Special Squad

SS2 (IV) (Updated Pg 148 - Dec 12)

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What do I say? What do I say? 😛

But Princess is really happy... Very very happy that her dear Officers have supported her for more than a year now!

 
I started the SS2 FF nearly one and half years back and I am still writing! 😆
 
I really want to thank everyone for supporting me till her and a future thanks and request to support me till I am able to write finish it!
 
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Link to the previous threads...

SS2 (Fanfic I) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/581972

SS2 (Fanfic II) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/825612

SS2 (Fanfic III) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/926062

I would appreciate your encouragements and comments further more making this FF more successful😳

Thanks and thanks thousand times to all my fans here👏

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Posted: 15 years ago

Evening Five O'Clock…. 

All the ladies checked the scenario outside and seeing it was clear shut the door to the house!

Sandhya double checking to see whether the guys were out of their naughtiness! 😈

Just as the door shut close heads appeared from the side of the windows… 😃 They all had come prepared…. Silently chairs were dragged to the windows and three per window they settled to watch the show! 👍🏼 Partially covered by the netted curtains, it was still easy to watch….. Because all the ladies were turned towards the stairs and hence no one noticed the windows! And soon it would become dark enough for them notice anything more! 😉

 

Aryan had tried to pull back but Ajay and Boxer pushed him in front of them and said….

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Ajay: Aryan…. Bahut fuss mat kar…. Hume pata hai tum bhi dekhna chahate ho ki Dipika kya karne waali hai! So just come! 😃
 
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Aryan glared at them trying to protest but by now they had come to the corner window, near the main door….. Hence he had no choice but to sit with them and mentally he did agree that he was a little eager to watch the show! 😳

Which guy wouldn't want to? ⭐️ Sangeet was always fun…. It was a known fact that it usually consisted of singing and dancing only…. But in creative families few dramas teasing the groom were put on…. Main reason for shutting out the guys…. 😆 They would interfere fighting their ways in…. But here??? What was in store!? ❓

 

The guys definitely wanted to watch…. And they swore that if it wasn't worth a show hiding to watch, they were going to give back! 😲 😉

They had clearly instructed the servant to sneak in at the last moment in the pretext of keeping something inside the house and open the windows from the inside… And to put a piece of paper by the window edges so that it wouldn't be closed tight…. So that they could open it easily from outside! 😈

Now in all the three windows partly hidden by the curtains they sat down with snacks and drinks to watch the show…. Thankfully the window was large and hence they were comfortable enough!  Not to mention they were tall French type windows having no grills…. Was it really built keeping in mind peeping in activities? 😃

 

 

The sangeet function started with Ajay's mom and Neha's mom blessing Neha and putting tika on her forehead… Taking aarti to ward off bad eyes…. Though may or may not be in custom they wanted to perform it because they felt like it… Well…. Mother's blessings have no time and place! 😳

Neha's Dress
 
 
Mrs. Desai
 
 
Mrs. Naik
 
 
 
The ladies were playing the dhol singing some Gujarati folk song with few girls dancing…. For a while it was fine…. Everyone clapping and repeating the verses….
 

But later……

Cynthia: (Nudging Purvi) Purvi! Inka ye gaana to khatam nahi hone waala…. Bahut bore ho raha hai.... Sandhya kahan hai? 😔

 
 
Purvi shrugged her shoulders looking around.... Neither Sandhya, nor her friends nor Aadhya were anywhere to be seen…. 🤔
 

Purvi then saw Dipika near the music player going through the CD's talking to Haseena seated near by!

Dipika's Attire
 
 
 
 
Haseena's Attire
 
 
 
 
Purvi nodded to Cynthia and both of them hurried over to her….
 
