Ehsaas..Feelings 4 some1 spl.(RN)last udpg164(19/3 - Page 126

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by rituka7


loved it
superb fic
Thanksss Rituka...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by PrincessFlavia


Hi Priya...Hiieee

Awesome fic darling... superb ending... Thank you...

Mai janti hun ki tujhe romantic scenes likhne me problem thi... tune jitna bhi likha hai na mai usse hi shocked thi ki Priya ne ye  kaise likh diya... par jo bhi likha achha likha... bahut hi pyaara tha... tu kya...main khud hi shocked thi...πŸ˜†

Aur kisi bhi writer ko apni fic ki story change nahi karni chahiye...kyunki aisa karne se uski khud ki creativity khatam ho jaati hai... likhne ka mann nahi karta... aur agar writer ko likhne ka mann na kare to fir readers ko kaise achha lagega... Jaisa ki mere saath ho raha hai... I appreciate ur stand... mujhe pata hai tu aisa kuch nahi karegi..kyoun ke Rocket Singh ko main janti hun...!!! wo wohi karti hai jo use thik lage...πŸ˜ƒ

Fic khatam ho gaya iss baat ka dukh hai mujhe.,... par start karne se jyada shuru na khatam karna hota hai... bahut hi pyaari story thi...aur bahut hi pyaara sa safar...aur iss story ne hume humari sweet lioness jo di hai... aur isi story ke through mujhe tum sab bhi toh mile...πŸ€—hala ke tu thoda late aayi...par aayi toh sahi...πŸ˜† 

Excellent job... ab baaki ki fics bhi update karti raho... wo toh main karr hi rahi hun...par aap ka update kab hoga...

Love
Guglu 
Thanksss Guglu...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by nihatri


so sweet
Thanxxx Dear...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -purnima-


lovely part ... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Thank you...
...was waiting for it πŸ˜›πŸ˜› ...& also for Raj's GIFT πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

...lovely end to lovely FF πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ... wil miss Rajveer πŸ˜”... but no worries ...have other rajveer too 😳😳 (TN & ankahi ) πŸ˜†πŸ˜† TN bhi khatam ho gaya hai...abhi bass Maj saab hain...apne action me...
... but this one was special ..as he was more fun loving & mischevious 😳😳 ...& made me smile throughout FF πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ... & never made me cry 😊... ye meri first fic thi na...isi liye maine ise khushi khusi likha tha...isi liye raj bhi khush rehta tha...aur sab ko hassata rehta tha...!!! par baki ke fics ke bare me aur kya kahun...πŸ˜†


Raj ke gift dene ka tareeka was good πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘..bechari naina ko pareshaan kar diya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... packet mein packet .packet mein packet πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... poor girl πŸ˜†πŸ˜† but must say she got understanding husband πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ... ab hum jo bhi rajeev se pyar karte hai...wo rajeev ko sab se achha hi toh dikhane ki koshish karte rehte hain...!!! toh main kaise chut jati...πŸ˜† 

I wonder Raj ki ghadi 5 ghante late kyun thi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... yeh kartoot bhi unhi mahatma ki thi yaar...πŸ˜† 

Raj was too much 🀣... naina kahani sunna chahti thi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...& shadi ke baad bhi KKji & raj ne ek dusre ko tang karna nahi choda πŸ˜†πŸ˜† umar gujar jati hai...par inshan apni fitrat thode hi na chodta hai...πŸ˜†

bful song in the end πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘... & raj's dream was good too πŸ˜›πŸ˜›... sapna raj en dekha hai toh...achha hi hoga na...Tongue

so ab is FF ke liye toh continue soon nahi keh sakti ... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...but yes continue ur others sooner πŸ˜›πŸ˜›... & will be expecting new soon πŸ˜›πŸ˜› new toh ek start bhi kiya hai...jo jyada lamba fic nahi hoga...πŸ˜‰
😊
Thanksss Purnima...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by danish1


very very lovely end
Thanksss Afreen...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by backy


HY PRIYA !!!!!!!!!!😊 hiiieee Esha...

the last update was absolutely rocking, sweet,cute and
romantic☺️. i love the gift sene 😍 sooo
ooo
ooo
ooo
ooo...)much !!!!!!!!!!!
🀣🀣🀣
🀣🀣 he he he... Thankkk you...πŸ˜†
i just love happyendingsss πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ mere sare fics me happy endings hi hote hain...!!! ab vaise bhi life me kamm prob hain jo main apne fics me bhi tragic ending rakhun...πŸ˜†

of course i am gonna miss this fiction 😭really bad but as u say har fiction ka end hota hai😭(hmmm zyada hi emotional comment de diya tha main ne pehle) haan...par sahi bhi hai na...hum kisi chiz ko agar jyada khinchege toh wo uss ka asli charm kho deta hai...!!! aur Ehsaas ki khushbu khatam hone se pehle maine uss pe THE END ka board laga diya...taake hum sabhi mushkurate rahe...aur koi drama na ho...πŸ˜†

but i am happy πŸ˜ƒ because tumhara sirf yeh fic band ho raha hai baki fic to abhi bhi chal rahee hai.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› i know ke wo bhi kabhi na kabhi band ho jai ge!!!!!!!!!!😭 TN khatam ho chuka hai...par Ankahi n WILYS toh chalu hai na...πŸ˜ƒ

take care and a bigggg bye😊


Thanksss Esha...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by dazzling_glory


