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LOVE STORIES part 18 Fun moments pg 27 (Page 9)

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Love Stories........

Part 9: The journey begins

Next day, in the boys' room, everybody had got ready, except for one.Dharam was taking a long time to get ready.

V: Sia ko rujhane (impress) karne ke liye itna kuch….

D: Chup bhi karo Veer.

P: Nahi bhaiya, Veer sahi keh raha hai. Aap kabhi taiyaar hone ke liye itna samay nahi lagate.

     Dharam blushes and goes red in the cheeks.

     The girls were all ready by now and went down to the garden to meet the boys. In a few moments the boys also arrived. Dharam kept gazing at his beautiful rajkumari. Sia wore a beautiful blue lehenga with golden border and golden matching jewellery. Ananya wore a yellow lehenga with matching yellow jewellery. Kiran was wearing a red lehenga with white jewellery. They all looked gorgeous.

A: Ladke toh ghode pe chale jaayenge, lekin agar hum palki mein jaayenge toh hum toh unse bahot peeche reh jaayenge.

S: Toh kya karein?

K: Kyun naa hum rajkumaron ke saath unhi ke ghode pe jaayein.

A&S: Kya?

            Sia was quite glad, but Ananya was totally opposite.

D: Haan…. Hum aise jaa sakte hain. Hum aise jaldi bhi pahunch paayenge.

S: Hum Dharam ke saath jaayenge.

K: Aur hum Pratik ke saath.

S: Ananya, tum Veer ke saath chalo…. theek hai?

A: Theek hai…. (she was not at all ready)

            Dharam, Veer and Pratik helped the princesses to climb the horses.

            Sia held on to Dharam's shoulder tightly. Dharam liked it. Kiran was very scared. She held on to Pratik's shoulder tightly and even put her head on his shoulder without thinking about it even once. Pratik felt very awkward about this but didn't say anything.

            They were about to start when Veer's horse tried to give a high jump. Ananya got scared and quickly clutched Veer's shoulder. After Veer got control over the horse, she realized what she had done and let go of his shoulder. Both Veer and Ananya felt very weird about the recent happenings. Ananya was infact very embarrassed. But Veer knew it would be very difficult to ride behind someone, without atleast holding the shoulder of the one infront. And now he wasn't going to be rude to any princess, not after the long lecture Dharam had given last night.

V: Dekho… tum chaho to apna haath mere kandhe pe rakh sakti ho, nahi to itne lambe safar pe tum aise hi zyaada der tak nahi jaa paaogi.

Ananya was shocked to see Veer talking so politely.

A: Nahi… hum theek hain (she thinks: yeh kabse itna acha ho gaya)

V: Dekho zidd mat karo. Tumhari hifazat karma aaj meri zimmedari hai, aura b main apni zimmedariyon ko nazar andaaz nahi kar sakta.

She hesitates a bit but then agrees. She slowly move her hand on to Veer's shoulder and they start off.


            Pratik was ahead of everyone as he was the best horse rider.

K: Thoda dheere chalao Pratik.

P: Kyon…. Darr lag rahi hai?

K: Haan….

            Kiran was looking very tensed.

P: Hum hain naa tumhare saath. Tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.

            Kiran is stunned to hear these words of Pratik. All of a sudden all her fears flew away. She felt that nothing could happen to her. She felt protected. But, why was there such a change in her. Who brought the change? Yes, it was Pratik. It was him who made her fearless, fell protected and feel that nothing could happen to her as long as he is with her. But Kiran couldn't understand what was going on with her. She kept staring at Pratik with passion in her eyes. She wished she could always remain like that. Their horse came to a sudden halt. Kiran bumped into Pratik, and broke out of her thoughts and dreams.

K: Kya hua, ruk kyun gaye?

P: Shaam hone waali hai. Humare khayal se hume yahin ruk ke doosron ka intezaar karma chahiye. Lagta hai hum sabko raat bhar yahin rukna hoga.

            They both dismounted their horse and sat under a tree for some rest. It was a nice place. It had a few trees here and there and was a perfect place for camping.