Purvi: Dipika! It's getting boring… Aisa hi chalta raha to sab so jayenge! Sangeet ka mazaa hi nahi raha! 🥱

Saying Purvi looked around and Dipika followed her glance…. She saw that everyone were clapping their hands for sake and were smiling for sake…. No one was really enjoying it so much…. It was getting a little boring with the dhol! 😕

Haseena: (Smiling) Haan... Such hai.... Mere bete ko bhi pasand nahi aaya! See he has stopped fiddling! (Smoothing her stomach)
 
At this Dipika, Cynthia and Purvi looked at her surprised and smiled seeing the motherhood shine on her face..... 😳
 
Cynthia: Aww.... (Bending down and keeping her ears on Haseena's stomach) Bachcha..... Aap bilkul phikar mat kijiye.... Aaj aapki Sandhya doctor aunty is tarah sangeet karne waali hain ki bina dekhe hi aap use andar apne sister ya brother ke saath enjoy karoge.... Aur bahar aakar apne doctor aunty ko congratulate bhi karoge! 😊
 
At this Haseena blushed a little as Cynthia winked up at her and kissed her on her forehead! 😍
 
Dipika: (Smiling) Waise pata hai beta hai?
 
Smiling Haseena just nodded her head as Purvi asked amused....
 
Purvi: (Puzzled) Pata hai?!?! Lekin kaise? Sandhya ne kaha?
 
Haseena: (Shaking her head) Nai! Doctors aaj kal bachche ke gender nahi batate before birth..... (With a smile again) Pata hai ek beta hai... Something tells me!
 
Dipika: (Smiling) Doosra?😳
 
Haseena: (Thinking🤔) Hmm.... Beti!
 
Cynthia: (Smiling) Kaise?
 
Haseena: (😳) Pata nahi... Magar keh sakti hoon.... Dono abhi tak bahar hi nahi aaye, itne bade bhi nahi hue hain, lekin jhagadna shuru kar diya hai... They keep disturbing me!
 
All three of them laughed a little hearing the complaining tone of Haseena's voice....
 
Dipika: (Smiling) Agar disturb nahi karte to achcha lagta? ❓
 
Hastily Haseena shook her head and smoothing her stomach said lovingly....
 
Haseena: Unki ye disturbance main bardaash kar sakti hoon.... Lekin ek din ke liye bhi agar main unki koi movement main mehsoos nahi karti hoon to.... I become agitated!
 
Purvi: (Smiling and sitting down beside her) Bahut achcha feeling hai naa ye? Bahut pareshaan karte hain andar se, lekin wahi khushi hume un sab pareshaaniyon ko bula deti hai!
 
Dipika: (Nodding) We woman really are lucky in this! ⭐️
 
Purvi: (Suddenly looking up at Dipika) Dipika! Tumhe bhi aisa ehsaas hua hoga naa? Kaise tha vo experience?
 
Suddenly the smile on Dipika's face disappeared, discomfort taking over....😒
 
Dipika: (Trying to smile) Vo.... Like always.... (Looking around) Er... Haseena ki bhabhi bula rahi hai... Main abhi aati hoon! Excuse me!
 
Saying Dipika hurried off from there to where Haseena's bhabhi was getting the drinks ready!!
 
 
Seeing her go so suddenly Cynthia, Purvi and Haseena looked at each other puzzled... Had they asked her something which they shouldn't have?!?! But.... They didn't think so.... Then why had Dipika become so disturbed on them mentioning about Sri's birth!
 
 
Outside…..

Zubin: (Incredulously) Ye sangeet hai!?!??! 😲

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Ajay: Iskeliye itni secrecy chal rahi thi!?!!? 😡

Shotgun: (Trying to control his yawning🥱) Wahi to…. Itni boring hai… Iskeliye practice kar rahe the itne dinon se!??! Cynthia ko mere saath bahar jaane ke liye bhi waqt nahi tha!

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Boxer: Are yaar chalo… Mujhe bahut bore ho raha hai…. Bahar beach chalte hain….
 
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Ajay: (Throwing up his hands) Aur iskeliye hum chori chupe aaye the…. Urgh!!!!!! 🤢

Saying everyone started to leave disappointed, but just then….

Vishal: Tum log sahi ho…. (Doubtful🤔 ) Lekin Sandhya to kaheen nahi dikh rahi…. Iska matlab…

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Just as he said there was hush in the room as all the lights in the hall had been switched off suddenly…. Then again few lights came on casting a small radiance around the hall….. And then someone started to speak! 😉

The guys outside looked at each other grinning and came back to their places to watch…. The show had begun! 😃

 

From the extreme corner of the room, near the staircase Sandhya's voice was heard loud and clear….

