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I Died For You (AR)pg16 sneak peek into murder 7/3 (Page 3)

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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 10:02am | IP Logged

*reserved*



Edited by sea_nyx - 05 August 2008 at 11:20am
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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 10:22am | IP Logged
reserved,... YAY i'm FIRSTEvil%20Smile
*EDITED*

Hey Aarti...

i'm soo sorry yaar, for commenting so lateOuch... i feel really bad now... but i'll make it up in the next part, by trying to grab the first place, and commenting first........................... as usualEmbarrassed...i'm seriously getting good at thisLOL...lol

Anyways, enough of my appologies... so back to the part.... WOW!!! Amazing yaar... excellently penned out, and a very long part indeed...lol, i have to tell you when your parts are long and when i'm satisfied!!! *sigh*LOL...

OMG alredy killed TWO people... murderer!!Angry...jkn'... but loved how yoou described them losing their senses, and finally losing themselves (lol) when everything turns a blurOuch

continue soon, can't wait to read more, more and, well... MORE!!!Big smileTongue...lol

Love,
Irsa


Edited by Ravishing_gal - 20 July 2008 at 10:20am
desi_angel101 Senior Member
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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 10:34am | IP Logged
wow this is seriously a really gripping story... One part in and two people are dead! Plzz update soon I am seriously hooked onto it!

Luv Richa
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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 10:39am | IP Logged
ummmmmm wowShocked dat waz interesting 1st prt but i cudnt understand whoz RidzyConfused n all on tha hold it FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!! TongueClapn do cont soon plzzzz PM me!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
        
                           Hearttwinkle!


Edited by twinkle94 - 19 July 2008 at 10:39am
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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Oh my... how depressing Aarti!! You just killed two people! lool... But whatever, the story is EXTREMELY captivating. I wonder why these two stupid girls, right... wanted to die... no wait, the first one did... then whos the second one?
 
Continue soon!!!!
Bissu Senior Member
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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 10:49am | IP Logged
wow this is captivating. im guessing the second girl is ridzi according to the intro?
well i could obviously be wrong.
continue soon!
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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 11:01am | IP Logged
luvd d prt... specially d way u took d strory frm d present 2 d past... d journey of it was gr8888..........
i know der a loads of suspense n mystery..
ridz seems 2 b a mysterioua gurl... omgg d fact dat she s takng drugs. ohhh gosh!!!! can't believe..............
u rocked wid dis prt. thnxx, a lott 4 d pm.. update soon..
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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 11:20am | IP Logged

really a nice one please continue it soon and pm me when u update

 
"Aap rutha na karo humse,
mere dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hain,
dil to aapke naam kar hi chuke hai,
jaan baaki hain woh bhi nikal jaati hai."


Edited by kvn1983 - 19 July 2008 at 11:20am

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