Hey Hiieee...
Update was too good. Thank you...
How I wish that this was not the last part. I have enjoyed reading this fiction thoroughly...reading about all of Raj's pranks and the humour between him and his father. mere liye yeh fic kafi khaash tha...after all ye mera first RN fic tha...toh aap samajh sakte ho...!!! par her achhi aur buri chiz ka ek din toh END hota hi hai na...
Coming to the part
Raj enjoys teasing naina very much. The milk scene was too funny, naina ko uski zarurat thi...to open all those boxes to finally reach the ring. He enjoys seeing all of naina's expressions. He loves and cares for her unconditionally. par raj baaz nahi aaya... apni herkat se...
Raj apni masti kabhi nahi chodta. He embarrasses naina in front of all'but his mom comes to naina's rescue. Raj apne dad ko chidhane ke liye unke samne sara khana chakh raha tha. But uske dad bhi kuch kaam nahi hai, unhone naina aur sudhaji ki madad se, raj ko phasa liya. He was quite upset about this, ab hamesha apne dad ko ullu banata tha...aur ek din khud bann gaya toh use bura toh lagna hi hai na...
Both of them are very much in love and this is what binds them together. Raj chahe kitni bhi nautanki kare..but his love her naina is very modest. tabhi toh woh Naina ko change karr paya...
Raj realizes that naina is feeling shy and nervous in the morning and so he jokes with her to make her comfortable. He will always keep his naina happy. ab naina uss ka present aur future jo hai...!!! ab naina ko wo jitna khush rakhega...utna hi achha hoga na uss ke liye...
And so they have started their life together..and finally Ehsaas has come to end. yesss...finallyyy...ha ha ha...
Thanks for making us laugh with all of Raj's masti. Loved his character. Thank you...
Waiting to read many more of such stories from you.
Take care.
Nisha
Thanksss Nisha...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by pinka28


Kahne ka to faida nahi hai .. kyonki tu last post ker chuki hai aur main 33 ka reply ker rahi hun..Par kya hai na yaar OFFice k chakker mein time jra kam milta ha...Islye tujhe mujhe maaf kerna hi hoga... koi na yaar...tu busy hai...isiliye toh late hui na...itz okay...πŸ˜ƒ

khair back to ud

EPISODE:-33

Ye afat kisse dar rahi hai .. aur dar khud rahi hai aur dra alekh ko rahi hai niche..  ye ladki ki halat ka description sun ker ahsas hua ki ab kuch kand hone vala hai..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† night gown . wah bhai.. ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

Cid ke daya ka naam sun ker mujhe gana yaad aa gaya  amiro ka diwala bade dilwala..he heπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

Lo ye bachaane vale ko mujrim bna rahi hai ..inspector ko chor suna rahi hai.. ladki hai lakdi jab dekho jaldti aur jalati rahti hai.. he he I know rym nahi kiya par mere dimag mein ise afat ka naam sun yahi ata hai.. nahi yaar...rym karr raha hai...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

Rehersal.. had hai yaaar .. khoda pahad nikla chuha.. infact yahan to chuha bhi nahi tha? haan chuha ke naam par Nupoor thi...πŸ˜†

Main bhi soch rahi thi ki ladki ko dekh isse kuch bhi dab vaan khtre se khali nahi .. galti se sir ki jgah hath phisal gaya aur gale par phuch gaya to toh main kis liye hoon...πŸ˜†

Wah bhai hero aur heroin ka kya scene hai.. hero khud misbehave krega aur likhe kis mahan ne RAJVEER ji neπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘. kisliye nari jati ki power vo bhi aise ..aisa khyal useke dimag mein hi aa sakta hai.. tabhi toh aaya na...aur khaash apni sis ke liye likha bhi...πŸ˜†

Alekh:- "tum us hero ki izaat lut leti ho...hai na...???"🀣🀣🀣🀣

Ohk this line was totally hilarious.. you know why .. maine ye update office hours mein padi thi au rise padhte hi meir hasi chut gayi.. infact mere tl bhi meri traf mud ker dekh raha tha ki..ye kya hua priyanka ko.. mujhe finally iseko minimizekerna pada.. taki koi dekh na le.. he he.. tune to marwa diya tha priya hadh hai yaar...tu mujhe badnam karr ke rahegi...πŸ˜†

Utha ker shadi kerna? I agree hero ko utha ker shadi koi nahi ker sakta.. aur mujhe bhi alkeh ke sath yakin ho gaya ki ye veer ki hi bhen hai.. ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

Alekh:- "sorry...main purane khayalon ka ladka hun...!!! isiliye door khula rakh kar tumhai izzat nahi lut sakta...isiliye...!!!"🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

Tune aaj decide kiya tha na ki  t.l. se baar ajib garib look dilwayegi.. her was looking at me ki ise hua kya hai. .. pahle to laga ki purane khyalo ka matalb shayd ladki ki izzat keren ki bat ker raha hai.. par actually vo to izzat lutne ki baat ker raha tha.. ab aas paas ke logo se hi toh apne upar asar hota hai na...!!! ab alekh ka best frnd raj hai n girl frnd Nupoor...toh bichare pe kya asar hoga bolo...πŸ˜†

Ab ye ho kya rha hai? mere sir ke upper se ja raha hai.. hot .. bhai ye sachi alekh se amrish puri to nahi ban gaya na.. nahi...πŸ˜†

Lo ise ladki ko to kuch jyad hi bhrosa hai.. vaise apna alekh hai bada sidha..  khair ye life ke hero ka kya matlab haiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Main aur nahi pad rahi mujhe hasi rokna mushkil ho gaya hai.. alekh ko punch .. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†ye jrure RAJ hoga.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† haan...wohi hai...πŸ˜†

Khair by for now .. pata chala mera tl aker meri band na bja de..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† tu bhi  na office me ud padh rahi thi...pagal hai kya...πŸ˜†

shayd sham tak dhire dhire ker pad paun ye ud

par abhi tak to din tune muskurahto se bhar diyaπŸ€—thank you pinka...πŸ€—



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