Gunahon Ka Devta

FF YOU ARE MINE Part-4 "Wen I lvd U-IV"page-19 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg
just love
child love na
wowww
waiting for next one ha

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt dr.😊

waiting fr the next. 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
The beauty and innocence of childhood love...
That part was really sweet Jo...
Makes me all the more excited to know what lead to the breakage of such a beautiful bond...
Loved the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: yoga23priya

res as usual


will edited later 


n m waiting as usual😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Sidda8

Neha Darling, this update is amazing. I loved Avita's past. So both of their parents are close friends. Childhood memories are the most precious for people and Avi's memories are full of Arpi. Aww, Arpi is so possessive of Avi and she wouldn't share him. So Avi did love Arpi and still does, but something she did has made him eager to seek vengance against her. I'm sure he will sabotage Arpi's shaadi with Pappu. It is so sad Arpi lost her mom at a young age. Btw, does Avi still have the heart locket? Please update soon.


thanx for linking it dear Siddu
yap its true n not only Avi's childhood memories even his whole life is full of Arpi n her thoughts😳

yap he want to give her back what he give her 'Pain'

sweety this locket have importent place in this story u will find it in next update😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: joliefille


thanx for linking it dear Siddu
yap its true n not only Avi's childhood memories even his whole life is full of Arpi n her thoughts😳

yap he want to give her back what he give her 'Pain'

sweety this locket have importent place in this story u will find it in next update😉


WAITING EAGERLY dr



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Posted: 12 years ago
Myyy Nehaaa😳😳😳😳😳😳😳


Fabulously done update👏👏👏👏👏

They are childhood sweethearts..Hmmm😳😳😳  Awww..Cho chweet😳

Jo..hats off for this wonderful concept darling😳

Avi loves her still...But does Arpi also loves him?? I Hope she does..

ye toh fact hai ki pappu se Arpi ki shaadi toot jayegi😉

The song was just perfect for the situation...Very well written Jo...

The last lines were beautiful😳😳😳 waah..meri sweetie pie👏👏




Update it sooon..Im eagerly waiting for their meeting

Love ya😳

PS:Updated my res posts on page 2 and 5😳




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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Kalitondra

Chutki where is the nxt ?😆😊



Di Next is done

will give it Pre soon 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: KriYa_life


Hey SP
AMAZING update..
So woh dono frnds hai.. Oops, i mean they were frnds.
Feeling sad for Arpi.

I hope things wont worsen when they meet



Oye CP
thanx nahi bolungi chal bata where is Deewngi UD haan😛

oh ho u are still sticking at Friends hehe

u are feeling bad for  Arpi are yaar next me tera kya hoga CP😆

btw u should have sympathy for Avi too😳

don't expect too much love this time like Desire this time its going to be different😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: danno

omggg
just love
child love na
wowww
waiting for next one ha


Hey Sharu dear

thanx for liking it 😳

hope you will like the next too😊