But that stair case area was curtained…. So no one could yet see what was happening behind…. The crowd parted standing and sitting facing the curtained area….

"Namaste! Namoskar! Vanakaam! Vandanam! Suswagatham! 👏 Everyone is welcome to the marriage function of Neha Naik and Ajay Desai…. (With a clear dreamy voice😳) Sangeet… Geeton ka sangam…. Taalon ka sangam…. Dilon ka sangam… Aaj Neha ki sangeet hai… Do dilon ke sangam ki khushiyaan manane, aaj hum sab yahan aaye hain…. Lekin ye sangam hua kaise? ❓ Ye sawaal to har kisi ke man me hoga hi…. Casanova Ajay Desai… 😃 😃 A sweet modern trendy Neha Naik….. ⭐️ Dono me pyaar hua…. Janana nahi hai kaise? Isliye humAap sabko… Aaj ek pyaar ki kahani sunane waale hain…. Unke pyaar ki kahani….. Unke zindagi ka har vo pal…. Khatta meetha pal… Jisne unke pyaar ka imtehaan liya tha aur unke pyaar ko mazboot banaya tha!" 👍🏼

There was a single clap of hands and the curtains slowly moved away.....

 
Everyone was surprised seeing the arrangements behind the curtains…. Towards the right of the staircase the set up of Special Squad office, for those who knew, Neha's place to be specific…. For others a board specifically hung above the stairs……. "SPECIAL SQUAD"…. Also a set up of a restaurant and other various props were seen to the left of the stair…. The bike in one corner! 👏

 

The audience clapped as above the stairs a bright light came on….

--FEMALE--

Pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno….

They could see a guy standing in an erect posture…. Everyone smiled as the guy was a girl dressed as a guy…. And people who knew the guy smiled as the girl was dressed exactly like Vishal wearing his hairstyle too in the same way he does….

In the dance attire….

 

 

Outside the room….

The other guys looked surprised at the person on the stairs and glanced at Vishal who himself surprised looked at him self in front of him wondering what Sandhya was going to do with him…  Or her in him…. Meaning… Her as him! Whatever!!!!!! 😆

 

--FEMALE--

Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi….

Just then another person joined the actor Vishal…. SANDHYA!!!!!

Perfectly dressed like a dancing princess….. Hooked her hand with actor Vishal!

 
 
 

Vishal sensed people looking at him and turned sideways to look at them…. Seeing their accusing meaningful stare, he just shook his head indicating he was lost himself…. But the others, including Aryan just smiled and turned back to watch the performance…. Well that was a nice way to get Vishal and Sandhya together…. They never could be seen together in real…… Aryan somehow suspected a strong Dipika mind at work here! 😉

--FEMALE--
Hoti kya hai jawaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

Sandhya and the girl dressed as Vishal came down the stairs for every beat of the song in an erect posture show casing their pride of been together…. ❤️

Just then everyone's attention was called for to the bottom of the stairs where lights suddenly came on bright in the area where the Special Squad office was set…. A girl dressed like Neha, wearing spectacles was working on a system….

Near by in another cubicle set up two guys were talking and joking… Seeing them it was very obvious that one of them was dressed like Ajay and the other like Boxer….

 

Seeing them the real Ajay and Boxer looked at each other grinning and clapped their hands in surprise… They had successfully found a place in the show…. Well the game was getting interesting…. Sangeet was fun after all! ⭐️

 

--FEMALE--

Woh bhi ek daur tha
Waqt hi aur tha
Jab woh the ajnabi…..


Sandhya and actor Vishal reached the bottom of the stairs…. Sandhya's partner swung her out and she went and stood in front of the make shift office…. The dance was going around the office and the story was going on in the background with the actors doing their part very well with emotions speaking and no words… 😳

Ajay and Boxer came to Neha and they laughed and joked together….

