg 145
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow another RN fic n that too a continuation. I luved the way u portrayed Raj n Naina's feelings. Looking 4ward to wat happens next. Specially now dat Raj is posted in India again, I'm w8ing 4 RN meet. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 thePM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy
it was amazing ff...
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do continue wid
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...I love reading your FF's and now i have one more to read.
 
It is nice to see that justice was done, be it late but the system did work. THe system in which raj believed completely.
 
You have potrayed both raj and naina's feelings beautifully...it bought back the nostalgia.
 
But how is it that naina does not know that raj is alive.
 
Will be wating for your next update as Raj is coming back to India. I hope that naina and raj will meet quickly.
 
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
damn cool
awesome
update soon
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hai!! *Sigh*

Pehle hee Part main mujhe rula diya 😭

Rajveer ka Naina ko Yaad karna, and Naina ka Rajveer ko Yaad karna 😳 Both were a Very Emotional Scenes πŸ˜” Reading this we know very well how much they Love each other 😳 Kaash ... Voh Mil Jayye ...

By the way, i don't think i ever told you this but whenever you start a fic ... Your Wordings are soooo Beautiful 😳 and really touches my heart 😊 so well done to you for doing that πŸ‘πŸΌ

Aur Ek baat Update Tere Naina   πŸ˜†

Hum Readers par Taras ka πŸ˜” itna Emotional Attyachar Mat kar 😭 πŸ˜†

Anyways I know for a Fact this Fic is going to be just as good or better than Tere Naina so do continue ... and let me add SOON πŸ˜† and don't forget to care of yourself   πŸ€—

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Posted: 14 years ago
another fic
great yaar
very nice fic
superb start, very emitional
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome
and you dont need to ask to start a new fic because we all knew you are a wonderful writer
so plz continue plz
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it!!!

superbπŸ‘
it was very well written....
the voice over of navin...i could actuly hear it as in lrl...
and that song....it was most apt to describe their emotions....
emotions of raj and naina were beautifully written...
 
and to top it all....tumhari purani aadat...story ko exciting point pe chod do aur readers ko cliff hanger pe latkaoπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
whose hand is it?? it has 2 b aalekh....or....probably huda?? ya phir....raj aagaya???
yaar jaldi update karo....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear,
its great that u started new fic..
RN fic on lrl ... great yaar...
u should definitely continue this fic...
well i wan't to know its again a humerus fic or an intense love story...
but great start... their are some mysterious which i think will be cleared in next few uds...
so waiting for u to ud this fic soon..