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bhoomikauttam
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Joined: 03 July 2005
Posts: 3255
Hi friends,
This story was my entry in the short story contest 2008. I knew to share with my friends I needed to wait for the resutls and later share with u all my readers and friends. So the results came out finally and I lost as well
, the winners really have done a splendid job yaar..
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So posting my entry story here for u all. A brief of the requirement it had for friends who didnt knew anything about it...
Story to be written in 250 words!
Story Outline :
Imagine……
"You are home alone. It's raining cats and dogs outside and you are feeling rather restless. Between the flashes of lightning and roars of the thunder, the rhythmic "plit plat, plit plat" sound of the falling raindrops entices you to the window. You aimlessly gaze out at the dull gray rain soaked view in front of you and your mind wanders away to another time, another place, another rainy day..."
Next page will have my story!
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bhoomikauttam
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Joined: 03 July 2005
Posts: 3255
"Wishes poured"
Ashiya's family hasn't arrived on her birthday. She looked at the rains, dark clouds tried to locate a year back on this same day.
It had rained heavily, Tree branch was about to fall someone pulled her. Frightened held on to the shirt of the man, found herself in the arms of Meer. She was soaked in water so was he; they sensed body's warm touch that was so comforting. In birthday party, co-incidentally Meer came with a friend. They chatted felt some attraction towards each other. Days followed they would keep meeting. Meer proposed,
"Rains poured from where God stays,He brought u to me in some ways,
I love U, do U?"
Ashiya replied,
"U r someone who made me feel special, Ur love in my life is most essential.I love u."
Meer worked in Bangalore, Ashiya in Pune. She reached Bangalore; he was hassled by her presence not glad. She went feeling he doesn't love her. She switched off her mobile. When switched on Meer called up, "How careless she is!". Ashiya argued, "Does her presence really matter?" They echoed they r getting only pain and called off their relationship.
Back to present, Ashiya cried, "I CANT… I WANT...". The doorbell rang she opened saw Meer. He said, "I CANT… I WANT...I mean…" Ashiya hugged him. Meer gave anklets took her in his arms danced engrossed in love. Family had to break the door to join. They felt rains poured wishes coming true in their lives.
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monikaseth
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Joined: 10 June 2005
Posts: 21497
Welcome back Bhoomi once again you made my day its awesome , mindblowing dear .
bhoomikauttam
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Joined: 03 July 2005
Posts: 3255
Welcome back Bhoomi once again you made my day its awesome , mindblowing dear . Hi Monika dear.. how r u doing? u were gayab from the section for some time na....
Oh am so happy that u liked this short story..heheh.. I made ur day..kuch bhi re... U made My day... by ur sweet reply
as always... u do... tcdear..
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jyothi_cool
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bhoomikauttam
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Hi jyothi dear... so u liked this part, story... when i got such lovely friends and readers like u to encoruage me I feel like a winner always...
another story... i am writing it.. have to complete few more parts later only i will start posting it.. thats my way u know na... soon the next story will be up.... a bit of waiting will be there... tc dear. luv u...
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