After a while Ajay and Boxer left the place…. Neha smiled with a loveable expression on her face seeing Ajay go…😍

 

Seeing this really Neha blushed watching the show from her place in the couch…. The other ladies also didn't fail to glance at the to be bride…..☺️

 
Outside....

Ajay also glanced at Neha and seeing her blush smiled… Well… Neha and blushing?!?? 😲 hat was new… She was never like this with him… Well they never loved like any other couple…. Mostly they fought, he remembered or rather quarreled…. But love and affection was in it too… They had not been or rather didn't fit for the lovey duvey, koochie moochie type couple…. They enjoyed been together, caring for each other, love showing in their mock fights! 😳

Outside silently he was been teased by Boxer and Aryan sitting with him….

But sternly he silenced them and turned their attention to the performance

--FEMALE--

Dono tanaha se the
Par woh kehte kise

Baat jo dil mein thi

Vishal and Sandhya held each other and danced a perfect tango step…. Of course lifts were avoided in the dance as the girl dressed as Vishal couldn't really lift Sandhya…. But they did have various swings and postures making the dance worth a watch!        

In between to show differences between days Aadhya would bring in boards having phrases like "Next Day", "After few days", "Love in the air" and many more…

 
 
 
Now…….

"After few days"

Ajay was in the cubicle disturbed surrounded by Boxer, Neha and character Zubin…. Actor Ajay was very disturbed and they were consoling him…. 😕

--FEMALE--

Pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno….

Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi….


Sandhya and Vishal moved away from each other to either end… They did separate tango steps in their places…. Facing the audience but looking at each other with a disturbing sullen face! Something wrong had happened in the story!

A constable came to the office and arrested Ajay in charges of accident/murder…. In a corner a cardboard jail was unveiled with a cut in the cardboard like that of the jail door….. Behind which Ajay went and stood upset…..

Neha upset was working furiously in the system in her office….

 

Neha seeing this remembered the incident and became a little upset… But she knew that none of the performance was to hurt her in any way…. They had asked her confirmation to portray insidents from her life and she had agreed…. But they had never let her know what exactly they intended to do and this was all a surprise for her too!

Neha remembered that though this incident started off bad it actually ended well because it had made her realize for the very first time how much she loved Ajay and anything happening to him she couldn't even think of!🤔

 

Outside…..

Ajay watching this smiled a little remembering that the bitter experience had finished in a dinner date with Neha…. Not official but still the first ever time he was taking out a girl like Neha! To her own home actually…. And he knew for the first time she was a great cook!😉

 

--FEMALE--

Hoti kya hai jawaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

 

Turning round and round lifting one leg on each turn Sandhya and Vishal reached each other…. Sandhya reached Vishal exactly the moment she leaned sideways and he caught her supporting to lean with him!

Another guy was now working on a laptop by the side of the Special Squad office… Wearing coat suit and his desk board reading the name "Aryan Khanna! Chief, Special Squad!"⭐️

Smiles again appeared again on everyone's face seeing Aryan also in the performance, well atleast not the real one…

 

Neha, Cynthia, Purvi and Haseena glanced at each smiling and looked at Dipika seated beside Neha who also sported a smile on her face…. It was the same with Haseena and Purvi when Boxer and Zubin came on the musical drama…. Their beaus were out in the lawn and they had not much spoken to them since yesterday…. And hence seeing them here was a little, soft on their hearts!😳

 

Neha went to Aryan with few papers and explained something to him…. Aryan listened to her patiently but Aryan shook his head upset and left the office! Upset Neha sat down dejected!

Aadhya crossed the area with a board saying…. "Ajay ko kaise jail se nikaloon!?!" It was Neha's voice over at the moment….😒

 

--FEMALE--

Woh bhi ek daur tha
Waqt hi aur tha
Jab woh the ajnabi…..

Sandhya lifted her hand high above her head standing on her toes… All her ballet skills showing clearly in this dance…. Vishal supported her by catching her waist and finally helped her lean back full down on the floor and lie down!

Aryan and Boxer were talking furiously, investigating a lady and a man… Finally the real killer was put behind bars and Ajay released! Everyone rejoiced welcoming him to the office….

