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LOVE STORIES part 18 Fun moments pg 27 (Page 7)

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Superb!!!!.... keep it up Clap...

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it was great update
plz continue soon
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Part 7
Some brotherly moments
Well, after Veer had left Ananya's room, he had gone straight to the guest room, where he and his brothers were to stay.He practised with his sword there for a long time.
    Later in the evening, they were all called for dinner.
In the dining room, all were seated around the large table.Maharaj at the front.
Sv:To kaisa raha rajkumaro ka pehla din  Avdhi mein.
D&P:Bahot acha.
Sv:Aur Veer tumhara...
V:Acha(He managed to give a smile)
In his mind:Kahe ka acha.Is ghamandi rajkumari ne to mera din bigaad ke hi rakh diya.Dharam aur Pratik isse nahi mile hain, isliye itna uchal rahe hain.Agar mile hote to samajh mein aata.
Siya(S):Dharam aur hum aaj Avdhi ke mahamele ke baare mein baat kar rahe the. Hum soch rahe the ki kyon naa hum kal hi nikle.Bahot maza aayega agar hum sab wahan saath chalein.Kyon?
D:Haan(He was just staring at her lovingly)Day Dreaming
K:Yeh to bahot achi baat hai.Hum teeno to har saal wahan jaate hain.Is saal, Aryanagar ke rajkumar bhi humare saath honge.
P:Maharaj,kya hume aagya hai?
Sv:Bilkul......Kyon nahi.......
All of them were very rejoiced except for Veer and Ananya.They didn't at all want to spend time together.Veer decided that he would remain with his brothers and Ananya thought that she would stay with her sisters.
After dinner they all went to their respective rooms.
In the boys' room
D:Humara din to aaj bahot acha tha.
V:Hoga hi, pura din Sia ke saath jo the.
   Dharam gave a wide blush.
D:Wo to theek hai, lekin, tum itne murjhe(dried) hue kyon lag rahe ho.
V:Rajkumari Ananya ki wajah se.Pata nahin log use rajkumari kaise kehte hain.Kahin ki ghamandi, sirphiri, nakchadhi, ziddi..............
P:Bas, bas, bas.Ek din mein us bechari ki itni burai kar doge.
V:Bechari! Kahin ki bechari nahi lagti mujhe.
D:Par hain to hum uske mehmaan hi.Unki izzat karna humara farz hai.
V:To tum karo uski izzat, main nahi karne wala
D:Jo bhi ho.Wo itni bhi buri nahi ho sakti.Uski behne agar itni achi hain to.....
P:Bhaiya bilkul sahi keh rahe hain Veer.Rajkumari Kiran bhi bahot achi hai.Hume nahi lagta ki uski behen itni bhi buri ho sakti hai.
         Veer gets furious.
V:Main yahan Ananya ki burai kar raha hoon, aur tum dono Sia aur Kiran ke gun-gaan gaa rahe ho.Tum dono pehle mere bhai ho yaa unke dost.
D:Acha theek hai.Tum hume shuru se bataao ki kya hua tha.
     Veer narrates the whole incident.
P:To yeh baat hai.
V:Haan.......Ab tum hi bataao, ki kaun galat hai, main ya woh.
Precap:Dharam says a few very important things to Veer.
SmileI'm sorry this is a very short part, but i don't have the time now.I'll try updating on friday.Smile
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hi kiran
nice update yaarClap
veer is very ghamandi!!ROFL
and kiran soo sweet ,i really liked her...Clap

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great jobClapi cant wait for friday anyways thanks
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it was sooooooooo sweet i loved it do cont

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