FF: Santa Cruise Pg7 Pt5 Updated 13/11/20 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago

@punjabi.princes- thnx a lot!

@Jaslove- mmmmm if he kills her her bhoot will booooooooooooooooooh him away!!!! hope u liked it!! tomm connections is cuming up!
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
i liked it..........it was comical.......santa cruz is synonymous with slugs. maybe you could use slug for ranbir somtime.

thanx for the pm.

by the way to get a good burger one has to drive about 45 min into st to get to in n out.........so  did kanya and friends go shopping at valley fair mall or stroll around santana row.
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Posted: 15 years ago
I love their second meeting
Ha ha Ranbir got scared
Awesome update
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wooow dear......👏
 
 
loved it......😳
 
 
amazing update dear.....😳
 
 
luv diya
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Posted: 15 years ago
rhabku for da pm ir was amazing update
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ everybody! thnx a lottttt!!! me very happy!!!
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
good good good
and once again good
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 4- Finally the cruise

Kanya comes out of the room wearing a blue tank top and white capri. She is smiling.

Sonia- Cant believe it!

Kanya- Cant believe what?

Sonia- That we are finally leaving for the cruise today and you are smiling.

Kanya- Oh. I actually feel happy.

Sonia- So happy. You want a hug?

Kanya- Sure.

They hug.

Kanya- God knows but I feel so happy these days. Patah nahin kya huwa? I feel something has finally taken my mind off all the trauma that kept me depressed.

Sonia- Must be the cruise thought!

Kanya- Guess so!

Sonia- Shan! Kripz! Come here!

They both come.

Kripa- Kya huwa Sonia?

Sonia- Look (pointing at a smiling Kanya)

Kripa- Kanya you are smiling!

Kanya- Yes Kripz!

Shanaya- You called her Kripz!

Kanya- So what Shan? She is my best friend!

Shanaya- You have returned to normal my girl!

Kanya- Yeah'''..guess so''''sort of'.

Kripa- Right in time for the cruise! Me so happy! I will make some ande ki curry!

Kanya- I will frown if you do!

Kripa- Okay I wont. Let me give the good news to Sunny. Sunny! Awwo!

Sunny- Kya hain ?

Kripa- Kanya is smiling again! Ooooh. I am so happy!!!!

Sunny- That's awesome Kan! A hug?

Kanya- Sure!

They also hug.

Sonia- Now guys get ready we have to leave for the cruise in one hour!

Kanya- Yeah! I have to wear my new gown.

Shan- Someones going trendy again!

Kanya- Yes.

Kanya goes inside to wear her gown. She wears the following gown-

AN HOUR LATER

All of them are ready to leave for the cruise. They are in the car. Kripa's and Sunny's driver drives them over to the deck. They all stop at a fancy place to eat. The girls sit on one side while Sunny sits alone on the other side.

Sunny- Unfair''''''''''its so unfair!

Kripa- Whats unfair?

Sunny- I am sitting her alone!

Shan- Kripz go sit with him! He is your husband!

Kripa- I wanna sit with you guys!

Kanya- Go!

Kripa- K.

Kripa goes and sits with Sunny. They all eat their meals.

AT THE ENTRANCE OF THE CRUISE

The 5 of them are greeted by Col. McCurdy the owner of the ship.

Col.- Hello! Miss. Kapoor, Miss. Kher, Mrs. Roy and Mr. and Mrs. Rathore welcome to Santa Cruise the most awesome christmas cruise ever!

Kanya- Thankyou Col. McCurdy.

Col.- I swear you all have the time of you lives!

Kanya- I sure hope so!

Col.- Delcie!

Delcie is Col. McCurdy's assistant.

Del- Yes Colonel?

Col.- Take these guests to their repective rooms.

Del- Sure Col.

Col.- You may all go to your rooms with Delcie my assistant.

Delcie takes Kanya and the rest to their rooms.

Kanya and Kripa are sharing a room while Shanaya and Sonia are sharing rooms. Sunny is having a room to himself to live up his bachelor life once again.

LIGHT SNACK TIME

They all change into more casual stuff for the light snack. They all are sitting around a round table.

Col.- Ladies and Gentlemen! Look here!

All of the guests look at him.

Co.- Let me introduce you all to a very special guest Ranbir Nanda!!!

Kanya- Ranbir Nanda''..name sounds familiar''Nanda''.(looks up) NO WAY!! Not him.

Sonia and all look at her.

Shanaya- Kya huwa? You know him?

Kanya- YES! Too well! Mann! I wanna leave this ship now!

Sonia- Are you crazy? You agreed to come!

Kanya- Yeah! But I disnt know he would be coming!

Sonia- How did u noe hime?

Kanya- He is such a criminal!

Shan- Husshhh!

Kanya- What??

Shan- Sabko batana zaroori hain kya?

Kanya- What do you mean?

Shan- He is a criminal. He was in jail for 10 years.

Kanya- Holy Cow! No wonder!

Ranbir sees Kanya.

Ranbir- Col.! What is that doing here (pointing at Kanya)?

Col.- That's Miss. Kanya Kapoor our guest!

Ranbir- Uff! What mistake! Why did you call her? She is a skunkback!

Col.- Mr. Nanda I request you not to insult my guests.

Ranbir- Whatever.

Kanya is staring at the ocean when Ranbir comes and stands next to her. She suddenly looks at him.

Kanya- Kya hain?

Ranbir- Why cant I stay here?

Kanya- I will go! Where you are I am so not going to be there!

Kanya walks away from there.

Ranbir laughs like a kid and says- Crazy girl!

Scene fades and the part is over!! That's all! Hope you guys liked it!!! I seriously did enjoyed writing it!!! I want lotsa comments!

END OF PART 4

NIDHEYA

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Posted: 15 years ago
yay me first!!!!!!!
great update
continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update.. i finally caught up.. yay...
pls continue sooon