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A good way to tell Mallika's void. Loved how you have shown her plight and follies that turned into her own loneliness for life!
Ashu's life is going smoothly with his and Armaan's kids and one adopted one - Khushi. I loved his care for his family and not giving them any advantage of his reputation!
Liked to see how he felt and respond to Mallika! And to his own teachers and fellows, he was embarrassed enough to see his life coming openly to his kids 😳
Lovely going dear 👏 loving the story and your narration is too fine ⭐️
Keep the good story going, am liking the flow though it's a sad side for mallika and seems her shattered life for all she did to get Ashu in her life!
Luv ya sweetie ❤️🤗
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