A NewFF on BA-Part 10/Pg9 Updated - Page 3

                                            PART -3


"Bharath..." Adithi moaned softly as he laid her down on her back.

Relishing the feel of her soft body against him he began kissing every part of her body he could manage.Both of them had been deprived of love since long and today they felt the need to be loved beyond everything else.

The storm took its violent form outside and so did the love inside .



Somewhere in Mumbai.........


A group of people stood facing a handsome young man who seemed to be mad with rage.

"Tum sab ki himmath kaise hui aisa karne ka?"

All of them ,though elder to him seemed to shrink under his fury.

A Guy whose tag on his coat read "General Manager" finally mustered the courage to speak up.


"Sir..hume patha nahin tha ki woh aapki.."

"patha naihn?? pathaa nahin??..teek hain..mujhe bhi patha nahin hain ki tum log kaun ho..tum sab kal se hamaare company se baahar ho...dont you ever show your faces to me again"

"Sir..Please aisa math keejiye.." They all tried to plead with him..


An Elderly person entered the mansion at the same time.All of them fell silent upon his arrival.He emanated an aura that commanded respect and fear by itself.

"whats all this Adi?" he asked the young man while turning to smile at the others.

"Ask them papa" replied the young man.

The manager narrated the entire incident to him.A young Girl entered their store in the morning.She had chosen a beautiful and very expensive outfit for herself and had asked for trial.Judging by her state of clothes that were covered with muddy water,The sales girl had snatched it back saying that she cannot afford it.When that girl tried to protest ,the manager who was there at that section also supported his staff and asked her to walk out without creating any further thamaasha.

Fuming with anger at her insult,the girl had left the mall silently.Little did they all know that the Girl's anger would cost them their jobs.They were also sure that they would never get jobs anywhere outside owing to the fact that she belongs to such a powerful family.

"Tumhe Gudiya ke saath aisa nahin karna chaahiye tha" the elderly man said calmly.

"Papa..chutki ro rahin thi.." Adi complained sadly.

This youngman was capable of fighting the whole world alone but could bear her tears.

"You have heard what adi has said" he replied.

"Sir... please..we will apologise to madam..Sir Please let us talk to her.." they pleaded the elderly man.

They all have heard a lot about the kind of love the old man had for her.He would never refuse if she allowed them to stay.She was their last hope.

"chutki so rahi hain..and I dont want her to get upset  seeing you all again" Adi said firmly.

"Adi..calm down..Even im not happy with all that happened..But they are right..let her decide what should be done.."

Turning to face the others he said " Tum log Gudiya ko kal subah mil lena..Good night".


The Next day morning....


Bharath turned and kissed Adithi on her head.." Good Morning .." .

She looked up into his eyes and smiled.Bharath tried pulling her for a kiss but she immediately sat up.

"Bharath..its already late..we should be starting now..we need to deal with choti maa also..remember?"

"Amar..Bharath is comming back with Adithi" Divya shouted happily with the phone reciever in one hand.

Chotimaa immediately stood up and marched away in a huff.

"Bharath..Im feeling nervous" Adithi whispered to him as they stood at the main door of Singh mansion.

Divya animatedly came forward and hugged adithi.Bharath was scanning the hall area for his mother.Karuna slowly got down the steps with her suitcase.She threw a look of pure hatred at adithi and turned to Bharath.

" Bharath,you have shown me what your decision is and what my position in your life is..i cant stay here any longer."

"Maa..Please dont leave me.."

"Then will you leave adithi for me? answer me Bharath"

"Sorry maa..we got married yesterday.Adithi is my wife now..i cant abandon her" Bharath said in a firm voice.

" I see....Thanx a lot for all the love and respect you have shown towards me Bharath" CM left the place with tears in her eyes.

Tears flowed down Bharath's cheeks.Afterall she was his mother,more than his own mother who had given him birth.

"Bharath we should get her back..she cant go like this.." Adithi held his hand.

"She has to understand Adithi..we cant do anything about this..let her go.."

"No Bharath..I will make her understand..She is your mother..I cant be the reason of your seperation..our family is incomplete without her..I will go and get her."

Bharath insisted on comming with her but Adithi asked him not to interfere between a saas and bahu.

She smiled at him while leaving in the car and said " Mera intezaar karna bharath...main jaldi aa jaaongi"
Edited by lilyattitude - 15 years ago

Translations:

"Tum sab ki himmath kaise hui aisa karne ka?"
- How dare u all do that?

