Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
gr8 part suri cont ssoon
thank you so much jyothi.. i'll surely try & continue soon...😊
Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
gr8 part suri cont ssoon
hi surya dear.....very sorry for the late comment.............was somewhat busy but now read the part and its too wonderful...............oved the first part.armaan and the rest r too cool...........he is such a nautanki but twas very funny...............yash is very philosophical but i hope he and chah meet very soon and i really wish his first love is chah......as u said first meetin wil not be actual fist meetin made me to feel it its chah but lets c how u take the story and am very eager to know how they feel wen they come aamne saamne...............hate this swayam he is too much....not jus over confi but too much ghamand........yash wil win the race and wanna c how swayam's face look lik.......ALL THE BEST FOR ur exam dear.........cont soon after the exams...........
Originally posted by: golu_1677
This part was too good. loved chah the nok jhok of armaan with sneha n kajal was too ggod. Loved teh talk between ridzi n yash. I think chah is yash's first love. Waitng for them to meet soon. I hope yash wins the race but i have a feeling that swayam will do something wrong so that yash looses. I hope yash doesnt get hurt in all this.cont soon.
suri amazing yaar ye part bohot intersting tha wese meine phele ke part to read nahi kiye hai abhi tak per ha ab mujhe pm zarror kerna ye story jab tak mein pichle parts read ker lu gi.................but really gud race or bikessssssss to bas ekdum mindblasting di hai tum ne unhe.......... superbbbbbbbb n plzzzzzzz contttt soon.............
suri amazing yaar ye part bohot intersting tha wese meine phele ke part to read nahi kiye hai abhi tak per ha ab mujhe pm zarror kerna ye story jab tak mein pichle parts read ker lu gi.................but really gud race or bikessssssss to bas ekdum mindblasting di hai tum ne unhe.......... superbbbbbbbb n plzzzzzzz contttt soon.............
mein tumhare PM ka wait karogi suri n thnxxxxxxx 4 pm.............
tanu thanku so much.. i'am glad you liked the part.. i'll pm you the first four parts....i'll surely continue soon...😊
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