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I Died For You (AR)pg16 sneak peek into murder 7/3 (Page 7)

forevercharmed IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 11:34am | IP Logged
awwwwww!! great part ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap pplease continue soon! Embarrassed

Avanti
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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pwincess kanzi

really interstin  prt! so ridz tried killin her self but she didn't wana die! so wried lol! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!
 
well is it ridz? and many ppl who commit suicide find they don't actually want to die whn the push comes to the shove, but in many cases it's too late
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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 11:47am | IP Logged

Originally posted by cool_SK

hey arati dear

nice part luvEmbarrassed

so the both girlz diedCry........................but i m feeling like there's gonna be a funny plotWink

are they gonna meet up armaan and rahul out there in heaven...................or they gonna scared them being bhootsWink

funny thoughts commin to mind, but never mind

i know ur fic gonna rock girl................do cont soon with the next partEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

waiting eagerly

luv ya

lolz
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not bad ana, u came pretty close to the plot, the closest yet, but sorry no cigar, LOL but i'm glad u liked it so much

sea_nyx Goldie
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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dmgfan19

hhaaaa!! wats that!! was i seeing a supernatural movie or wat?? its was fantastic...the way u wrote it....i cud see everythg right before my eyes...awesome!!! is it something like heart transplant? the one who committed suicide loves armi n this gal will start feeling for her??? i m realy wired to read ur next part...plz pm me
 
i'm soo glad u liked it since 'loves me, loves me not' is one of my fav ffs. well u came close, but not completely. the part was a bit actually a lot delayed but here it is finally.
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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by forevercharmed

wow that was intense!! ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap  could you please PM me when you update? Embarrassed
 
 
Avanti
 
thanx and i'm already on itWink 
perfectpiscean IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 12:08pm | IP Logged

OMG...After this part...Im absolutely speechless!

U deserve a standing ovation!
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I absolutely loved the way u wrote about heaven...especially not mentioning the word 'hell'
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OMGShocked...Riddhima dint want 2 die and she did?? Dats sad!OuchEmbarrassed
But the 'glitch' part int he system cracked me up!LOLLOLLOL

And now Riddhi going back as Riddhima!
Brilliant work!Clap

Am absolutely stunned with ur work!ClapClapEmbarrassed

Im guessing the pair of eyes are Armaan!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Cant wait 2 see how the story proceedsEmbarrassed...Pleaseeeee continue soon!Embarrassed
And thanks 4 the PM!Embarrassed


*~*Marisha*~*

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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Hey arati

first, i'm gonna say sorry for leaving a short comment....Embarrassed... lol

anywayz an amazing update...it's good to have you back after a long time// and omg what a long part yarr... brava!!!...LOL...lol...

hehe not to mention the 'H' word...loved that particular line...lol

continue soon, and thanks for the pm....
Sidarth_lover1 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
hey i luv tha concept n read tha 2 prtz very interestin do cont soon n plz fel free to PM me!
 
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