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IZHAAR-ek haseen shuruat-{RN-ff}imp note on pg 19.

Posted: 14 years ago
HII ALL THE LOVERS OF RN FF...HERE IS THE LINK OF THE PREVIOUS PARTS OF IZHAAR.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1023247

AND HERE I AM CONTINUING IZHAAR-EK HASEEN SHURUAT...HOPE U ALL WILL LOVE THIS TOO...AS U LOVED THE PREVIOUS ONE...

PART 1

Jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki yeh raj aur naina ke pyaar ke haseen safar ki shuruat hai, toh ab hum is safar ko aage bhadate hain.....an I hope ki aap sab bhi is safar mein mere saath raj aur naina ke saathi banenge....

NAVEEN-{at the background}-jis pal ka mujhe intezaar tha, aakhir woh aa hi gaya, woh do insaan jo mere dil ke sabse kareeb hain, aaj ek doosre ke kareeb hain, humesha ke liye, aur mujhe pata hai ki yeh saath janmon ka hai''''..inki khushi mein hi meri khushi hai'''''

Cut to point 1857'''.

Jahan par naina raj ki bahon mein sukun se leti hui hai, aur dono usi bench par baithe hue hain, jahan par pehli baar baithe the''''.naina raj ke bahon mein bade hi chain se so rahi hai'''..aur thandi-thandi hawa chal rahi hai, jis wajah se naina ke baal uske chehre par aakar phail gayein hain, raj unhe apne haathon se hata raha hota hai ki tabhie naina ki neend tut jaati hai, aur woh rajveer ki taraf dekhne lagti hai, phir uthkar baith jaati hai'''''.

RAJ-so cadet singh ab wapas academy chalne ka iraada hai ya phir yahin par saari zindagi guzaarne ki thaan li hai tumne haan''''

NAINA-sach kahun sir ab toh yahan se kahin bhi jaane ka mann hi nahin kar raha hai''''

RAJ-sir????? Oh common naina kam se kam tum mujhe ab toh sir kehkar mat bulao''''..

NAINA-{naughtily}-toh phir kya kehkar bulaon sir?

RAJ-{naina ke ishaare ko samajhte hue}-ab yeh bhi mujhe hi batana padega'''.

NAINA-{raj ko chedte hue}-ab aap nahin bataayenge sir toh phir kaun bataayega?

RAJ-oh really, bada mazaa aa raha hai na tumhe mujhe pareshaan karke'''..

NAINA-{chaunk kar}-don't tell me sir ki aap itni si baat se pareshaan ho gaye''''.

RAJ-enough is enough naina'''''''''now that's it''''..

NAINA-kahan enough sir, actually main confuse hoon ki aapko kya kehkar bulaon? I mean ki shall I call u SIR, or RAJ, or VEER, or RAJVEER ya phir''''

RAJ-"RAJ"'''''.bas "RAJ"'''''..

NAINA-{mazaakiya andaz mein}-"BAS RAJ"''yeh kaisa naam hai sir?

Raj naina ki taraf gusse se dekhta hai''''..

NAINA-{thoda sa darte hue}-thoda sa unique hai'''.but it's very nice sir, main aapko "BAS RAJ" hi kehkar bulaongi''''toh "BAS RAJ" chalein''''..ab chaliye bhi ya phir yahin rukne ka iraada hai''''..

Itna kehkar naina aage bhad jaati hai aur raj wahin par khada rehta hai''''.

Naina kuch door aage chalne ke baad rukti hai aur piche mudkar raj ki taraf dekhti hai''''''

NAINA-"BAS RAJ", common let's go''''''

Aur phir naina itna kehkar raj ke paas aati hai, aur zor-zor se hasne lagti hai''''.kya sir aap itna sa mazaak bhi nahin seh sakte''''''

RAJ-{seriously on a high pitch}-"BAS", bahut ho chukka kabse tumhaari bakwaas sun raha hoon''''.

Raj ka yeh roop dekhkar naina ek dum shant ho jaati hai, aur apni palkein jhukakar niche ki taraf dekhne lagti hai''''''..raj naina ke paas jaata hai aur use dekhkar kehta hai''''.

