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LOVE STORIES part 18 Fun moments pg 27 (Page 6)

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it was mind blowing plz cont....

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amazing partTongue....good work dearClap
Clap the dias were really very goodEmbarrassedClap
Clapsia is really very sweetEmbarrassed
am really waiting to know what would happen when veer and ananya will meet..............EmbarrassedLOLLOL
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Nice update kiran.....Very cute......update soon...will want to no what happens when Veer and Ananya meet. ure sia is really cute..
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thanks for all your comments. i'll surely update on monday. sorry for the internet is not co-operating with me. if not monday,i'll try my best to do it as soon as possible.
sorry guys...Cry

Edited by kiran_baidya - 03 August 2008 at 6:00am
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Love Stories...........
Part 6
Veer aur Ananya ki pehli taqraar
On the other side of the mehel,Kiran was showing the rajkumars,Veer and Pratik different places of the palace.
V:Maine to suna tha ki aap teen behne hain.To tumhari teesri behen kahan hai?
K:Wo abhyaas kar rahi hai.
V:Kya abhyaas?
K:Hathyaaron ka abhyaas
K:Haan..Humari didi ko in cheezon ka bahot shauk hai
V:Acha, phir to mujhe usse milna hi chahiye.
P:Veer, tum yahan par bhi shuru mat ho jaana.
V:Pratik, tumhe to pata haina, ki yeh Veer kabhi nahi sudhrega.Phir koshish to chod hi do.
Pratik is always irritated when Veer starts showing off.
P:Sach mein.Tumhe to sirf Dharam Bhaiya hi sambhal sakte hain.
V:Shayad........(with a naughty smile)
K:Aiye, hum aapko Ananya ke paas le chalte hain.
The three of them reach a large room in which Ananya was practicing with her sword.
K:Ananya,ye dono rajkumar Veer aur Pratik hain.
Ananya stopped and turned around.Her face was  full of sweat, but still she looked so admirable, full of life.
Veer told Pratik and Kiran, as he wanted to talk to Ananya alone.So they left.
V:Rajkumari Ananya, manna padega, aap bahot acha talwarbaazi kar leti hain.
A:Shukriya(She answered in a very formal tone, she wasn't ever interested in talking too much with boys.)
V:Waise, aur kya,kya kar leti hain aap.
A:Aazmaa ke dekh lijiye.Aisa shayad hi kuch hoga, jo aapko aata ho, aur mujhe nahi.
V:To phir theek hai.Nishane baazi(archery) se shuru karte hain.
A:Kyon nahi ...... Chaliye, teeron se baatein karte hain.
       First they were going to hit a target.Ananya's arrow hit right in the centre, but veer's arrow was quite far from that.Next they tried aiming a toy parrot in the eye.Ananya hit the eye, but Veer couldn't.Veer was slowly getting angry.Next, they tried aiming a flying bird, with closed eyes and open ears.Ananya easily succeeded but was once again unsuccessfull He was very furious by now.After all he was the best archer in Aryangar, and now he was loosing to 'a girl'.
A:Kyon Rajkumar Veer, dekh liya, ya aur kuch dekhna baaki hai.
Veer noticed that this girl was not like others. She was full of confidence and determination.
V:Tum aur ladkiyon jaisi nahi ho.
A:Lekin tum aur ladko jaise zaroor ho, jo ladkiyon ko kamzor samajhte hain.Apni taaqat par ghamand karte hain aur sahi waqt aane par choohe(mouse) se bhi battar nikalte ho.
V:Aae ghamandi.......
A:Tumhe to rajkumariyon se baat karni tak nahi aati.Pehle kahin se seekh ke aao ki ache se baat kaise karte hain, phir mujhse mukabla karna.
A:Waise agli baar tum mukable mein haar na jao, is liye main tumhe ek salah dena chahti hoon.Tum shuru se hi mujhe harana chahte the, aur main jeetna chahti thi.Agar harane ke jagah, jeetne pe zyaada dhyaan lagate, toh shayad jeet tumhari hoti.........Samjhe?
    Veer was fuming with rage now.He didn't like hearing lectures from adamant girls. He stormed out of the room without uttering a single word.
A:Nalayak, ghamandi rajkumar(she smirks)
In the other side of the Palace Gardens
Kiran was showing Pratik the part of the garden where the domestic animals were kept.They were passing a horse stable.
P:Waise, hume ghode ke doud lagana bahot pasand hai.Aur pata hai, aaj tak hume koi isme hara nahi paaya hai.
K:Acha, phir to hume ek din dekhna hi hoga.
P:Dekh lena.(He had a wide smile on his face)
Seriously, these rajkumars of Aryanagar are really fond of showing off.
Kiran throws some seeds on the ground for the pigeons to eat. Pratik helps her.They have a lot of fun.Kiran picks one of the birds and throws it in the air.It flys away and Kiran keeps looking at it with joy.Pratik can't find anything but to admire the young girl's grace.
K:Dekh kya rahe ho, humari madat karo...
Slowly they feed all the pigeons and run all fly away.After that Kiran saw a rabit and started running after it to catch it.Pratik couldn't help but laugh seeing the scenerio.Then he got an idea.
God knows from where he got those carrots.He just spread the carrots here and there in the garden.Within no time, all the rabbits came out of their respective places.There were rabbits everywhere now.Kiran was very surprised.She came to Pratik and asked,"Yeh sab kaise hua?"
       Pratik showed her a rabbit munching on the delicous carrot.Kiran slowly understood what must have happened and then let out a very cheerful laugh.
K:Aur yeh sab tumne kiya?
Pratik nodded his head in agreement.
K:Iska matlab tumhe bhi khargosh(rabbit) pasand hain...
Kiran then replied with a cute smile on her face:Phir to hume dost zaroor banna chahiye.
P:Iska matlab abtak hum dost nahi the....
K:Nahi....humara matlab hai haan........humara matlab.....(she then laughs and leaves it)
Pratik also joins her laughter.
P:Tum hasti hui bahot sundar lagti ho.
P:Doston ko shukriya nahi kehte.
K:Theek hai(she smiles)
Pratik forwards his hand and says:To aajse hum dost?
Kiran shakes her hand with his and says:Sabse ache dost.
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Posted: 05 August 2008 at 5:52am | IP Logged
awww dts soo cute..shame abt Veer n Ananya lool..its gona b fun watchin dem hehe...cheers
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Posted: 05 August 2008 at 9:11am | IP Logged
LOLLOL so sweet update! really nice!
kiran and pratik now friends, im eagerly waiting for their love story more than others.Day Dreaming
And poor veer.....but itna ghamand! lol, i wonder his mood after "the encounter" wid ananya
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Posted: 05 August 2008 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
it was fab

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