            A little distance away Dharam and Sia were riding on their horse. They did not utter a single word all along. It was only the silent winds which spoke between them. Dharam had been simply awed by Sia's beauty. Her presence made him feel so special. He didn't want these moments to pass out. He felt like the happiest person that day.

    On the other hand Sia was awfully struck by Dharam's features. She had never seen a man like him before. As he was riding, she felt like she was flying, or was it just her presence which made her feel like that. She was so confused. She had always dreamt of her sapno ka rajkumar from her childhood, that someone would come and take her away on his horse in just the same way. She had only met him since one day, but it seemed as if she knew him for ages and ages.

     They kept on riding, Dharam happy about Sia's presence and Sia confused about her feelings.

            After some time they met Ananya and Veer, who were having a very hard time with each other. Neither of them had been talking to the other. Both of them had set a bad impression on the other from their first meeting and didn't forget it. They were very much relieved to see Dharam and Sia.

            In a few moments, they reached Pratik and Kiran.

K: Pratik dekho who aa gaye.

Pratik gets up and runs to them.

V: Kahan reh gaye the tum sab? Itni der kaise laga di?

V: Kya karein, mere chote bhai, tumhare jaise ache ghod sawar thodi hain.

K: Aur tez bhi, yeh to ghode ko itni tez bhaga raha tha, ki hum toh darr hi gaye the.

A: Lo… Ismein kaunsi nayi baat hai, duniya mein aisi koi cheez hai jisse tumhe darr naa lagta ho…..

K: Ananya!!!!

S: Ab bas bhi karo tum dono. Jab dekho jhagadte rehte ho…. Ab yeh bataao ki aage kya karenge.

D: Karna kya hai...hume raat yahin guzarni padegi.

V: Nahi hum chahe to yahan ek tamboo(tent) bana sakte hain.

P: Bilkul sahi kaha tumne.

D: Who bhi pehli baar.

Everyone laughs, but Veer is cross.

S: To phir theek hai, ladke rehne ke liye tamboo banayenge aur hum aur Kiran khane ka intezaam karte hain.

A: Aur main kya karoongi?

S: Tum ladko ki madat karma. Agar tum khana banane gayi, toh shayad hum sabko puri raat bhookha rehna pade.

A: Bas haan……. Bahot bol liya.

         She was very angry on Sia for saying this. Sia and Kiran left to gather and prepare some food.

D: Chalein, Rajkumari Ananya.

A: Haan.

            They all set off to find some logs and leaves. They had to build up two tents, one for boys and one for girls. So, Dharam decided that he and Pratik would work on one and Veer and Ananya on the other. He did this on purpose as he wanted to see what effects his lectures had made on Veer.

            Later when Veer and Ananya were working together, Veer put his hand on a log and Ananya was also going to pick up the same log, so her hand landed on Veer's. Veer was surprised and Ananya realized what she had done. She slowly removed her hand. She felt very embarrassed, and, hurried off to complete some other work.  She was working hard and Veer was quite surprised to see this.

V: Manna padega, tum apna kaam badi lagan ke saath karti ho.

M: Mujhe yeh sab karne mein maza aata hai.

V: Phir toh tum mere bilkul takkar ki ho….

A: Pehli baar takraane ka anjaam to yaad hai naa… ya who bhi bhool gaye?

V: Sab yaad hai, aur aaj main bilkul taiyaar bhi hoon, tumhe harane ke liye.

A: Acha…. Toh phir theek hai, nikalo apni talwaar aur mera mukabla karo…...

Precap: Ananya looses to Veer
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Posted: 16 August 2008 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
verry nice parrt
i loved it
plz update soon
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 2:25am | IP Logged
thanks for the lovely update..hmmm Ananya loosing to veer interesting
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Posted: 17 August 2008 at 2:59am | IP Logged
woow...simply wonderful part...i loved it!  im excited abt da prtecap hehe...LOLLOLLOLupdate soon
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it was soooo romantic yaar i loved it the preview seems intresting plz cont....
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wow!! its too good.....
i really liked this part
and now veer ananya fight and ananya loses...
am soo excited .....plz update it soon

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