"Sir..hume patha nahin tha ki woh aapki.."
-Sir..We didnt know that she is your..

"patha naihn?? pathaa nahin??..teek hain..mujhe bhi patha nahin hain ki tum log kaun ho..tum sab kal se hamaare company se baahar ho...dont you ever show your faces to me again"
-"You didnt know? Fine !! Even i dont know who you are!All of you are out from our company"

"Sir..Please aisa math keejiye.."
-Sir,Please dont do that

"Tumhe Gudiya ke saath aisa nahin karna chaahiye tha"
-You shouldnt have done that with gudiya

" Tum log Gudiya ko kal subah mil lena"
-You can meet Gudiya tomorrow morning

" Mera intezaar karna bharath...main jaldi aa jaaongi"
-Wait for me Bharath..ill be back soon !

yaar, it was soo romantic, the love scene between BA, uff!😍 and aditi is soo sweet, saying that CM is needed if not the family would be incomplete, see CM, what type of bahu you have, and my heart goes out for bharat, seeing him in such a difficult situation, torn between his mother and loving wife 😭 anyways yaar, an awesome update and i m totally waiting for your next update, and could i ask you something please????..............please bring back aditi soon yaar😳
Edited by hotchocolate08 - 15 years ago

Hi All,
Hope you enjoy this part too !
Plz let me know if this anything was confusing.

Now the Precap:

"Paagal ho gaye hain sab ke sab..yeh Adithi nahin hain..yeh Adithi nahin ho sakthi.."  Bharath was yelling at the top of his voice.

A Girl in white long skirt is running to catch a butterfly in the garden with a beautiful payal on only one of her feet.

                                                  PART - 4

At the same time... somewhere else in Mumbai..

A Beautiful and huge mansion gleamed against the early morning sunlight.

Aditya opened the curtains of the window of his room in the first floor that gave him a good view of the garden below.

Birds were chirping and the sunlight was falling on his face.A small smile escaped his lips at the perfect feeling he got that morning as it was a sunday.Sunday was always the day he looked most forward to because it was meant for family..family only.His smile turned wider when a beautiful laugh reached his ears.

He looked down at the source beaming even more.A Young Girl in a flowing white skirt was running on bare legs to catch a butterfly.Her feet displayed a beautiful payal on only one of the feet as if challenging to find its match .Her angelic features were further enriched by her laugh.One look at her and you could think she was the only person in this world who had nothing to worry about .

As she was about to catch the butterfly..

"Somehow im not able to tell who the butterfly is"

"offo..Veeru you scared my butterfly" The girl got offended and made a face.

"Are..yeh kya? Gudiya papa se naaraaz hain ?" Veerendra said catching hold of the Water Pipe and showing it to her threateningly.

"No Veeru..no..you will repent it..you have never won any water fight against me..im telling you" She laughed.

" that was because Adi was on your side always..Now i cant see him anywhere near you" He held the Pipe so that water fell on her like a gentle shower.

She ran from it and caught hold of another pipe and brandished it like a sword in frot of him


" And who said that Chutki is alone?" Adi was ready with another pipe.

A group of people were watching all this from far.They dared not go infront of her for the fear of Aditya.They were supposed to meet her and manaofy her so as to protect their jobs.

Now if they think about it, everything about her was elegant.The diamond and Platium jewellery she wore ,though minimum told about her classic taste .Though she didnt have the air of belonging to an affluent family, she did have that grace about her.

Both of them easily overpowered Veerender and he was drenched head to toe soon.The girl did a Hi-fi with Aditya and gave a thumbs down to her father.

Ramu kaka came running with towels in one hand and a phone in another.Both Veerender and adi made a grab for the towels and handed them to her.She smiled and took one of them and rubbed her father's hair gently while Adi covered her with the other.

"Veeru..why are those ppl standing over there?" She asked her father.

The whole world might look upon him with respect,admiration or fear but for her he was her toy,her child,her veeru.She always called him that unless she was very angry or very upset.With bhai it was different.It was like she was elder to him and can boss him around.It was like that always as far as she could remember.Both the men depended on her so much emotionally as she was the exact replica of Mrs.Veerender both in looks and nature.She took care of them so effectively that both veeru and adi claimed her their mother.


