FF: HumDum...(prt 24- pg 75!!)Updated 4/27/12

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Hi Everyone...i decided to start my own fanfic which is called HumDum... this is my first Prem-Heer Fanfic so plzzz bear with me... my story is kind of different...

Charater Sketch...

The MAAN's...

Balraj Maan- He is the Husband of Teji Maan, nd father of 3 girls nd a son, he is a very successful business-man in New York, his businesses are in Manhattan but he lives in the country side with his family,he is greatly known nd respected threw out the Desi community in America nd England...

Teji Maan- is a housewife nd is very well known around the area do to her husbands reputation, she luvs her children but is quit busy when it come to spending time with Heer bcuz shes always around her daughters Ash nd Meher nd son Raj...

Ashlesha Maan- is the oldest daughter of Teji nd Balraj Maan, she is 24 nd studied in New York University, she is now a sucsessful computer Engineer, she is now engaged to her dad's good friends son Dev...

Heer Maan- is the second daughter of Teji nd Balraj Maan,
she is 21 nd is currently studing at New York University, she wants to be a really big Doctor one day, she is very quite most of the times, nd is extremely sweet, where as her sisters are a little selfish she will give them whatever they ask for without a question, she luvs her family the most...

Meher Maan- is the youngest daughter or Teji nd Balraj Maan, she is 18 nd just started college at the University of New Jersey, she is very outgoing, nd is very playful, she gets a little selfish sumtimes...

Raj Maan- is the youngest nd only son of Teji nd Balraj Maan, he is 16 nd currently in high school, he attends a Private Boarding school by the name of Obama's Private Boarding School (OPBS), he is a little spoiled nd bratty but luvs his Heer Di alot...

Juneja's...

Lalit Juneja- he is the husband of Gayatri Juneja, nd the father of 1 daughter and 3 sons, he is a very successful business-man in England, he lives in london with his family, he is greatly known nd respected throughout the Desi community in America nd England...

Gayatri Juneja- is a housewife nd is very well known around town, she luv all her children alot, shes always worried abt whats going to bcum of them...

Harman Juneja- is the oldest son of Gayatri nd Lalit, he is married to Sanjana, nd has a son of the age 3, he is 30, nd works with his dad in the family bussiness, he is a little strict, but always ends up giving in to his younger siblings...

Prem Juneja- is the second oldest son of Gayatri nd Lalit, he is 23, nd is going to New York to study at New York University (NYU), he is almost done with his studies, he has only a semester left, he is studing to be a Computer Scientist, he can be a brat, but is very caring nd luving, his family means alot to him...

Preet Juneja- is the third son of Gayatri nd Lalit, he is 19, nd will soon join his brother in America to study at the University of New Jersey, he is really outgoing, spoiled, nd flirty, luv his family alot...

Veera Juneja- is the youngest nd only daughter of Gayatri nd Lalit, she is 16 nd studies in a Private Boarding school in london, she luvs her brothers but is really close to her Prem Bhaiya...

 (*NOTE- Chapter 1 has been moved to page 4!)
 
                              !CHAPTERZ/Pgz!

                                  

                                   Character Skecth- Pg 1
                                        Chapter 1- Pg 4

                                         Chapter 2- Pg4

                                         Chapter 3- Pg 6

                                         Chapter 4- Pg 9

                                         Chapter 5- Pg 11

                                         Chapter 6- Pg 13

                                         Chapter 7- Pg 15

                                         Chapter 8- Pg 17
 
                                         Chapter 9- Pg 19
                                        
                                         Chapter 10- Pg 21
  
                                         Chapter 11- Pg 22

                                         Chapter 12- Pg 25
                                      
                                         Chapter 13- Pg 26
 
                                         Chapter 14- Pg 30
 
                                         Chapter 15- Pg 33
 
                                         Chapter 16- Pg 35
 
                                         Chapter 17- Pg 41
 
                                         Chapter 18- Pg 47
                                      
                                         Chapter 19- Pg 52
 
                                         Chapter 20- Pg 57
 
                                         Chapter 21- Pg 60
 
                                         Chapter 22- Pg 64
                                        
                                         Chapter 23- Pg 69
                                    
                                        Chapter 24- Pg 75
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aw... thats a cute first part. Poor Heer... loved it! Great job... can't wait for more.
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hey, nice intro.. i feel sry for heer... ur rite , we all will have to wait to c if this karan bhaiyaa is heers cousin!!! update soon.., take care,
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
interesting
nice update
poor heer
can't wait till they meet
do cont soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok...interesting start...cant wait to read the rest....
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hey
great start and 1st part. cant wait to read more. continue soon😃
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Hey!
Awesome first update!
and loved the character sketch!
i felt so sorry for Heer...
Can't wait till the next update!
xXx
Sunayna
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Edited by .xganga.x - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing start.pls continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey gr8 job and chapter one was very nice.poor heer i feel sorry for her. plzzzzzz update sooooooooooon
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hi
 
luved it update soon
ignor da people who dont appriciate ur work
we luv it kepp it up
gud luk