Chhoti Bahu.. Sindoor Bin Suhaagan

Sirf Tum (A RaDev Story)..FF..Ch48,49,50..on..Pg59 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow...nice.......what coming next......loved the angry dev scene i meant the one in which he pulls her close to him...so awsome...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hmm who was in the room?????
great part
not liking what vaishali and dadi are thinking!
please set their mind straight!!!!
 
cont soon
luv raji
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sonal wht did U done..High point pe story stop kar di..
Who's in the room..why Radhika runing..I hope Dadi & Vaishali don't fix Dev & Visha marriage..
waiting for next part by today or tomorrow...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey trying to catch up will comment in a bit!!!!! love the parts till part 5 reading part 5 now only!!!!!!

Luv

Nadz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanks Payal, Raji, Nadz, Vidisha...😊

Arre yaar room mein uncle ji the.....(apne senior Purohitji)......and Radhika ran away to catch up with others.

But can't guarantee that what mom n daadi r thinking will not happen 😉 .....for that u have to continue reading. 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by: sneha23

 
I thought the same too that maybe its the dad or the big bro.
but it seems like u r trying to get dev and vishaka hitched.
if thats whats going to happen then i've only one thing to say
'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'
 

 
hahahaha   😆😆😆
I know...the very thought of it gets the worst out of us......but aage kya hoga....u've to wait n read. 😃
 
And BTW.....the next update is almost ready and will be posted in few minutes......do check it out later.
 
 
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Posted: 15 years ago

 

 

Chapter 11

 

 

Radhika runs to the other side of the hallway and catches up with the others and when Amma sees her she says…."kaha mar gayi thi mui ladki…..kaha tha na humne ke saath rahiyo….kya apna ghar samajh kar ghoom rahi hai….chal ab hamare paas hi khadi rahiyo."

Radhika nods her head n stands beside her…..Daadi then says…."chaliye Punditji….Puja ka samay ho raha hai….hum ab neeche chalte hai."

 

It was the puja time n everyone gathered in the hall for that….n Radhika was helping out her father in the arrangement as well…..and someone asks her something and when she looks up in that direction she gets distracted when she sees Dev coming down the stairs…..He looked so handsome in the white kurta that she just kept staring….n then she suddenly realizes what she is doing so she looks away.

 

Dev was coming down looking at Radhika who he felt for a second….was also looking at him….but when he sees her turn away he gets a little mad and his expression gets serious……And then he sees Vsihaka coming towards him n he already feels a little irritated.

 

Vishaka walks towards him n says…"oh ho Dev ji….aap toh bahut hi handsome lag rahe hai….waise hum bhi kum kamaal nahi lag rahe."

At that Dev smiles n says…."ji haan bilkul Vishaka ji….iss shaam mein aapse zyaada pretty koi nahi lag raha."…..and then he looks at Radhika who was near the fire wearing light crme colored salwar kameez looking like a radiant beauty.

He then distracted his thoughts from her to Vishaka n smiled…..and Vishaka was more flattered by his smile.

Daadi and Vaishali were exchanging happy looks….looking at Dev and Vishaka smiling at each other.

 

Punditji asks Radhika to go and ask Daadi about some other ingredient for puja….so Radhika gets up to look for daadi and then Amma stops her by holding her wrist tight n says….."kahe itna machalti phir rahi hai yaha….yeh kauno tera sasural hai kya…..khabardaar koi aisi waisi harkate kari toh."

Radhika gets teary eyed as Amma was tightening her hold on her wrist so much that her nails were literally digging into her skin…..and then Amma says….."tu jaane hai na Vishaka Dev babu ko kitna pasand kare hai…..toh usko hi sabse baatein karne de…..aur khabardaar jo tune apni koi chaal chali….aur nakhre dikhaye toh...…ab jaa jaakar Vishaka ko bhej samaan ke liye puchwane ko."

Radhika nods and goes and tells Vishaka what her father had asked for…and Vishaka made a face as she didn't wanted to go out of sight from Dev but when she looked around she didn't find him anywhere so she left to look for Daadi.

 

Radhika cudnt hold her tears as her wrist was hurting so bad and so she slowly went behind a pillar and hid behind its curtain….and cried a little.

Dev gets a call on his phone so he excused himself from the people he was talking to and went to a corner to take the call….and busy talking he comes across Radhika and was about to bump into her but stopped just an inch away.

 

Dev stares at Radhika who looks at him with tears in her eyes…..Dev remembered their meeting few minutes ago n then without asking the reason for her tears….he just stares at her.

Radhika again feels embarrassed coming across Dev and almost in the same situation they met few minutes ago….she slowly looks at him  n feels his stare changing from furious to concerning…..and then it was as though he cudnt hold himself…Dev wipes off the tears from her face n says….."aap smile karti hui zyaada achchi lagti hai….kyunki jab aap smile karti hai toh aapki aankhein bhi hass padti hai….aur aapki aankhen itni sundar hai ke unme aansoon achche nahi lagte."

Radhika looks at him with so much emotion that she didn't realize that they were few inches away lost looking into each others eyes…..and when she finds a smile tucked at the corner of his lips…..she suddenly comes out of her thoughts n remembers Amma's words that Vishaka likes Dev and she shudnt do anything to cause problems…..Radhika looks down n then takes back few steps n then slowly walks towards her father.

 

Dev keeps looking after her and then he also comes out after a while and the puja starts….throughout the puja Dev was glancing at Radhika who looked a little lost….He remembered her scent which smelled heavenly n noticed her creme clothes which made her complexion glow even more…..And then suddenly thought of how she got stiffened beneath his touch when he held her into his arms to protect her from falling down….He smiled to himself at the thought of it, but kept a serious face in front of everyone.

 

Radhika as though sensed his eyes on her….looks at his direction and finds him actually looking at her…..she cudn't control her heart which was racing uncontrollably fast….she still cudnt forget that few minutes ago…she was just inches away from Dev smelling his masculine scent which made her feel more attracted to him…..and when he wiped her tears….the feel of the touch of his finger on her skin….made her heart skip a beat.….she was so lost looking at him…..that she didn't realize that she was staring back at him now.

It was with his one glance that she was so disturbed that she was reliving the moments that conspired between them just a few minutes ago….. a chill ran through her spine when she remembered the hold of his hands on her arms….she shrugged the thought of it but her hands still felt his heartbeat beneath the fabric of his clothes….Radhika felt like if he didn't take his eyes off her then she wud not be able to concentrate on anything…..but she was mostly afraid that if anyone sees them then she'll have to go through the same accusations again from Amma…….And as though Dev read her thoughts, he breaks the eye contact n looks away.

 

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks Sonal..that means Radhika also like him..Amma ka kya kare..Vishakha...
let see wht coming in the road...
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow fantastic narration. I was surprised with so quick updates today and loved it totally.Please update quickly.Cannot wait for long.
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Posted: 15 years ago

aww looks like someone is falling in love😳

can't wait for the next part
plz cont soon
love raji
 
btw what's up with senior Purohitji