RAJ-cadet singh look at me''''.i said look at me''''it's an order''''''.

Raj ki awaaz sunkar naina darte-darte uski taraf dekhti hai'''''raj kuch der tak naina ko seriously dekhta hai, phir zor-zor se hasne lagta hai'''''yeh dekhkar naina thoda sa chaunk jaati hai'''..

RAJ-hahahahahahaha'''''''.kya hua darr gayi, tumhe kya lagata hai cadet naina ah singh ki sirf tumhi mazaak kar sakti ho''''''

Raj ki baat sunkar naina muh banakar doosri taraf turn ho jaati hai''''..

Aur phir kehti hai''''.."waise main bilkul bhi nahin dari thi"'''''..

RAJ-ok baba main dara tha, thik hai khush''''''.ab chalein''''''

Aur itna kehkar raj aur naina academy wapas jaane lagte hain'''''tabhie naina raj se kehti hai'''''.

NAINA-lekin sir aapne bataya hi nahin ki main aapko finally kya kehkar bulaaon?

RAJ-only raj''''..

NAINA-ooooo''''

Raj naina ke lips par apna haath rakhte hue''''.

RAJ-"raj"'''''

NAINA-{sir hilaate hue}-"raj"''''.

RAJ-that's better''''..aaj tumhe hua kya hai naina?

NAINA-mujhe, mujhe kya hoga sir? I mean raj'''.i am absolutely fine''''.

RAJ-really is that so, mujhe toh nahin lagta''''.

NAINA-{pyaar se}-toh phir tumhe kya lagta hai raj?

RAJ-mujhe lagata hai kii''''..

NAINA-kiiiiiii?

RAJ-ki kuch nahin'''.

NAINA-mujhe na tumhaari yeh baat bilkul bhi pasand nahin hai, apni baat kabhie poori hi nahin karte ho''''.bas saamne waale par chod dete ho ki woh guess kare''''aur is chakkar mein uska network jaam ho jaata hai''''..i mean kii''..

Raj aur naina ek doosre ki taraf chaunk kar dekhte hue kehte hain''''."POOJA"''.aur phir dono zor-zor se hasne lag jaate hain'hahahhahahahaha''''''.

RAJ-lo hum log pahunch gaye''''..pata hi nahin chala ki baaton hi baaton mein kab manzil aa gayi''''

NAINA-{with a sad expression}-pahunch gaye, itni jaldi'''''.

RAJ-{shocked}-what do u mean by itni jaldi? Haan, zara ek nazar apni ghadi par bhi dauda lo, tumhe pata hai raat ke 1:00 baje rahein hain''''.

NAINA- mujhe kaise pata hoga,ab main ghadi dekhun ya phir tumhe dekhun?

RAJ-{apna sir hilaate hue}-that's really sweet of u cadet singh'''''.now lets enter the academy too''''

NAINA-lekin raj hum andar kaise pahunchenge?lights off ho chuki hain''''..aur academy ke saare gates bhi close ho chuke hain''''.

RAJ-bilkul ho chuke hain'''.

NAINA-toh ab hum andar kaise jaayenge?

RAJ-who sab tum mujh par chod do'''''tum ek minute ruko main abhi aaya''''

NAINA-lekin tum jaa kahan rahe ho?

RAJ-tum sawaal bahut karti ho naina''''maine kaha na main ek minute mein aaya'..ab tum yahin par ruko''''.aur yahan se ek kadam bhi nahin hilaogi got it''''.

Aur itna kehkar raj wahan se chala jaata hai'''..

NAINA-plzzz jaldi aana raj''''..

 Aur itna kehkar Naina chup-chap wahin par khadi rehti hai''''..ki tabhie naina ke piche se koi aakar uske muh par apna haath rakh deta hai''''''..

END OF PART 1.PLZZZ DO COMMENT'''..



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Posted: 14 years ago

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!!