Ajay was in the restaurant when Neha came there happy…. Ajay took her hands in his thanking her for taking so much pain! All Neha could do was just smile blushing a little!

"All's well that end's well"👏

--FEMALE--

Dono tanaha se the
Par woh kehte kise
Baat jo dil mein thi

Sandhya raised herself from the floor hugging her knees…. Vishal standing behind her caught her hands crossing over and pulled her up… She did a twist while getting up and stood now exactly in front of Vishal with his arms around her waist, above her hands!

All the characters had changed dressed… Just their top jackets or so… Indicating it was another day…

Aadhya did cross again with a board which said…. "Few days later"

Working on the system Neha glanced up at Ajay who was now busy over the phone talking to someone… But his talks upset her clearly as she understood that he was flirting with someone over the phone….😕


--FEMALE--

Pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

Hoti kya hai jawaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

In the same posture with Sandhya in the front and Vishal at the back they danced moving their legs and bodies in sink!

She turned around and dipped back with Vishal holding her hands for support!

--MUSIC--

Sandhya and Vishal did a duet tango performance rotating and with hands stretched out and contracting according to the music!

Upset Neha went over to Ajay and looked at him sternly…. The actor clearly expressed her feelings that she loved him showing it with her hands… ❤️ 

People would definitely know the KKHH scene.... 😳

Hearing this Ajay got up shocked….😲

--FEMALE--

Gumsum gumsum rehte the dono
Phir bhi dil mein kehte the dono
Koyi sapana hum bhi to paayein

Just then Sandhya and Vishal moved away from each other toward the end of the room…. Hands behind their back they turned around dancing with their legs in a tap dance fashion!  

Neha went off to the makeshift restaurant while Ajay stood thinking in deep thought....🤔

--FEMALE--

Ek din tute ghum ke woh ghere
Jhilmil jhilmil aaye savere
Mausam badala jaagi fizaayein

Reaching each other Vishal knelt in front of Sandhya extending both his hands….😊

Ajay seemed to decide something and went over to Neha in the restaurant.... Kneeling down in front of her he pulled out roses from his coat pocket extended them to her one by one as she looked at him surprised…. Pacifying her he took her hand and kept in on his heart….😳

--MALE--

Woh mil gaye, woh khil gaye
Aur pyaar ho hi gaya

Jo maanga tha, woh paaya to
Hosh kho hi gaya

Smiling a little Sandhya gave both her hands in his…. Happy Vishal stood up and holding hands they moved their body front and back and sideways….

Finally after Ajay had presented Neha with four flowers she smiled and Ajay dragged her off with him to the bike that was beside the stair…. Sitting on it they wore their helmets and went on a fun loving ride…. Well the bike been real but not the ride!😛

--FEMALE--

Pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

Hoti kya hai jawaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

Sandhya and Vishal held their hands and danced side by side moving around each other, with Sandhya holding her dress for a full circle effect!

Ajay and Neha stopped their bike ride and got down…. Ajay went over to a cardboard door brought in by Aadhya in between…. Outside it or rather in front of it a door keeper was standing and Ajay gave small papers to him, which he tore and ushered them through the door way…. Assumption that the papers were definitely tickets….😉

--MUSIC--

 

Here outside Ajay was all blushing remembering the various events that made him propose Neha…. It was in fact Neha who had confessed first…. It had come out not as a confession but in her anger, but he was shocked nevertheless….. Love was a matter he had not even thought of ever before…. And that too with a girl like Neha?!?!? Not that she was in any way not suited for him…. In fact it was the other way round that had made him hesistate…. She was simple and sensitive towards life…. Her clothes and work might be fashionable but she was an Indian woman after all…. Even though he was in doubt initially he did agree…. Because he knew he had started loving her… His perception of life had in fact changed after he had known her well enough!👍🏼

 

Vishal and Sandhya did a couple dance but with fast movements….. He swung her out fast and rolled her back in…. With a little jig of their legs they danced….

