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NJ im Tahmina and i av been recommended to read ur ffs by lots of ppl....i really really love your style of writing!

Hey,

was Part 23 J an end to this FF....m still wondering..? Will be ther be no happy ever after end...i mean no epilogue...! I really wish it had one......end was good but i wanted more...!

thanks everyone - the new readers and old ones - who keep bringing the old memories back! =)

@NiksAngel - i actually scraped whatever i had in mind for an epilogue, cause as a writer i found it hard to conclude any other way and keep it real enough - somewhere this fic didn't come out as my fairy tale writing and i kinda wanted to retain the touch! ... still, im glad u enjoyed the rest!


cheers,
nj

Hi Nj...

I came across your fic in the Latest ff index.Actually had seen a lot of nominations for it in the ff awards, so thought of checking it out...And I must say, I have never read anything like that before. Its one of the very best stories on the forum and now I have read the whole fic in like...2 days.

I have never been an AR fan but all the good fics are AR only! So I have started reading them now. Armaan's character was the best here, different from the usually portrayed playboy. When I came across the part where you wrote about Lovely suffering from schizophrenia, I was actually shuddering at the thought. You described that part really well. I know somebody suffering from this disease and it was like...unbearable. I think it got a bit too muchon Armaan's part to marry her and even after that he blamed himself for her death. The best part is the way he took care of her, and viewed her as a responsibilty rather than a liability. The part where she died was really touching and somehow maybe it was right for Armaan to leave. His family was totally unexpected. When I read earlier that he was his Ma and Kaka's son, I was confused, wondering...but this was too much! Im glad that he finally took one small step towards accepting him in the end...:)

Ridhima is really a sweetheart, waiting for him like that. Their meeting after all these years was very well written. the reactions were very natural- neither exaggerated nor hurriedly written. Even after so many misunderstandings, her faith in him never swayed- and that paid off in the end! When she accepted him back as her friend, I felt like hugging her. And that brings us to Gaurav!

Well, I think you mentioned somewhere that he is just like your brother...you did a good job of describing him! The way he kept running after Minnie was sooo cute. Its strange that all it took was a 19 year old to knock sense into a psychologist though...sometimes you have learn from youngsters. Edited by Sur_Singhania - 13 years ago

heyyy dear,
awesome FF



love
Riddss

Hi NJ,

My name is Sookie.

I like the way you write and I have been following your works for quite sometime. But I see that of late I do not see you making your presence known on this forum.

I hope that you come back to forum soon so that we get to read your work.

Cheers!
Sookie.


Edited by -Sookie- - 13 years ago

Intending to read this again.. so had to get this back to1st page on "my posts".😎

Reopened at the request of the author.