Mayur FF:Tumko Na Bhool Paayenge Hum : Part 4-Pg 3 - Page 3

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

Third one was senti senti part yaar. sab k sab Neha ko bahut miss kar rahe hain.😭 😭 😭 Rahul, Sam, Mayank n Mayank's mom too 😭 😭 😭 kyounki in sab ki life me Neha k naa hone se ek khaalipan ek adhoorapan aa gaya hai n i am sure jis ko bus Noopur hi poora kar sakti hai. 😃 😃 😃

Good part. Mayank ki mom ki prayers jaldi hi rung laayengi jab Noopur ki entry hogi.😊 😊 😊

Par yaar jaldi se karo na ud.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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ashred12

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice story....one doubt- is neha dead?....waiting 4 nupz entry...pls contnue soon...can u pm me wen u update?....

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Sharona

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 3 - The meeting!
Ok i know you guys want the happy parts 😃 just a few more parts and then i will bring happiness...lots of it 😊 sorry if it's sucky-ish

*Stairs*

Mayank and Samrat are sitting there having a conversation when Diya comes
Diya : Hi Samrat
Both Samrat & Mayank look up
Samrat : Hi
Diya : Can i talk to you?
Samrat : Sure
He gets up and goes with diya
Diya : Samrat i want to say sorry
Samrat : sorry?
Diya : ya...kal jo hua...uski liye sorry
Samrat : it's ok....actually meri ghalti thi
Diya : no it was mine...i'm very sorry
Samrat : (light laugh) it's ok
Diya : friends?
She holds her hand out and they shake hands while smiling
Samrat : uhmm if you don't mind i have to get back
Diya : yah sure...catch you later
He leaves and diya is standing there
Diya : (talking to herself) hmmm i like you samrat....i like your style....kuch toh khaas hai tume

*Back to the stairs*

Mayank is in deep thoughts when Samrat comes there
Samrat : hey dude
Mayank : woh larki kaun tha?
Samrat : New girl...Uday ki behen
Mayank : oh
Samrat : ya...tum class ke liye late nahi ho?
Mayank looks at his watch and then gets up in a hurry
Mayank : got to go now...i'll talk to you later
Samrat : yah sure
Mayank & Samrat leave in opposite dirrections

*Class*

Mayank is having a hard time concentrating so he just stares outside...a song in a soft slow voice is heard

Voice-over : Tu mere jazbaat mein tu mere ehsaas mein....tu mere har saans mein hai rawaan....my love for you is all that i have..... tere bin jeena hai kya.....o jaana love you miss you har lamha

*Flashback* Hallway

Excel collge has a party for all the studenst
Mayank is seen walking through the hallway....he hears a sound coming from a room and decides to check it out...it's dark...he tries to find the switch but it doesn't work...he again hears a sound and walks forward

Neha : yeh samrat bhi na...na jaane mujhe kaha bheej diya...ap mein us stupid si box ko kaisi dund lungi....lights bhi chali gayi....oh god....yeh ladder bhi na....god please bachao

She tries to get down when her foot slips

Neha : Aaahhh

She almost falls but stands back on the ladder....mayank who heard her scream tries to get to her but can't really see anything in the dark.

Neha : (breaths in relief) thank god bach gaya

Mayank keeps walking when he accidently bumps into the ladder making it & neha fall

Neha : Aaaaaaahhhhhh

Mayank who was right there manages to catch her....neha who is very scared has her hands over her face
A light is shining a little...mayank sees her and is staring her and seeing how scared she is...she has her face buried in her hands and very close to his chest
After a small walk he manages to get out of the room....neha not knowing that they are outside is still very scared and hiding
Mayank wants to put her down but his gaze is fixated on her
She slowly releases her hands from her face and lowers them down...her eyes are shown first and then her full face
She sees mayank and is looking at him with a light smile...they both are looking at eachother lost in eachother eyes
All of a sudden the lights of the hall go off...neha grabs mayank's shirt...she holds on to him very tightly...after a few minutes the lights go back on...mayank's eyes are still fixated on her...she slowly lets go and looks up...after a while he realises where he is and what he is doing and snaps from his gaze...he slowly puts her down
Neha is looking down at first but looks up slowly meeting his eyes & gaze...she tries to turn around but her hair is stuck on his chain
She tries to take it out but has some difficulty...mayank helps her out

Neha : thanks
Mayank : welcome

She turns around and starts walking...after a few seconds she slowly turns around to see if he is still standing there but before she can she hears samrat's voice calling her

Samrat : Neha!

Samrat is standing in front of her

Samrat : what happened?
Neha : nothing
Samrat : where's the box?
Neha : uhmmm...box? nahi mila
Samrat : what?!
Neha : it was dark and scary and i couldn't find it
Samrat : never mind...let's go

They are walking towards the party when she quickly turns around to see if mayank is there..but he's not and she goes back to the party

*Back in the present*

Mayank is paying attention again. Samrat is in the canteen talking to Benji & Uday
Diya comes there
Diya : hi guys
Benji & Uday : Hi
Diya : Uday...get me a drink
Uday : ok di
Diya is looking at samrat who is dribbling a basketball
Diya : hi samrat
Samrat : hi......again
Diya laughs a little
Uday comes with the drink and they all sit down
Diya : Samrat...do you like to party?
Samrat : party? yeah why?
Diya : aaj mere ghar mein party hai...i would love it if you came
Samrat : uhm...i don't know
Diya : are we friends?
Samrat : yeah
Diya : then you have to come
Samrat : uhmmm...i'll try
Diya gives him the address
Uday : i'll be back in a minute
He grabs benji and leaves to do something
Samrat & Diya are left alone...samrat is looking around and diya is looking at him
Diya : so samrat...tell me something about yourself
Samrat starts to say something but the bell goes and he gets up.
Samrat : phir kabhi...not now...bye
Diya : ok...see you tonight
Samrat : yah sure

Hope you all like it
Note : A few more parts and then i will bring more happiness

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26javey

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Posted: 14 years ago

great part

want Nupur to come soon

thanks for the pm

cont soon

Javeria

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice part. luved the f;ashbak scene of Mayank n Neha. But Dia is getting too much wid Samrat. Lets c wat happens next. Pls continue soon.

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unknowndesires.

@unknowndesires.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome part!!! Continue soon plzzz!! Thnks for the PM!

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice part.. very sweet flashback.. waiting 4 nupz entry..

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