Ajay and Neha sat on the chair as some movie still started playing in the wall by the stairs…. But more than watching the film they looked at each other which was clearly visible even from the back and everyone smiled seeing this……☺️

 

Here seated at her place all Neha could do was blush and blush and hide her face in her mom's shoulder…. It was really very good remembering the past flower strewn path!😳

 

--FEMALE--

Haule haule abb woh deewaane
Gun gun gaaye dil ke taraane

Sun sun jhumein saari hawaanyein

Sandhya and Vishal danced around the acting couple narrating the song as a dance for the audience…. Even though the story was at the background, it was fun to watch it…. And Sandhya, Vishal's dance was more perfectly depicting the dance and the situation….

 

Later Ajay took Neha to the restaurant for a dinner date where they were serviced well, the door keeper now as the waiter….. More than the dinner again they looked at each other! 😳

--FEMALE--

Dhadkan dhadkan hai behaki behaki

Mann mann, mann mann, chaahat hai mehaki
Sapane apane jaadu jagaayein


Sandhya and Vishal came closer to each other for a duet performance, hugging each other and swaying slowly to the music like lovers forgetting the world in the dance gazing up at each other deeply!

The lights over the restaurant were dimmed simultaneously and Ajay asked Neha for a dance…. Smiling she obliged and in each other's arms they danced slowly to an unheard music…. Neha rested on Ajay's chest as he hugged her and they just simply moved on the spot!

 

Outside…….

Vishal looked in wonder at Sandhya dancing… She was so versatile to dance with a girl dressed as a guy…. And her expressions were so genuine and he felt a little guilty because he knew according to her she was dancing with 'The Vishal'…. And he had no doubt that this whole sequence depicting Neha and Ajay's love life musically was her idea… But the other characters he knew must have been Dipika's idea…. Who knew Special Squad so well!!?!?😉

 

--MALE--

Phir dekhoge, toh jaanoge
Kya hai nasha pyaar ka

Yahi sochoge, yahi chaahoge
Sang rahi ye sada

Sandhya and Vishal parted with Sandhya blushing… They moved away from each other, hands behind their backs, glancing back with every step forward step….

Ajay and Neha were still dancing in the background!

--FEMALE--

Pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi


Then suddenly they turned around and with swift movement ran to each other from either end… Sandhya instead of hugging him crossed him but Vishal caught Sandhya around her waist stopping her and pulling her back walked front….

Ajay and Neha finally parted and looked at each other! 😍

--FEMALE--

Hoti kya hai jawaani suno
Ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi


Sandhya and Vishal stood exactly in front of Neha and Ajay and as Sandhya dipped back fully hand over her head Vishal supported her catching her neck….

And then together Ajay and Neha left the restaurant and rode the bike back again!

--FEMALE--

Woh bhi ek daur tha
Waqt hi aur tha
Jab woh the ajnabi


Vishal straightened Sandhya and rotating her catching her neck made her stand in front of him and going down on his knees kissed her hand…..

After the dinner date Ajay left Neha home… Outside the cardboard door property again which was the cinema hall entrance few minutes back…. The board above now read "HOME"

He leaned forward to kiss her but had instead received a small peck on his cheek…. He smiled back and kissing her on her cheeks left for the night… The area around the stairs dimmed except a small light above the cardboard….. Smiling Neha went inside her house!😳

 

Neha blushed seeing this as this had happened during their first official date… Ajay had wanted to kiss her but she had denied and as a perfect gentle man he had agreed…. But well later, these things had changed! And they did kiss but few dates later!☺️

Seeing this Ajay's mother and Neha's mother looked at her proudly…. Even though both were modern they had sustained their feelings…. About later they didn't know… But for the first time, they felt proud of their children!👏

You are modern…. You are trendy…. You are latest epitome of fasion…. But you are also Indian…. A fact every Indian parent should feel proud about their children for!👍🏼

Ajay's mom kissed Neha on her forehead expressing her appreciation for keeping their relationship clean!

Outside Ajay too remembered this and smiled glancing at Neha on the couch and he could swear she remembered their first real kiss few dates later!😳

 

--FEMALE--

Dono tanaha se the
Par woh kehte kise
Baat jo dil mein thi

Sandhya and Vishal again hooked their arms together and Sandhya's head now on Vishal's shoulder they climbed back up the stairs!

