My first post in this section.......
Wrote this story for a friend because they needed help,and since i like writing, i wrote it for them!
Assignment was a descriptive essay on a topic, I chose driving my car.
Every morning I wake up to the birds chirping away as if I am listening
to a small orchestra on Broadway. Very nice sounds, but walking out is just as
good. The sun greets me as a rush of warm rays flow across the serene blue skies
like a tranquil water fall making break at the high point. You hear a beautiful sense of
calmness as I walk to my car, neighbor's wave to me as if I was a rock star
greeting fans. As I approach my car it reminds me of a roller coaster, waiting
to take me on a thrill ride. After opening the doors and then sitting in the
seats that feel like a warm hug, I start the engine and then listen to its rev
as if it were a tiger yawning after a long nap. The power that comes through the
steering wheel and gearbox brings back memories of a rocket ship, in the back of
my mind I am hearing the count down at the NASA Space Launch Pad...3...2...1.GO.
Driving this car can be compared to riding a raging bull during a rodeo, if your
hands are not on the wheel you can feel this car pulling away, screaming and
jumping to be free. If you can control this beast you can make cuts in the road with
the precision of a knife, this car's handling carves the road as if it was
cheese, the tires and brakes are also superior like a jaguar's claws. The sound
from the car while driving is music to my ears, you can hear the exhaust notes
rumbling from the engine to the back like rolling thunder during a hurricane.
Every increase in speed brings a louder sound. All in all, after getting out of
this car, you almost have to peel yourself off as if you have been glued to the
seats. The power and share beauty of this car is the same as riding a wild
animal, but this animal is something you can control. When leaving the car, I
arm the alarm for security with a "beep" that tells me "good bye", it's like
parting with a friend after a fun dance. π
Hope you all like it...........π³...I could do better, i also forgot to include the color of the carπ...Descriptive essays use the senses, so I tried to use them all...
Edited by AsliiGuy - 15 years ago
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