We continue the beautiful journey of Raj and Naina's love!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Navin is very happy to see ke jo do insaan uske dil ke sabse kareeb hai aaj woh ek dusre ke kareeb hai hamesha ke liye!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Usne sahi kaha ke yeh saath janmon ka hai!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ

Raj and Naina continue sharing this special moment!!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

Naina Raj ki baahon mein leti huyi hai aur dono ush bench par baithe huye hai jahan pehli baar baithe thhe!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³How romantic!!!!😳 πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ

Raj Naina ke baalon ko hata raha tha tab Naina ki neend tut jaati hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How cute!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

Raj aur Naina kitne acche lag rahe hai ek saath!!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ

Naina ka toh waha se jaane ka mann hi nahi kar raha hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

I loved Naina's playfulness!!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³Woh Raj ki acche se khichai kar rahi hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina ka bas Raj bulana was great!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£Raj now pretends to be angry!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

The teasing between them is just too sweet and cute!!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

Raj pucch raha hai Naina ko kya huya hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜ŠNaina said she is fine but Raj ko nahi lagta!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Waise lagta hai Naina khushi ke maare pagal ho gayi hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Raj apni baat poori nahi karta hai and Naina gets irritated by it!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina toh Pooja ki tarah bolne lagti hai and realising it both of them start laughing!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£

Naina is not happy to reach the academy!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Woh toh Raj ke saath aur waqt bitana chahti hai naa!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

No matter how much time she spends with him it will always be less!!!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ

Waise Naina ne yeh accha kaha ke woh ghadi dekhe ya phir Raj ko dekhe??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

Dekhte hai Raj ne kya tareeka nikalta hai academy ke andar jaane ke liye!!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Woh kaun hai jisne Naina ke muh par apna haath rakha??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•I hope woh Raj hi hai!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š


 

Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oh so nothing is changed in the part. Anyways, second tym padne me bhi maza ya. Coz this part is really sweet. Raj n Naina's sweet sweet convo is here.

BAS RAJ wala part gr8 tha. Too gud. Ab dekhte hai Raj kya tarika nikalta hai academy me enter hone ka. And I hope jisne bhi Naina k muh par hath rakha ho wo dost hi ho.
 
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii sis How r u?

the ud was superb, mindblowing..πŸ˜›
very happy to know that u have cont writing this....πŸ˜ƒ
Raj- naina kitne ache lag rahe hain ek saath .... yipee😳

Raj i mean rajveer sir i mean veer bilkul theek keh raha tha....πŸ˜† naina ko kuch ho gaya hai..
lagta hai khushi ke maare paagal ho gayi... haiiiiii....☺️

Plss ud soon sis... pata tho chale woh kan tha jisne naina ke muh par haath rakha..
ab kause villan ki entry ho gayi......???😑😑😑

waiting eagerly
lots of love
ritu😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
HIIII PRITI KAISI HO DEAR?
HMMMM NOW ABT THE UD WAS
MINDBLOWING
SUPERB
TOO GOOD
ROMANTIC
OUTSTANDING
GR8 WORK DEAR
IZHAAR BIKUL LRL KI YAAD DILA RAHA HAI DEAR
I LOVE EACH AND EVERY PART
EACH AND VERY SCNES THE SCENES R REALLY TOO CUTE CONV. BETWEEN RAJ NAINA IS REALLY SWEET............. AUR AAGE KYA BOLU TUM HAMESHA HI AACHA HI LIKTI HO AUR IZHAAR TOH ONE OF THE BEST FF HAIN RN KA AACHA HUA KI TUM ISE CONTINUE KAR RAHI HO I M MISSING IT SO MUCH JAB YE KHANTAM HO GAYA THA.........
ANYWAYS WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY
LOVE
DEEPA.



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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous update ,....but yaar itna chota😭 next time i want big one.....plzzzzzzzzzzz update soooon....waiting.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Romantic update...

Raj and Naina stil continue sharing this special moment...they love each other and have now confessed their feelings as well..
The teasing between them is just tooo sweet and cute...
 
Lets  see what plan raj has come up with to go into the academy....
 
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was a fabulous intro yar....please do continue it....i want to here the next chapter thnkx =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was just wonderful
love the sweet talks
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb
awesome
update soon