--MUSIC--

Sandhya and Vishal stood on the stairs with Vishal catching Sandhya's hand looking at each other!

 
The other lights in the area slowly dimmed and the curtain slowly covered back the area!

As the song ended there were thunderous claps around the hall….👏

Ajay's mother and Neha's mother sitting with Neha were happy with the performance, because it clearly depicted the formation of Ajay's and Neha's relation which was a very gradual, pure one…. Neha smiled back at them happy herself at the performance…. Both the mothers laughed and indicated the mehndi on her hand that her loved one loved her very much!

 

Outside…..

The guys kept looking on at the curtained area stunned by the performance….. 😳 It was perfect with a story background and a dance front end…. Neither of it was missed because both revolved around the same area… They really enjoyed it…. And swore that if this was the sangeet, they were going to be full time spectators not to miss any thing more….😉

Vishal smiled a little seeing the performance…. He knew Sandhya had included his look alike dressed girl on purpose…. But he felt a little upset that he was in a state not to agree to anything…. He cursed himself… This was all he could do for the moment seeing the love Sandhya was showering on him…. Useless…. For which he was not worth… Giving her negligence and pain in return!

But he knew she was a strong woman…. She wouldn't break…. Her first life partner, her profession would not allow her to break… It gave him a little solace thinking so!😕

The other guys turned around to clap Ajay on his back who was all a little shying inside seeing his and Neha's love life transcend in front of his eyes!❤️

Edited by maha_prakrti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow, congratulations on the 4th thread, di! hope your ff keeps going for a long, long time😛
great update, too...you're so good with choreographing steps and everything, it's like we can see it happening..don't know how you do it.
love,
anju
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was excellent and awesome.
 
i loved it .
 
congratulations krithika i am very happy for you.
 
the sangeet was  beautifully written. the idea of sandhya and vishal was great.
the dress sandhya wore was beautiful.
 
vishal loves sandhya then why is not saying it.
But he knew she was a strong woman'. She wouldn't break'. Her first life partner, her profession would not allow her to break' It gave him a little solace thinking so!
 
what he means by that?
 
thanks for the update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by: AJ_ss

wow, congratulations on the 4th thread, di! hope your ff keeps going for a long, long time😛

great update, too...you're so good with choreographing steps and everything, it's like we can see it happening..don't know how you do it.
love,
anju

 
Thank you so much Anjum... Its just when I listen to the song I imagine few steps and I write it as such 😳

Originally posted by: sam78

it was excellent and awesome.

 
i loved it .
 
congratulations krithika i am very happy for you.
 
the sangeet was  beautifully written. the idea of sandhya and vishal was great.
the dress sandhya wore was beautiful.
 
vishal loves sandhya then why is not saying it.
But he knew she was a strong woman'. She wouldn't break'. Her first life partner, her profession would not allow her to break' It gave him a little solace thinking so!
 
what he means by that?
 
thanks for the update.
 ⭐️
👏

 
Thank you so much Sam.... As for what Vishal meant by that, you would know its answer, but not now... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
MARVELLOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ENCHANTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I knew you would make my fav couple's shaadi a memorable one....I READ THE WHOLE UPDATE 10 TIMES!!!!!!!!itni interesting thi...........

Btw neha-ajay ka first kiss to holi wale din tha na......so ''few dates later'' kyun uodate mein?????????????

Waise i find them realllyyy adorable.....hamesha ladte rehte hai.....still they love each other deeply.......infact its their fights which makes their relationship unique and interesting........

Vishal ki problem kya hai......itni achchi ladki aur kahan milegi???
I feel like beating him up and making him agree that he loves Sandhya........

Waise how did Dipika know about the initial moments of ajay-neha???us time to woh aayi bhi nahi thi........third-eye???

Anyways...........EEEAGERLY WAITING FOR UR UPDATE......MERI FAVORITE JODI KI SHAADI HAI AFTER ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IM GETTING RESTLESS!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by: aashmi

MARVELLOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ENCHANTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I knew you would make my fav couple's shaadi a memorable one....I READ THE WHOLE UPDATE 10 TIMES!!!!!!!!itni interesting thi...........