"Those are our mall staff..They want to apologize to you...you know they are really sorry" Veerender said as he beckoned them to come closer to her.

"Yes..they are going to be really sorry about it..Im removing all of them" Adi told her.

"Bhai..there is no need of that..what will happen to their families if their jobs are lost??"

Adi's eyes widened in wonder.From when on did Chutki know about the sufferings of middle class people?

"Bhai..they all probably need a crash course on how to behave with customers properly..and the next time they repeat this,we can remove them and blacklist them..right veeru?"

She was never wrong when dealing with people and money...veeru smiled and nodded.

The group thanked her and apologised to her again before leaving.

Adi turned to Ramu Kaka seriously.

" Kaka..iski dhimaag mein middle class ki conditions ke baare mein ideas app hi daal rahe ho na? how many times did i tell you to keep her away from all that trash..she need not know about the difficulties of life.."

This was the only thing where veerender disagreed with his son.He was about to argue against it when suddenly the phone in Ramu kaka's hand started ringing.He handed over the phone to the girl saying it was hers.

Before she could say hello,a voice from the other end shouted .." Hey Annie...im comming back.."

Her face lit up on hearing that voice...He always had that effect on her.

"Vinnie pooh..." She shouted happily and ran to her room with the phone.

"Adi.. did you think about what i told u last week .."

"Yes papa,But i cant bear the thougt of chutki leaving us on her marriage"

" Then we need to find someone who loves and cares for her as much as we do and still allow her to be with us" He turned to face his son.

Adi read his father's intentions in his eyes.

"Vinnie ??" He wondered.


That Night..

City Hospital..

The Singh family was gathered around a bed and were crying bitterly for someone whose life was claimed by an accident and now was lying peacefully on the bed not aware of the pain of the bleeding hearts around.

Karuna caught hold of Bharath's Shoulder for support while crying her heart out. Bharath just couldnt stand all this.Whats wrong with all of them? Why dont they understand?

Amar and Divya were scared at this reaction of Bharath.Everybody was totally shattered but Bharath had not reacted till now.

Amar approached Bharath and said cautiously " I Can understand what you are going through Bharath..Now that Adithi is no more.."

Bharath was now irritated to the core.

"This woman.." He pointed at the lifeless body of Adithi which was in front of him on the bed..."is not my Adithi ! She promised that she will come back..she will not leave me like this.."

" Bharath...this time she could not fulfill her promise" Divya cried hugging him.

He pushed her away angrily and said " Paagal ho gaye hain sab ke sab..Yeh meri adithi nahin ho sakti..She might look like Adithi but she isnt my Adithi..why dont you listen to me?"

Aniket hugged Bharath and cried bitterly.

At the Same time..same place..another room in the Emergency wing..

"chutki..chutki ..Please open your eyes..Look at me  chutki" Adi was pleading the girl who was being wheeled out from the ICU.Her head was heavily bandaged and still that did not stop all the blood that was soaking the sheets.

"Adi..control yourself..we need to shift her to another hospital..The specialists are arriving there..We can still save her if we make it on time" Dr.Sharma said while wheeling her stretcher outside..." We can Inform your father then".

Bharath had come out of the room unable to withstand the drama that was going on.He saw a group of people rushing towards the exit with a patient and gave way to them.Her hand which was dangling to a side brushed agaist his.Bharath was overtaken by a strange feeling that made him follow them upto the exit.Though he could not see who that girl was, he wished for her speedy recovery.

Originally posted by: lilyattitude

Translations:

Lily - just read updates 3 & 4 - WoW - excellent! Both are full of drama &suspense! 👍🏼

 

Hmmm ... are Chutki and Aditi somehow related?  Or do they just look alike? Are their identities going to be mixed up?

 

Poor Bharat💔 - what is he going to do without his Aditi? 😭  And why did he feel the connection with that woman as their hands touched - is she really his Aditi?

 

OY! Lily - so many questions you have left us with - a real cliffhanger! 👏

 

Thanks for updating!  Can't wait until the next update to find out what is really going on! 😊

 

 

thanx for the comment 😊
You sort of guessed the story line already !!

i loved it lily!! so suspenceful and intriguijng! cant wait to find out what happens next :)

Wow so much suspense!!! Can't wait to know what happens next!!! Poor Bharat!!! His Aditi cannot leave him so soon!