 
Vove..... Thank you 😳 Thank God it was interesting.... Though it would be a drag!

Btw neha-ajay ka first kiss to holi wale din tha na......so ''few dates later'' kyun uodate mein?????????????
 
😃 Mujhe kya pata unki kiss kab ki thi? Maane.... Even before I started writing the FF, they had gone out many times right, as in the show? And this "dates" months ka date nahi..... Lover's outing waala date hai 😳

Waise i find them realllyyy adorable.....hamesha ladte rehte hai.....still they love each other deeply.......infact its their fights which makes their relationship unique and interesting........

Vishal ki problem kya hai......itni achchi ladki aur kahan milegi???
I feel like beating him up and making him agree that he loves Sandhya........

Waise how did Dipika know about the initial moments of ajay-neha???us time to woh aayi bhi nahi thi........third-eye???
 
Again no! 😳 Remember a statement where I had written that the girls had asked Neha how her love had blossomed? So it was Neha who had told them and not Dipika.... Special  Squad me kahan kya rakha hai, the idea of SS been depicted was Dipika's! Samjhi? 😊

Anyways...........EEEAGERLY WAITING FOR UR UPDATE......MERI FAVORITE JODI KI SHAADI HAI AFTER ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IM GETTING RESTLESS!!!!!!
 
You have lots in store.... Because this Sangeet is going to be reeeeeaaallyyyyyyyyyy long.... Just hope you guys don't get bored 😕

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Posted: 15 years ago

Kya soch rahe hain? Actually officers reading my FF would remember very well.... That if I have a song choreographed in the FF, I would embed it in the post, so that when you read the update, my dear officers can listen to it.... Just a feel which I get when I read the updates!


Kal ke post me video embed karne me kuch problems the.... Now been cleared, me posting the video now... Hope you enjoy it! 😳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oAee8zK8I_A[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 15 years ago
marvelous⭐️,mindblowing👏,great⭐️⭐️ great👏👏 update di.👏
👏you have made Sangeet function of Neha memorable.😳👏😃
A perfect song⭐️, perfect location⭐️ ,perfect dresses⭐️ ,perfect artists⭐️,perfectly coreographed⭐️⭐️⭐️ .great great great.👏
👏👏guys watching chori chori cupke cupke ,very funny,specially Aru involving in it.😉😆
Vishal bhai ab maan bhi jao.😳
waiting for ............................
congrats for IV thread .👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
😳

Wow…….Wow……….Wow……

Congrates  di .for  opening 4th threads of this FF.


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So, guys😛 chori-chupke  sangeet dekhne respective window me khara hogaya hai.

Kya arrangement hai. Watching show through the window. Aur to aur…. Drinks ka arrangement bhi hai.  THREE  per window!!!!😲

 

Ajay: Aryan…. Bahut fuss mat kar…. Hume pata hai tum bhi dekhna chahate ho ki Dipika kya karne waali hai! So just come!

Hehehehe………😆😆….Aru ki dil ki baat bata dia.

 

Vishal  very well know that, sabdhya will do something hatke.😉

 

And people who knew the guy smiled as the girl was dressed exactly like Vishal wearing his hairstyle too in the same way he does….

The other guys looked surprised at the person on the stairs and glanced at Vishal who himself surprised looked at him self in front of him wondering what Sandhya was going to do with him…  Or her in him…. Meaning… Her as him! Whatever!!!!!!

 

Itna confusion!!! Bechara…all time sandhya vishal ko confused kar deta hai.

Well…….. I also liked the style of sandhya irritating vishal.😉

 

Aryan somehow suspected a strong Dipika mind at work here!

Dipika ki asaar  shuru hogaya hai😃

 

The  story was mindblowing di. And the song selection too.

 

The other guys turned around to clap Ajay on his back who was all a little shying inside seeing his and Neha's love life transcend in front of his eyes!

Ajay ka haal😳😳😳

Mindblowing  sangeet ceremony 

keep it up.

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